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information to appropriate articles can often result in something we shall call proseline (/ˈproʊzlaɪn/ PROHZ-lyne)—segments of articles that attempt to be (and...

Wikipedia:Infobox too large Wikipedia:Listcruft Wikipedia:Out of scope Wikipedia:Proseline Wikipedia:Scope Wikipedia:Too long; didn't read Wikipedia:What Wikipedia...

sourcing, and proseline abound. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 07:31, 21 January 2026 (UTC) I came across this and agree that the proseline and sourcing...

"Funding history" and "Per launch costs" don't have proseline issues). #Criticism also has a bit of proseline. On the other hand, the lede, and "Vehicle description"...

) 03:40, 8 November 2007 (UTC) Template:Proseline (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs) Proseline is not a word and we should not be attempting...

reassessment since 2021. Not quite a GA issue, but the article is full of WP:Proseline. —Femke 🐦 (talk) 12:36, 29 January 2023 (UTC) Delist on lack of detail...

2009 promotion has some statements lacking citations and a lot of WP:PROSELINE issues for events past 2005. I am also not sure about the breadth of coverage...

linked if other dates are to be linked. "International protests" is mostly proseline, so it doesn't flow very well. Perhaps merge some of the paragraphs to...

choppiness of proseline. For these reasons, I do not think that the article completely fits the characteristics of proseline (see Wikipedia:Proseline#What_proseline_is_not)...

series of single paragraph sections, and various sections that read as wp:proseline. CMD (talk) 04:54, 30 May 2021 (UTC) Interesting looking at older revisions...

"2007" read like borderline Proseline. "On this date he did this and this date he did that." It's not the definition of proseline, I admit, but whatever it...

Timelines are often bulleted lists or tables. Timelines in paragraph format (proselines) are not recommended. See Featured list criteria and Wikipedia:Lists as...

removed and instead covered as prose. I was struck by the ubiquitous PROSELINE in the "Support from New York State" section, which also occurs frequently...

wording, or poor organizational style, such as somewhat excessive use of proseline in the beginning section.--Pericles of AthensTalk 21:31, 4 February 2008...

01:52, 15 October 2017 (UTC) Split the 2004 section and got rid of some proseline. Is there anything else that needs doing. AIRcorn (talk) 02:44, 22 March...

referencing, a gap of any events between 2010 and 2019, and major WP:PROSELINE issues in places. Hog Farm Talk 03:03, 18 October 2022 (UTC) The discussion...

choppy prose that needs work to form a cohesive narrative and avoid WP:PROSELINE. I'd recommend going through a peer review process or working with someone...

different stages of his career. That section contains a good deal of proseline, which could be re-written. An infobox would be useful, as would an image...

its text. Other issues include the recent history section entering WP:PROSELINE, other areas having similar dated statements, and the overall article...

references per WP:CITE/ES, a lot of small paragraphs, some which are WP:PROSELINE. Gary King (talk) 22:05, 20 September 2008 (UTC) Removing: please read...

File:Bill Nye Speed Walker Almost Live 1990.jpg is pretty weak. Too much WP:Proseline in other media appearances Same with awards and honours Some of the referenceing...

too much, but it's at least a decent stub now, and it doesn't read like proseline. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshells•Otter chirps) 18:21...

discography have not been addressed, and the later career material has major WP:PROSELINE issues. Hog Farm Talk 14:44, 1 December 2022 (UTC) Issues raised in the...

Template:ProselineTemplate:Proseline → Template:Prose  (talk · links · history · stats)     [ Closure: keep/retarget/delete ]  and related Template:Proseline and...

to parse in many places due to intricate details and suffers from WP:Proseline. Talks about a 2018 plan in the future tense (about concourse A). —Femke...

Biographical films, television series and stage plays - consist entirely of proseline Almost none one of the footnotes have page numbers Maralia (talk) 04:12...

very well cited. I do see an awful lot of one-sentence paragraphs and PROSELINE, but I'm not sure that alone would merit delisting. Trainsandotherthings...

Dabomb87 (talk · contribs): The Journalism Career section reads like proseline; expand the one sentence paragraphs or combine them with other paragraphs...

there. Never assume the reader is an expert in football.  Done Gets a bit proseline, like one- or two-sentence paragraphs, not elegant. ? I'm afraid I don't...

current form it's just not good enough. Lots of really poor wording, WP:PROSELINE, the lede is six paragraphs when it should be a maximum of four, lots...

and poorly attended. The main problem here is the prose. It is pure WP:Proseline. The whole article career section reads like a diary and it could easily...

There are various other uncited statements. Much of this article is WP:Proseline. Once these uncited parts are fixed that would add more citations to the...

March 2022 (UTC) Delete per nom and Anton. This is just press release proseline. User:力 (powera, π, ν) 18:44, 19 March 2022 (UTC) The above discussion...

AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:06, 18 July 2023 (UTC) Very substandard BLP. Mostly proseline. About a quarter of the article by weight is an inflated 'controversy'...

section of the article is somehow covered in the lead. The body is a bit WP:Proseline in parts. Smaller paragraphs should be combined and written so it reads...

also needs consolodating and reformatting; right now its just a bunch of proseline. -Indy beetle (talk) 23:14, 2 June 2020 (UTC) I've removed the fair use...

three months of the year. The "History" section looks like the start of proseline. It also relies on a lot of quotes. Could these be summarized more? When...

looking into the sources, it's disqualified by the fact that it's mostly proseline and excessive lists. And I don't enforce this because I've yet to see...

into WP:PROSELINE and have repetitive sentence structures. Here's a sample from the "Military Career and Presidency" first paragraph (proseline and repetitive...

cringe. I'd be inclined to delete it entirely. The sheer quantity of WP:PROSELINE (which extends beyond the sections on more recent years) is quite damning...

integrity on this 2007 FA on 2022-03-01. The recent sales section is listy proseline, and some of the entries may not comply with WP:NOTPRICE. There are MOS...

prevent content from degrading over time Wikipedia:Proseline – the nephew of recentism, proseline is the tendency to choppy writing, often containing...

section; use it as a model. See how it flows? The jailbreaking section is proseline, and seems like it was conglomerated without order. Be consistent with...

where the prose can be tightened up (the refinement section is mostly proseline) and sourcing seems inadequate in other areas and relies too much on Request...

article is in a state where there are no references and the content is in proseline. Michaelzeng7 (talk) 22:34, 14 November 2012 (UTC) delete Not a notable...

writing to have every second sentence start with "In (Year)". See WP:PROSELINE. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:27, 27 October 2014 (UTC) @Crisco 1492: I take...

deletion/Log/2007 October 31, under Template:Proseline.--Phirazo 03:44, 3 April 2008 (UTC) I'd rather make Wikipedia:Proseline a policy/guideline than delete this...

with "In/on [date], Carey x". This should be copy-edited to remove the proseline and one-sentence paragraphs. Unsourced BLP info under Personal Life regarding...

of modern FA criteria. The copy-edit tag brings up a classic case of proseline, the numerous dead links are also troublesome, and the unreliable source...

up for a major overhaul like this, and trying to eliminate some of the proseline that used to plague it. I just want some general comments on the revisions...

especially the 'Scheduled Route Development and Changes' section (which is proseline, too) and the 'Airlines and destinations' section, which needs to meet...

--Charlene 13:19, 28 May 2007 (UTC) Keep I would support {{cleanup}} or even {{proseline}} for this article, but there is plenty of notability for the subject...

2009 GA is scarce on post-2009 details on his life. Updates violate wp:proseline and also have non-primary source needed tags. I might be able to fix this...

instance of MOS:SANDWICH Look at the Legal issues section for a sample of WP:PROSELINE ... IN 2001, in 2002, in 2006, in 2007, in 2010 ... every single paragraph...

standard yet. Can we get an independent copy-edit? The article suffers from proseline with lots of stubby factoids. There are grammatical problems; I sensed...

"2004–present: Lovie Smith era" section of the article degenerates into proseline, with no real flow. Dabomb87 (talk) 14:37, 27 March 2010 (UTC) The above...

article. These should be combined with others or perhaps expanded. See WP:Proseline too Internet refs need URL, title, author if known, publisher and date...

comprehensive coverage, is riddled with grammar issues (incomplete sentences and proseline), and has a mere four citations. Maralia (talk) 22:20, 22 May 2009 (UTC)...

but I haven't checked. That said, the biggest problem I see here is WP:PROSELINE writing with one sentence paragraphs in the "College career" section:...

version of that word at least 8 times in the lead, and much of it reads as proseline (prosified lists). Better flow would be nice. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:24...

"play-by-play proseline of the stream" that is well-sourced an issue? WP:PROSELINE itself says that the best solution is turning proseline into direct prose...

It has inconsistent formatting of sources. It also suffers Wikipedia:Proseline. THE NEW ImmortalWizard(chat) 21:21, 16 February 2019 (UTC) I replaced...

very poor. Most of the more recent stuff (last 10 years) reads as a WP:PROSELINE list of chronological events that has been assembled piecemeal instead...

people convicted of a crime. The article reads like a timeline, see WP:PROSELINE for guidance on avoiding this. Traumnovelle (talk) 00:19, 1 November 2025...

 czar 00:48, 21 July 2016 (UTC) I worked on the lead, and adjusted the proseline a bit more. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 02:36, 21 July 2016 (UTC) @Favre1fan93:...

April 2009 (UTC) Delist. The prose really does take a nose-dive into proseline near the end, and the gaps in the personal life & career would seem to...

of Elizabeth II, which already has a "Timeline" section. See also WP:PROSELINE, which advises that articles in this style should be avoided. Sandstein...

Israeli–Palestinian conflict in 2023, where they should be merged due to their WP:PROSELINE nature. There's no reason for yet another article covering the same content...

into one another. This is a piece of good advice to be taken from WP:PROSELINE. The chief culprit is the Awards and recognition subsection, but such...

areas which have not been kept up to date, and short paragraphs and proseline in several sections. I also have concerns about the depth of coverage...

WP:proselines, one-sentence paragraphs, unsourced statements, and WP:peacock terms. sst✈ 14:47, 3 October 2015 (UTC) Will hopefully work on proselines,...

section, and those paragraphs shouldn't exceed ~150 words typically. The WP:Proseline makes it even less attractive to read, and is a symptom of not adhering...

this is looking quite good. Some comments: There is a certain degree of "proseline" — there is a tendency to start paragraphs with "In year, x and y happened"...

summarize the article and the multiple sections are stubby, bordering on proseline. There are certainly missing sources/citations: for instance the "Awards"...

overlapping history with bevelhead material in Ducati Singles, fix WP:PROSELINE Berliner Motor Corporation Incorporate, as appropriate, resources listed...

Wikipedia:Writing better articles Deleted link and summary for Wikipedia:proseline Deleted link and summary for WP:Article series First sentence section...

and the diff of changes since the FAR nom indicate a tendency to WP:PROSELINE. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 01:52, 17 November 2021 (UTC) Move to FARC - uncited...

Z1720 (talk) 13:06, 8 April 2025 (UTC) I think the issue is more the WP:PROSELINE feel of the year by year sections. There we have a clear violation not...

feedback on how to further improve this GA article, especially how to avoid proseline and where to find more sources. Thanks, Somno (talk) 08:10, 13 May 2008...

Wiles) The sentences all start with 'In xxx', which is WP:PROSELINE. Later Career Same WP:PROSELINE issues as in his early career, and you could probably...

subsequent "The New York Times" subsection is written in a largely WP:Proseline format. The "Early life and education" section consists of two single-sentence...

28 May 2009 (UTC) Fictional history 1879–2006 tends slightly toward proseline when it lists some of the events. This is nothing that can't be cleaned...

history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views) – (View log) This proseline is begging to be converted into an article, but I can't do it because...

Jumpytoo Talk 18:46, 21 March 2023 (UTC) Keep. Suffers a bit from WP:PROSELINE, but that is something that can be fixed through editing. The topic clearly...

As explained on talk, it has not been kept up to date, suffers from WP:PROSELINE, does not use the most recent scholarly sources (of which there are many)...

Spiderone(Talk to Spider) 11:40, 24 April 2026 (UTC) Delete Very weak WP:PROSELINE article that barely talks about its services and products. Needs major...

(especially the "Honors and recognition" section, which has a lot of proseline). I suspect that a few of the external links listed could be used as a...

commented on the review and there were concerns regarding the lead and WP:PROSELINE. I tried to fix as much as possible (by trimming information and avoiding...

The Lead is too short and the prose needs much work and suffers from proseline throughout. The use of the word "patients" is questionable. I suggest...

comment - On first glance I'm concerned with sections suffering from WP:PROSELINE and choppy sentences not forming a cohesive narrative ("On this date this...

There are problems with the prose, citations, single-sentence paragraphs, proseline and others. Graham Beards (talk) 23:23, 14 November 2015 (UTC) Closing...

spray-painting a train is not something that is notable for the article) WP:PROSELINE is omnipresent Frequent one-sentence paragraphs belie a lack of organization...

pulling them together. A career section for an actor should be more than a proseline list of jobs, as we are already given a filmography etc.YobMod 09:38,...

the same information again in excessive detail (WP:NOTNEWS) and in WP:Proseline format. Sandstein 08:35, 13 July 2022 (UTC) Note: This discussion has...

all over the place. For example, Genesis of Test cricket is filled with proseline: four consecutive paragraphs start with In 1852, 1859, 1861, In 1868....

you would like it to reach GA status. The biggest issue is the use of proseline throughout much of the article. Avoid repetitive "On date X, Y happened"...

is not of FA standard. The prose is way below par and suffers from WP:Proseline where lots of unconnected factoids are bundled together. Checking the...

WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL) The article has no clear topic, and is largely PROSELINE about arbitrary cyber-attacks. Walt Yoder (talk) 15:44, 9 April 2023 (UTC)...

this should be nominated for WP:FL, not FA. You may want to rewrite WP:Proselines currently in the lead section, and fix the dead links. SSTflyer 03:23...

covering events in 2022. Finally, WP:TNT applies; there are significant WP:PROSELINE issues. Apologies for the long nomination statement - this is a complex...

sections The Preparing for the Western Extension section looks a lot like WP:PROSELINE Numerous dead links Lead is too short (per WP:LEADLENGTH this should have...

sources. Astro$01 (talk) 21:14, 15 May 2021 (UTC) The list is basically WP:PROSELINE, made into a list. I maintain that a listing of every fatal dog attack...

critics use. The "Sequel" section is overly detailed and suffers from proseline. I do not find this to be a Good Article, but I am personally not motivated...

information. The article, especially exploration section, suffers from WP:PROSELINE issues. Not all the mentioned incidents are necessarily WP:DUE in this...

directly connected to the NAC. The entire history section reads very WP:PROSELINE-y. Each paragraph has a month and/or year, at most 7 words into the first...

this article would be an ideal fit there, but the rest of it is just Proseline. Powers T 00:25, 13 November 2007 (UTC) leave it as aits own article,...

sentence in it. The prose quality is hindered by the excessive use of proseline. Many footnotes are missing as well. This will take much time to fix....

an engaging read. Background and promotion section reads a bit like WP:PROSELINE, with consecutive sentences starting with "In August 2024", "In September"...

I'll give my opinions on what needs to be dealt with for a GA push: Proseline is bad. Especially in the lead. The actual date that something occurs...

and Awards and honors: Both of these sections contain a large amount of proseline writing. The "On [date]" style of sentence is seen time and time again...

problems result from how the article has grown over time (reflecting some PROSELINE), mostly relying on current news reports, not using any newer scholarly...

"After November 1942, Romanian naval forces returned to..."; per Wikipedia:Proseline: be careful to vary the way you start sentences. Quite a few start with...

acceptable for the main page, and prose should be in narrative style, not proseline-type writing. Articles should be well referenced; one or two "citation...

Policies and guidelines PI (WP:PI) – Process is important PL (WP:PL) – Proseline PM (WP:PM) – Proposed mergers PN (WP:PN) – Patent nonsense PLOT (WP:PLOT)...

article is full of relatively short paragraphs, and flow is lacking. Proseline exists in much of the career summary; the 2011 season is a particularly...

September 2008 (UTC) Oppose Lead is far from engaging - basically just proseline. "also" x 3 in the lead is repetitive and makes for boring reading. "Overall...

see where the article fell into disrepair. I'm willing to clean up the proseline, update the article, and address the other issues. I'm not going to hold...

Antisemitism in Canada would be undue (and honestly most of the random WP:PROSELINE content there probably isn't due either). Thebiguglyalien (talk) 20:00...

of detail and summary info may also be why the sections read more like proseline. Removed excess detail Cyclonebiskit (talk) 15:12, 3 December 2009 (UTC)...

. Three successive paragraphs starting in the same manner leads to a proseline structure. Try to rephrase them to achieve a better reading experience...

my other commitments both on and off wiki. Additionally, a lot of the proseline in the article is just very outdated, and I wouldn't be able to fix that...

the rest of us non-Canadians don't have to look it up :) :) Avoid WP:PROSELINE, a large number of sentences and paragraphs start with a date, which tires...

2009 (UTC) Strong oppose - Per everything above. Not enough citations, proseline throughout, and a stubby 2005 summary, just to name a few things. I also...

flags won't be neccessary if you do that. Alot of the article reads like proseline and recentism. I think the USBM section is kind of unnecessary. The important...

out if it could or should be merged, and the article is in a form of proseline already, so "listify" is a mere formatting formality. I guess it should...

is now 7.75. The history and levee sections have some elements of WP:Proseline. I'm not a prose expert, but you may want to vary the sentence structure...

for a second divorce from Riley; however, the action was withdrawn. WP:PROSELINE. Musk has made multiple cameos and appearances in films... Change this...

However the recent work section is seemed with recentism diatribes and proseline effect. By this I mean that the general coherent flow evident in the previous...

e-cigarettes in the past few years. It's written in something resembling WP:PROSELINE and prior to the Arbcom sanctions it was used as a holder for all the...

generally not well written. Expansions, updates and audio sections contain proseline. There is a fansite in the external links. Remove this please - the number...

here (yes, I am going through the article backwards): There's some WP:PROSELINE in the "Other use by Disney" section. Is Shacknews a reliable source?...

is relevant to Scouts BSA? Is it? Youth Leadership Section is a bit WP:PROSELINE with he does this, this scout calls the roll, that scout collects money...

about Jake as an actor or his acting methods? At present it has a bit of proseline effect with sentences going in a particular structure "In XXXX, he starrted...

patent in a sentence without context. The history section reads like proseline; four consecutive paragraphs start with "In (year), ...". This doesn't...

video game articles. There's no denying the need for cleanup—far too much proseline and the like—but notability is established, and as already commented,...

after the 2008 FAR shows most of the same problems, mostly in the use of proseline and poor-quality sources, so I think that it deserves a FAR. 1a concerns...

there are "choppy paragraphs, choppy sentences, a flow so close to WP:Proseline that it's almost uncanny, and most of all almost no information about...

party controllers, will also work in... Development I would try to avoid proseline as the article progresses. Soundtrack Gamer jargon: "downloadable content"...

December 2009 (UTC) Oppose, suggest withdrawal per Pyrrhus16. I see lots of proseline, which needs organization and trimming to terse paragraphs that are "engaging...

Oppose - sorry. There are so many problems here. The article suffers from proseline and many of the sentences lack logical flow, "Radcliffe took on the lead...

article is in many ways a historical account we also want to avoid proseline (see wp:proseline) thus the article's prose might require or be best written with...

but I think words like these help make the text more coherent, and less proseline-like. Ucucha 17:41, 27 May 2011 (UTC) Okay. RJH (talk) "Later studies...

There's a danger that a section like this (constantly in flux) will become proseline. I'd remove dates that aren't necessary (for example, I took out the date...

the high quality RS focus more on his musical output. There's a lot of proseline issues where individual incidents are mentioned without enough connection...

split up paragraphs based on chronological order (in other words, WP:PROSELINE). While this alone is not indicative of sockpuppetry, it is notable that...

concerns whether some sources meet RS. Also finding a fair amount of proseline to clean up. More later. Maralia (talk) 15:02, 1 May 2009 (UTC) Comment...

Naturally, it's not easy to write on park history without it reading like proseline so I have tried to be creative in my approach and add colour, as you put...

into "On XXX, Drogba did XXX" form, which is a little too much like WP:PROSELINE. FAs should avoid this and give a more general summary. Finally, I wonder...

scholar · free images · WP refs) · FENS · JSTOR · TWL) WP:NOTNEWS and WP:PROSELINE. Redirect to Sheikh Omar Hadid Brigade. Longhornsg (talk) 01:36, 28 October...

was raised above the ring." The whole delivery comes across as heavily proseline ("On xx yyy, 19zz"), and over detailed. I think it is needless to point...

it could better connect them? The music video section has a bit of WP:PROSELINE, doesn't it? Perhaps you could integrate the dates more effectively? The...

related to the release of a game, it is often easy to fall into the use of proseline on trivial details, repetitive sentences or list items in a form like...

minor copy-edits, but the prose is fine. I've a few little issues with WP:PROSELINE and over-using quotes, but if we can sort these out I'll be happy to support...

major events and key points of the wrestler's career. Avoid writing in proseline ("week-by-week" format) and adding excessive details. Shortcut...

people continue to be influenced by the console, etc. It's essentially proseline as is ("X said it's the top Y"). That stuff doesn't matter and can be...

"At (military time), such-and-such happened", which reads a bit like WP:PROSELINE. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 17:28, 26 November 2009 (UTC) SandyGeorgia (Talk)...

received many honors in addition to the Nobel Prize." reads like pure proseline — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:45, 25 September 2012 (UTC) hang him out to dry...

(UTC) Weak keep but cleanup. I think the article should be converted to proseline because at first glance it does look like trivia. And the title of the...

very poorly written. There's a huge amount of what we used to call "proseline", i.e. "On date x, blahblahblah. On date y, blahblahblah. On date z, ...

your feedback. While writing I am always nervous about drifting into WP:Proseline, so I suppose I've veered over into the other lane. I'll try to clarify...

sound patronising, but I know you can write better than this. I think proseline is a problem; it ruins the flow by producing an unpleasant staccato to...

it current in the last several years. The "2014–present" section is WP:PROSELINE and contains barely any information on her activities in recent years...

with prose ("Some croats legends says", pervasive verb tense problems, proseline); style ("approx." used in the lead, inconsistent capitalization); images...

of Wikipedia. Proseline – why articles being comprehensive and up-to-date is perfectly reasonable and okay to a point, but "proseline" (timelines) tends...

(talk) 11:31, 20 December 2017 (UTC) Delist – There appears to be some proseline in the last section from additions, and I spotted some of the sourcing...

somewhat relevant of the topic without much connection to each other (proseline). Many of the inline citations are not formatted, and most troubling,...

make you want to read on. While it doesn't involve dates, it reads like proseline. Unremarkable tournaments need not be mentioned. Certainly scorelines...

Wikipedia. Pages in the project namespace always start with "Wikipedia:". Proseline From "prose" and "timeline": chronological list of events narrated in...

"Accusations" section of the article could use a fair bit of streamlining per WP:PROSELINE.) Russ Woodroofe (talk) 14:31, 6 October 2024 (UTC) Note: This discussion...

the "Legacy" section in particular is poorly-formatted, and basically proseline. The most serious problem with the article, though, is that it's barely...

after the second paragraph, it becomes a list of time periods. This is proseline, and we want to try and avoid that. Could you turn it into body text?...

wary of introducing proseline. No problem, it was a suggestion that is likely preference. (I, too, agree we should be wary of proselines...) "In the years...

England. The first sentence of the article does not comply with WP: Proseline. I am aware of the fact that it is not a policy but can this sentence...

paragraphs start with "On XX month". This is a form of writing called proseline, and won't be good enough for the FA level. I suggest re-writing some...

bit too long and could be made more interesting to read. Try to avoid proseline, where every sentence starts "On such and such a date, x happened". Also...

are that while the one-paragraph sections are ok, there's a lot of WP:PROSELINE (admittedly not a policy or guideline, but rather widely followed) that...

upon their discovery alongside Cape Verde.) Later History gets a bit WP:PROSELINE, listing events with little indication of overall importance or impact...

from 2021 addressed? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 07:33, 25 July 2023 (UTC) WP:PROSELINE is a problem. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 07:33, 25 July 2023 (UTC) Looking only...

Archive only mentions the Philippine government and a ferry bomb. See WP:PROSELINE and MOS:PERSONOROFFICE. RFNirmala (talk) 16:03, 14 June 2025 (UTC) Thank...

by-date, by-date, by-date recounting in this section is reminiscent of proseline, but it's actually probably coming from a desire to include every detail...

examples of unpolished prose and other potential issues: A tendency towards proseline. "In 1999, this happened. In 2000, that happened." Does not make for engaging...

information here would be questioned. Legacy This seems a little bit proseline and could be tweaked a bit: separate the paragraphs into themes or such...

13:29, 16 May 2007 (UTC) Also the International play section is close to proseline, it need re-writing. Quadzilla99 13:34, 16 May 2007 (UTC) I'm also going...

apply a standard format to what is effectively proseline. Encouraging or trying to standardise proseline is not useful or desirable, as such information...

like an advertisement than an encyclopedia to me and I see a lot of WP:PROSELINE. You might want to contact the League of Copyeditors. Here are some other...

--Efe (talk) 01:34, 3 June 2008 (UTC) The lead suffers from proseline. OK, not exactly "proseline" a bunch of disconnected sentences that hardly bring out...

version of that word at least 8 times in the lead, and much of it reads as proseline (prosified lists). Better flow would be nice. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 09:24...

November 2012 (UTC) Modern history: The last couple of paragraphs resort to proseline, which is not optimal in terms of prose. Overall, I feel like the article...

(UTC) The biggest issue I can see there that almost all article is WP:PROSELINE. F.e. in 'Chrome' each line starts with a year: in 2008, in 2009, ......

(talk) 08:05, 31 August 2021 (UTC) The politics section is a little WP:PROSELINE-y. Jo-Jo Eumerus I assume you mean just the 2020s subsection (if not please...

18:12, 2 February 2008 (UTC) Parts of the first section read more like proseline. Can it be massaged a bit so that it flows a little better? I'm working...

others have pointed out, very heavy on tiny specifics. Much of it is proseline. I recommend including only two sections: "Early history" or some such...

it is dull. For example, the first paragraph of the first section is proseline; I was also interested to read Tony1's objection at the previous FAC....

impact of all tropical cyclones in the basin that season in prose. Avoid a proseline laundry list of damage stats and statistics, and emphasize storms that...

writing to have every second sentence start with "In (Year)". See WP:PROSELINE. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:27, 27 October 2014 (UTC) @Crisco 1492: I take...

engaging. There's a tendency for match descriptions to collapse into proseline; you've avoided that but it doesn't sparkle. Not something I'd oppose...

suggestions, plot summarization, reference- and infobox-based expansion, proseline repair, uncited text tagging, table formatting and color schemes) Shit...

blurb-worthy. It just looks like a typical C-class biography, even with some proseline issues. I think there was general consensus to at least have higher expectations...

Given how notable this storm is, I went for a summary style rather than a proseline of every detail as I normally would. Still, at 2257 words, it's a sizable...

shorter paragraphs (Four or five lines when viewed in 1024×768) feels like proseline. I am wondering if there's a way to force my web browser (Firefox), or...

public image" is rather listy, and as a whole the article tends towards proseline. Some general assessments of Song, her career, and her significance would...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

December 2020 (UTC) Support. Most of it looks decent enough, but the proseline and other issues with the criticism section are enough to warrant our...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

that it was not engaging, not brilliant prose and suffers terribly from proseline effect. Its just a who's who list of the awards she won, but without any...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

paragraph of the 2009-present section just becomes a touch too much like PROSELINE? And I like the final paragraphs which sum it all up, but they seem a...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

tied to the convention. Proseline is easy to write into but it doesn't work well in the long-term which is why we have WP:PROSELINE to guide editors from...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

could stand to be split. More importantly, the whole section is basically proseline. It's a bunch of loosely connected facts that don't flow well together...

paragraph where it mentions the seizure of the Leyla Express. Feels a little proseline-y to me; can do it if you feel strongly... I'm not going to insist on...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

I'm not too happy with it. I was worried about the article turning into proseline as things come in, but I've had some ideas on how to keep the section...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

suggestions, plot summarization, reference- and infobox-based expansion, proseline repair, uncited text tagging, table formatting and color schemes) User:JPxG/LLM...

sentence in it either. Throughout the article, the writing suffers from proseline. There is little hint of a narrative, just a collection of "and then this...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

tag, but is not. It is simply one editor's neologistic opinion about "proseline". — SMcCandlish [talk] [cont] ‹(-¿-)› 22:49, 28 August 2009 (UTC) Delete...

December 2020 (UTC) The "Impacts" section has a plethora of issues. WP:PROSELINE (rewrite it as prose), and MOS:CURRENT. WP:TRIVIA ??? Fixed???? LittleJerry...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

room for improvement — I've tagged a few places. And the amount of WP:Proseline throughout the text is a bit much. Barryjjoyce (talk) 02:48, 17 December...

the top of the '2008 presidential Campaign' section complaining about proseline In addition, the massive amount of information added/changed after he...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

technology improvements"—among other examples. Much of the article reads like proseline and lacks connection: "On May 29, Kentucky Kingdom announced...", "On...

Read that policy, nvm. Teh Rote (talk) 01:13, 20 March 2008 (UTC) Mild proseline spotted. Specifically, the "Revolution and the Frankfurt Parliament" section...

the theme of LGBT depiction in video games. It should not be written as proseline, but a table would be better. It is not so much a CFORK (as only a few...

Valiant" [131] composed of brief proseline+quotes May 2013 now has more quotes "Kiss Land" [132] composed of brief proseline+quotes July 2013 now has more...

September 2008 (UTC) Oppose Lead is far from engaging - basically just proseline. "also" x 3 in the lead is repetitive and makes for boring reading. "Overall...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

Yes No [3] Age of Mythology FA Yes No [4] BioShock FA Yes No [5] Some proseline - most corrected (some fine tuning to sparkle but acceptable for 0.7)...

23 March 2019 (UTC) In general, I would say there are issues with WP:PROSELINE, which could be prevented. Can you provide a couple of examples that highlights...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

Because we have let NOT#NEWS weaken, we get these articles that are tons of proseline, filling in every possible news story that the topic is in, which is not...

of summarizing this in prose form without giving a blow-by-blow (or WP:Proseline) account of it. TompaDompa (talk) 03:31, 16 January 2026 (UTC) The above...

nature by describing details of trailers and posters and engaging in proseline. I had mentioned the article as an example of not following the guidelines...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

promotion now, but glancing through I noted that we might slip slightly into proseline in places: the lead in particular seems to have a date, or at least some...

a summary manner, and instead much more commonly you'll see proseline proseline proseline, with no attempt to focus on the big picture and move away from...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

header. "New dynasties and colonialism (1030–1918)" breaks down into proseline in the last three (very short) paragraphs. Most of the "mosques" header...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

year. As for the writing, the main issue I see later in the article is proseline. There are a ton of sentences that start "In XXXX" or similar, and a bunch...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

that it was not engaging, not brilliant prose and suffers terribly from proseline effect. Its just a who's who list of the awards she won, but without any...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

Editing help is available. Use this tag where a list needs cleanup. {{proseline section}} category links talk edit This section is in list format but...

text. The 'Death and legacy' section needs to be rewritten to remove proseline. The citations in the 'Advisory roles' section need to be tightened up;...

sections The Preparing for the Western Extension section looks a lot like WP:PROSELINE Numerous dead links Lead is too short (per WP:LEADLENGTH this should have...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

acceptable for the main page, and prose should be in narrative style, not "proseline"-type writing." - Wikipedia:In_the_news However, this was not the case...

13:33, 17 July 2007 (UTC) Just another thing. There appears to be some proseline in the text, e.g. sentences starting with "On January 1, 1900" for example...

"play-by-play proseline of the stream" that is well-sourced an issue? WP:PROSELINE itself says that the best solution is turning proseline into direct prose...

websites)". And he's writing the whole thing not in complete sentences, but in proselined sentence fragments that aren't consistent with encyclopedic writing style...

about Jake as an actor or his acting methods? At present it has a bit of proseline effect with sentences going in a particular structure "In XXXX, he starrted...

but all seem to be from a single source.) Section is problematic per WP:PROSELINE and one sentence paragraphs. Can you rework it so that it is flowing prose...

the Motorsport section. Along the way I removed a fair bit of trivia, proseline and other gunk but there's still much work to be done. Real-life issues...

877.25 275 Wikipedia:It should be noted 44 56 155 870.44 276 Wikipedia:Proseline 1935 56 145 869.35 277 Wikipedia:Overzealous deletion 1624 49 179 864...

Auto isn't italicized.  Done "Versions and merchandise" falls prey to proseline. Try to vary your sentence-commencing techniques. Please give an example...

"2007" read like borderline Proseline. "On this date he did this and this date he did that." It's not the definition of proseline, I admit, but whatever it...

criticisms is not quite feature article quality. Remove or rewrite it in proseline. At the very least provide more references for the criticisms. --Anss123...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

developments on existing articles are less a problem, save for far far too much proseline in many cases, since we're not questioning the basic notability of the...

this happened" syndrome, or at least something very closely related: WP:proseline. Geometry guy 17:54, 10 May 2008 (UTC) Ah, marvellous, I have a term!...

then I read the works of Dahl regularly... Very general issue: watch for Proseline. There are many, many paragraphs which begin "in (year)", which makes...

such as Category:Articles with trivia sections or Category:Wikipedia proseline cleanup. I'm not saying we should have maintenance cats on article pages...

{{Promotional section}} {{Not list}}, {{List to prose}}, {{Prose timeline}}, {{Proseline}}, {{Prosetimeline}}, {{ProseTimeline}}, {{List}}, {{Convert to prose}}...

an article that’s turning out to be date-heavy. I’m reading Wikipedia:Proseline#What should be done? which suggests that I’ll need to make a decision...

numerous eyes at WP:MLB because the article has been able to avoid WP:PROSELINE based on the help of the concerned parties. I believe the article is in...

responsibility for MISS to the new agency." (This also gets around the PROSELINE.) Unless there is some back story I am missing, the USAF obeying orders...

(UTC) Delete or perhaps merge. The current article suffers a lot from WP:PROSELINE. The subject of the controversy over the construction of this road definitely...

article is on probation? A. I originally nominated it because here was a {{proseline}} tag on the article, meaning that it would have quickfailed any FAC,...

just shows the limited efforts of one inactive user. There is also WP:PROSELINE, which is another essay with the same basic idea, but does not include...

Mrfrobinson (talk) 10:52, 12 February 2016 (UTC) FWIW, this is described as WP:PROSELINE. --MASEM (t) 14:45, 12 February 2016 (UTC) I see it not as a problem but...

needs lots of attention: There's lots of what I and others here call "proseline"—sentences and paragraphs that are just "On date, event." The criteria...

people continue to be influenced by the console, etc. It's essentially proseline as is ("X said it's the top Y"). That stuff doesn't matter and can be...

and instead leave the blow-by-blow and hyperreporting (if you see WP:PROSELINE, that's a good sign there's a problem). We need better encouragement of...

Bill Hader doing his macabre Keith Morrison impression as I read it. The proseline is rough. This really isn't spotlight material. GCG (talk) 19:38, 28 February...

bobrayner (talk) 23:25, 5 June 2011 (UTC) For the relevant essay, see WP:Proseline. —Mike Allen 01:39, 6 June 2011 (UTC) Are you referring to something like...

by the way, that number needs a citation.) The article succumbs to WP:PROSELINE. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:01, 14 October 2007 (UTC) I'm editing the refs...

India page is not as bad, but many many of the COVID pages suffer from PROSELINE problems that could also do with culling and summarizing, cutting out...

2018 (UTC) The prose is poor throughout the article. It suffers from proseline, which in turn gives rise to illogical flow. (For example "At that time...

screenspace, and CPU power to display it. That's why, in part, there's a 100kb proseline upper limit as part of WP:SIZE. If that means large amounts of information...

(talk) 04:11, 2 February 2022 (UTC) Article does have some slight WP:PROSELINE issues, with sentences starting "On X date,". Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski...

January 2024 (UTC) Delete: Agreed. A pretty disreputable combo of POV and proseline. Resolving the glaring imbalance issues here would undoubtedly require...

article, especially in the career section, seems to be suffering from proseline. Although paragraphs are not stubby, almost all begin with a date. There...

are one of those things that plague recent events; yes it is easy to proseline one country's reaction per line, but that really doesn't help. Reactions...

official/archaic term as well The Benefices section reads a lot like proseline I'm confused as to why there is such detail about King David? I assumed...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

in 2008 could be better worked in somewhere (that section suffers from proseline). American Muslim stubby para added after promotion-- is this still true...

list for such a short article (and this is a short article...barring WP:PROSELINE style notes of installations, which is basically already a list, there...

already on the page, since this seems to "work". This is exactly how WP:PROSELINE can become a problem in an article, and would also explain why one would...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

year. As for the writing, the main issue I see later in the article is proseline. There are a ton of sentences that start "In XXXX" or similar, and a bunch...

design when the topic suddenly changes from horse sounds to the Orb, the proseline feel of the first paragraph in Home media, etc.). Take care. I think I...

delisted, though. A few 1a issues are present, notably including Wikipedia:Proseline issues in "Domestic policy". It seems like there's lot of Human interest...

of Elizabeth II, which already has a "Timeline" section. See also WP:PROSELINE, which advises that articles in this style should be avoided. Sandstein...

levels, game modes, characters, story arcs, etc.) Things to remember Avoid proseline. Though maintaining a sense to chronology is important, this section should...

sources. Astro$01 (talk) 21:14, 15 May 2021 (UTC) The list is basically WP:PROSELINE, made into a list. I maintain that a listing of every fatal dog attack...

valid point regarding the chronology of the section and there's a bit of proseline effect I wanna eliminate. —IB [ Poke ] 19:05, 7 November 2017 (UTC) Thank...

least two engagements between 1905 and 1908. In the hopes of avoiding proseline, I mention the engagements but not the years. I also dropped Pound's travel...

re-adapted to the US "Phantom Man".) Also, the prose suffers from WP:PROSELINE in the "World record breaker" section. There are citation tags. There...

chronologically rather than thematically; and third, there's considerable WP:PROSELINE. I would suggest combining sections, into something like "death, rediscovery...

should rewrite the section to ensure better flow instead of the rather proseline appearance. While the following comment does not specifically refer to...

what proseline is via the essay, and that by policy NOT:NEWS, we shouldn't be writing articles that look like newspaper articles (which proseline resembles)...

Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:02, 29 December 2025 (UTC) WP:PROSELINE is only an essay, but does make some good points. Some parts of the article...

this article would be an ideal fit there, but the rest of it is just Proseline. Powers T 00:25, 13 November 2007 (UTC) leave it as aits own article,...

should be able to address most of what is now below FA standards. I see WP:PROSELINE everywhere in the recent material, where paragraph after irrelevant paragraph...

block(s), so I recognice his writing. I typically find it pretty choppy proseline. See the writing style of Matthias Pliessnig or Caryn Wagner from ChildofMidnight...

01:21, 25 November 2021 (UTC) The 21st century section is a little WP:PROSELINE-y. Not a terrible example, and not a sticking point for me, but could...

had 12,000 hits last month, but was a shameful mess due to recentism, proseline and more importantly, neutrality problems, with nearly two-thirds of the...

needs to be incorporated into the article. As well it has a good deal of proseline. Optional question from Juliancolton 9. You've made nearly 500 edits today...

up to date in a manner that is more future-proof than the more common proseline "On <date>, <this happened>" problem. Masem (t) 18:09, 6 January 2023...

--Charlene 13:19, 28 May 2007 (UTC) Keep I would support {{cleanup}} or even {{proseline}} for this article, but there is plenty of notability for the subject...

the same information again in excessive detail (WP:NOTNEWS) and in WP:Proseline format. Sandstein 08:35, 13 July 2022 (UTC) Note: This discussion has...

also needs consolodating and reformatting; right now its just a bunch of proseline. -Indy beetle (talk) 23:14, 2 June 2020 (UTC) I've removed the fair use...

sentence structure, and many sections begin with a date, suggestive of WP:PROSELINE). Thanks to the editors who pulled this one through, but I hope FAC resources...

article is in a state where there are no references and the content is in proseline. Michaelzeng7 (talk) 22:34, 14 November 2012 (UTC) delete Not a notable...

history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views) – (View AfD) This proseline is begging to be converted into an article, but I can't do it because...

e-cigarettes in the past few years. It's written in something resembling WP:PROSELINE and prior to the Arbcom sanctions it was used as a holder for all the...

too much, but it's at least a decent stub now, and it doesn't read like proseline. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshells•Otter chirps) 18:21...

video game articles. There's no denying the need for cleanup—far too much proseline and the like—but notability is established, and as already commented,...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

(UTC) Weak keep but cleanup. I think the article should be converted to proseline because at first glance it does look like trivia. And the title of the...

covering events in 2022. Finally, WP:TNT applies; there are significant WP:PROSELINE issues. Apologies for the long nomination statement - this is a complex...

March 2022 (UTC) Delete per nom and Anton. This is just press release proseline. User:力 (powera, π, ν) 18:44, 19 March 2022 (UTC) The above discussion...

it current in the last several years. The "2014–present" section is WP:PROSELINE and contains barely any information on her activities in recent years...

(UTC) Delete or perhaps merge. The current article suffers a lot from WP:PROSELINE. The subject of the controversy over the construction of this road definitely...

many paragraphs don't flow well, and parts of the article feel more like proseline. Other issues- The lead is too long. Lead has been significantly reduced...

the theme of LGBT depiction in video games. It should not be written as proseline, but a table would be better. It is not so much a CFORK (as only a few...

issues|out of=}} → {{Multiple issues|out of date=}} {{Multiple issues|proseline=}} → {{Multiple issues|prose=}} {{Multiple issues|recent=}} → {{Multiple...

election cycle yet. But instead, we're getting what is effectively a mix of proseline and "X in popular culture" lists - listing of events (but not summaries)...

his approach, and stuff like that. As it is, it reads somewhat like proseline. I wouldn't worry too much about the article being delisted right away...

Ukrainian political crisis article needs to be cleaned up – it has tons of {{proseline}}. Secondly, the Ukrainian parliamentary election, 2007 currently does...

Park 2009 2004 2009 Mav Ray Emery 2008 2008 none Maxim needs work for proseline, outdated statements, and 8 bare url citations. Stanley Cup 2007 2007...

what proseline is via the essay, and that by policy NOT:NEWS, we shouldn't be writing articles that look like newspaper articles (which proseline resembles)...

21 June 2022 (UTC) Nestor Makhno § In Popular Culture is written in WP:PROSELINE; would be better to recast with paragraphs themed around the types of...

code is transcluded in another page. Formatting in original, edited for proseline. I moved the page so that the parentheses are present in the title, which...

Overall, I'm underwhelmed by the prose. Most of the article suffers from proseline, and while I understand that this is difficult to overcome when describing...

after their condition was determined to be minor.[30]" this is a bit proseline and could be rewritten into longer, joined sentences I think it's mostly...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

section needs rewriting - almost every sentence starts with dates (WP:PROSELINE) and it's really choppy and repetitive. Bridget (talk) 16:07, 12 November...

section. I think the problem is that the subsection is taking on a strict proseline structure that limits the flexibility and structure of the ideas to be...

with every single irrelevant date in his college football career (see WP:PROSELINE, and why is the college career of a Pro Bowler discussed in date-by-date...

edit has not solved this. The Chart Performance section suffers from proseline, which is fact after fact that lacks flow and is boring to read. Graham...

legacy EIG article could use some cleaning up (if only to resolve WP:PROSELINE), so the thought of creating drafts for both articles is appealing. I...

out if it could or should be merged, and the article is in a form of proseline already, so "listify" is a mere formatting formality. I guess it should...

PragerU has responded with, and so on, in a summary style and avoiding proseline/timeline style approaches. That would mean this specific article would...

become a GA now, seeing as all the problems have been addressed, e.g. proseline and adequate numbers of outside references. If anyone has any suggestions...

Happy Holidays! 00:00, 24 December 2019 (UTC) Oppose blurb or ongoing. Proseline in the extreme, bad grammar. --LaserLegs (talk) 23:58, 23 December 2019...

think the article lacks the shine of a Featured Article. It suffers from proseline in parts and some of the language is too colloquial. I would like to see...

avoid this becoming a little diary-like I've reworked this a bit; the WP:PROSELINE tendencies are tough to avoid when most of the topic matter for this section...

paragraphs which all begin with a date. This should be reworded, to avoid proseline issues. Steelkamp (talk) 10:30, 30 June 2025 (UTC) @Steelkamp, please...

22:22, 26 June 2023 (UTC) The whole witness-reports paragraph seems WP:PROSELINE-y. This may be difficult to avoid. However, it does result in a lot of...

(talk) 11:31, 20 December 2017 (UTC) Delist – There appears to be some proseline in the last section from additions, and I spotted some of the sourcing...

over-emphasized, overly-detailed (WP:VNOTSUFF) and written in pedantic Wikipedia:Proseline, as if every single news article warrants a new paragraph. The section...

it is required than an FAC usually grants. There's still an element of proseline, and there are frequent abrupt changes of subject between sentences, which...

forecasts is off, and there is no need for it to read like backwards proseline. The first May forecast foresaw low activity due to La Niña, explain La...

New York City. Too much uncited and post 1960 section is written in WP:PROSELINE. 1910 – The Royal Canadian Navy was created as the Naval Service of Canada...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

paragraph of the lead, are quite knotty, with stubby sentences that read like proseline (e.g. "Later that day, the depression strengthened into Tropical Storm...

19 January 2015 (UTC) The sections Honours and Awards etc. are rather proseline-y As per Tim's comment below, we'll look at the bottom sections of the...

issues stood out to me. In the "Features" section some of it reads like proseline. Specifically in the later half of it, each paragraph is segmented by...

(talk) 05:17, 26 May 2026 (UTC) Support – The article is hitting on some proseline issues, but it's seeing much more regular editing than other Ongoing entries...

biography and I would expect more for a major world leader. Furthermore, WP:PROSELINE is a problem; the article would need to be re-written into a more natural...

doubling as an update for our Gender bias on Wikipedia, which reads as proseline and could afford to be more synthetic. czar 14:20, 26 February 2019 (UTC)...

"rewrite, improved accuracy, dubious omissions" 01:55, 17 May 2026 (UTC) "WP:PROSELINE" 03:24, 16 May 2026 (UTC) "Restoring to stable revision by Yeti52 with...

citations. (That listing has been removed and replaced with prose [if WP:Proseline] with adequate sources. Other “console system software” articles are much...

(UTC) Weak oppose. Towards the end of the article, there is too much WP:PROSELINE. I don't like reading an article where every paragraph starts with "In...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

Template:Proposed deletion/dated Template:Prose Template:ProseTimeline Template:Proseline Template:Prosetimeline Template:Protect-ex Template:Protect days Template:Protected...

here (produces "in 2014", but eh, it's not like the article's at risk of proseline). This and other additions produced a very overstuffed second paragraph...

ideally suited for a table rather than this lengthy list of pretty much proseline. Well, I began it as a table last year then decided on a bulleted list...

the beginning? "to ransom John"? comma after out? I try to minimise WP:PROSELINE. I have split into two sentences to make it more digestible. initiated...

agitators calling for this and that (but not actually protesting) and proseline. Obviously of global significance. --LaserLegs (talk) 20:17, 26 August...

2022 (UTC) Now down to 2 {cn} tags, but the prose looks too much like WP:PROSELINE. --PFHLai (talk) 19:30, 30 January 2022 (UTC) Article: Jean-Claude Mézières...

article is still, in places, characterized by short paragraphs. It's not proseline, but please see that article anyway for the extreme case of what I'm talking...

suggestions, plot summarization, reference- and infobox-based expansion, proseline repair, uncited text tagging, table formatting and color schemes) User:JPxG/LLM...

paragraph of that section has similar problems, and almost becomes WP:PROSELINE at some points, in that we have "In YEAR, he did THIS. He did THAT in...

header. "New dynasties and colonialism (1030–1918)" breaks down into proseline in the last three (very short) paragraphs. Most of the "mosques" header...

2020 (UTC) Support - Seems to meet requirements, although reads like WP:PROSELINE. - Indefensible (talk) 17:20, 24 March 2020 (UTC) Weak oppose is a prose...

Stop Oil article needs some work in any case because it's tending to WP:PROSELINE at the moment, but I don't feel qualified to say whether merging this...

16:27, 26 March 2018 (UTC) Oppose Target article orange tagged, lots of proseline, no meaningful update. --LaserLegs (talk) 13:57, 26 March 2018 (UTC) Comment...

poor organisation of the article. At a structural level, the article is proseline. It tells the story like a news source, not an encyclopedia. Try to write...

WP:OR. The content is not the main issue, though there are significant WP:PROSELINE issues. But the article's existence takes many separate incidents, almost...

to copyedit the article for tone and style, particularly fixing the WP:PROSELINE issues with the writing. But regardless of that, an article which has...

[excessive citations], multiple unsourced statements, broken layout, WP:PROSELINE in some sections (f.e. in 'Exploration'), giant 'See also', and some strange...

first paragraph of the "Junior season" section suffers a bit from WP:PROSELINE and gets repetitive fairly quickly starting with her LSU debut: "On November...

information. The article, especially exploration section, suffers from WP:PROSELINE issues. Not all the mentioned incidents are necessarily WP:DUE in this...

(at least one dating from 2012!) and there is a lot of proseline and just barely not proseline prose in there along with some staccato sentences. I've...

with this. One is that the bold linked article has years of history and proseline so it's hard for the reader to pick out the latest developments. And,...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

Oppose on quality; the bold article is egregious WP:PROSELINE and the section headings in that proseline appear to be editorial invention. I would also prefer...

towards posting over the past 24 hours. (2) has greatly improved since the proseline article I looked at yesterday. And (3) seems to have come along as we're...

with Me 19:53, 10 June 2022 (UTC) Posted A proseline concern was raised, but its isolated, and a {{proseline}} tag, even if it were applied, is not a show-stopping...

ideally suited for a table rather than this lengthy list of pretty much proseline. Well, I began it as a table last year then decided on a bulleted list...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

series of single paragraph sections, and various sections that read as wp:proseline. CMD (talk) 04:54, 30 May 2021 (UTC) Interesting looking at older revisions...

court case in the Legal section, and not thrilled with the amount of proseline in Roof's article, but that's not really the main oppose; it is only because...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

Reworded. Also realised I had violated WP:NUMERAL here. A slight bit of WP:PROSELINE in the second paragraph of First World War. Also, he was promoted to temporary...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

there is on her parliamentary career – and what is there leans towards WP:PROSELINE territory. She must have had an important career before the scandal, but...

than, the trivia section itself. (I'd say the same about tags like {{proseline}}, for instance.) I also think the template should be moved from the "Potentially...

Comment. Article meets hygiene requirements for RD. However, reads like WP:PROSELINE. E.g. In 19xx, the subject did this. In 19xy, the subject did this. In...

be presented better by putting things into paragraphs rather than WP:PROSELINE, but it's perfectly fine for RD as-is. Uses x (talk • contribs) 17:30...

meets WP:ITNQUALITY. Weak oppose three dab links need addressing and the proseline is frankly despicable. Otherwise just about passable. The Rambling Man...

article isn't all that great. Background and crackdown are ok, lots of proseline in the rest. It's hard when you see #s like "92,000" to read a whole line...

but some player articles just feature game by game updates akin to WP:PROSELINE. Articles that are mainly about Daniels are easy to include, but what...

coverage appears to be limited to the anglosphere. Also, there are some proseline issues in the article. Banedon (talk) 06:58, 11 January 2017 (UTC) We...

article rather than mark them all specifically. One section is also just proseline. Thryduulf (talk) 12:07, 27 November 2022 (UTC) Support. I have gone through...

different stages of his career. That section contains a good deal of proseline, which could be re-written. An infobox would be useful, as would an image...

condense the third paragraph of development and release, as it falls into WP:PROSELINE territory as currently written. Here's something you could do: Current:...

< May 22 May 24 > The result of the debate was delete. WjBscribe 23:57, 30 May 2007 (UTC) Cross-namespace redirect for a Wikipedia neologism. No plausible...

from 2021 addressed? SandyGeorgia (Talk) 07:33, 25 July 2023 (UTC) WP:PROSELINE is a problem. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 07:33, 25 July 2023 (UTC) Looking only...

This paragraph is just a series of dates. While this is not yet a WP:PROSELINE issue, I would rephrase it a bit so it doesn't sound too disjointed. For...

amount of proseline in a few sections, but otherwise sourced and ready. --Masem (t) 22:03, 19 July 2020 (UTC) Support important and satis; proseline is suboptimal...

confirm=greenwood&earnshaw (1702, 1502, 0, 0) duck:8080?remove=proseline (1702, 1502, 0, 0) duck:8080?confirm=proseline (1702, 1502, 0, 0) duck:8080?remove=sprotected2...

well referenced, but needs some stylistic rewriting to avoid major WP:PROSELINE issues. If someone could find a more natural and narrative way of writing...

all over the place. For example, Genesis of Test cricket is filled with proseline: four consecutive paragraphs start with In 1852, 1859, 1861, In 1868....

the effort. The prose is engaging and flows beautifully with no hint of proseline. I got myself into a bit of a tiz after spotting a possible minor error...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

time, the article is no longer up to quality (all new additions are a WP:PROSELINE mess) and major news sources are no longer featuring this prominently...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

before it can be considered acceptable quality-wise, and there's some WP:PROSELINE as well. TompaDompa (talk) 16:28, 16 March 2019 (UTC) Support on significance...

being excessive, though it suffers from some style issues (primarily WP:PROSELINE), it is also well referenced. Time to take the temperature on putting...

I'm not too happy with it. I was worried about the article turning into proseline as things come in, but I've had some ideas on how to keep the section...

pings. I am not comfortable with the prose here. There is a lot of WP:PROSELINE; subsequent paragraphs starting with "On date X, Y happened". Because...

Ailes, links back to the same article (both in Criticism section) and proseline (Sexual harassment allegations and resignation section). That's not to...

2013 (UTC) Comment I know it's an essay and not a policy, but per WP:Proseline, the #Heliopause section makes me want to run into a wall. Why are the...

the ones sitting in gov't. Sourcing is just fine for posting those that proseline is a bit clumsy (but that's not a issue to stop the ITN). --MASEM (t)...

article, especially in the career section, seems to be suffering from proseline. Although paragraphs are not stubby, almost all begin with a date. There...

office is ITN-worthy. Only thing I see in the article are 2 CNs, those the proseline in the trial section is a bit clumsy but far from a problem to post. --MASEM...

post, some of his sporting career could be sourced better, and a anti-proseline purge in discussion of the trial events would be helpful. --MASEM (t)...

lacking in citations and a large chunk of it is a long list of unreferenced proseline. Modest Genius talk 01:09, 13 January 2013 (UTC) Oppose; I don't think...

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:15, 20 July 2025 (UTC) I think you might find WP:PROSELINE informative. Graham Beards (talk) 07:39, 21 July 2025 (UTC) I am retracting...

Wikipedia's quality standards. The specific problem is: it's a mess. Proseline, style, tone all need to be revamped." --76.189.111.2 (talk) 23:18, 17...

nom. Nergaal (talk) 02:51, 11 October 2012 (UTC) Comment That bolded proseline made me want to throw my computer monitor through the window. – Muboshgu...

--MASEM (t) 13:17, 6 October 2017 (UTC) "Proseline" – ??? Sca (talk) 00:18, 7 October 2017 (UTC) WP:PROSELINE, the block of text that is "On (date), (this...

withdrawal)" if the content is a mere list (in other words, major Wikipedia:Proseline issues) — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:44, 11 February 2014 (UTC) Updated with...

this happened" syndrome, or at least something very closely related: WP:proseline. Geometry guy 17:54, 10 May 2008 (UTC) Ah, marvellous, I have a term!...

the 14th of January the only new information I see are a few bits of proseline about international support. What was burning on the 10th? I have no idea...

sales charts two years after its release" Why? This paragraph is a bit proseline. It would be better to explain why sales increased or just explain that...

which is sorely lacking (need more on why the insurgency, get rid of the proseline). Suppose the news item on principle of a good resolution point in the...

principle of the topic, but boy does that article fail WP:NOT#NEWS/WP:PROSELINE in how it is written. We shouldn't have day by day summary but described...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:06, 18 July 2023 (UTC) Very substandard BLP. Mostly proseline. About a quarter of the article by weight is an inflated 'controversy'...

mess. It needs to be cleaned up a bit. Second, the entire article is a proseline and needs to be converted to a proper narrative. If we could get some...

while we're fixing things up...) A few section suffer from dreadful WP:PROSELINE problems. If someone's going to be rewriting some of the prose anyways...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

Ivanvector (Talk/Edits) 15:18, 1 November 2023 (UTC) Comment. Wikipedia:Proseline might also be a potential target, depending on what is meant by "listicle"...

context, and the story told in better format that what is basically WP:PROSELINE beginning every paragraph with "Apple announced...". FOARP (talk) 10:39...

of modern FA criteria. The copy-edit tag brings up a classic case of proseline, the numerous dead links are also troublesome, and the unreliable source...

funding "controversy" is dead. Main hearings sections has random bits of proseline. In the news or not, article is not MP quality. --CosmicAdventure (talk)...

01:24, 2 December 2025 (UTC) Parts of the article seem to fall into WP:PROSELINE: I noticed this particularly in the penultimate paragraph of "Later service"...

31 August 2022 (UTC) That article is a reference implementation of WP:PROSELINE it's a daily ticker with nothing really new or pertinent in it. It's excellent...

of the managing career section is basically just wordier-than-average proseline. Thryduulf (talk) 14:08, 8 June 2016 (UTC) Oppose on article quality....

somewhat relevant of the topic without much connection to each other (proseline). Many of the inline citations are not formatted, and most troubling,...

it is dull. For example, the first paragraph of the first section is proseline; I was also interested to read Tony1's objection at the previous FAC....

July 2022 (UTC) I want to post these, but the quality is lacking. The WP:PROSELINE really needs to be addressed, some places need fleshing out, and I wonder...

minor copy-edits, but the prose is fine. I've a few little issues with WP:PROSELINE and over-using quotes, but if we can sort these out I'll be happy to support...

tells me nothing about what the directive actually is, just a few bits of proseline about the terrible effects should it be implemented. It also has a very...

many more inline cites, and some of the mid-sections could use some de-proseline improvement. Definitely qualifies as RD for importance. --MASEM (t) 16:04...

12:31, 1 October 2021 (UTC) Comment I've got a few nit picky concerns - proseline in the COVID section, the big empty table of participants - but the only...

open to suggestions. --Activism1234 23:55, 27 August 2012 (UTC) Ugh. WP:PROSELINE much? No one has dropped a cleanup tag on it yet, but there's any number...

forgot the Indian minister. Carcharoth (talk) 22:22, 9 August 2016 (UTC) A proseline of his military career and a list of his children is not post-worthy....

to be fixed, and while there it would be nice to tidy up some of the proseline in the last few sections. It's not too far off, just needs a handful of...

like an advertisement than an encyclopedia to me and I see a lot of WP:PROSELINE. You might want to contact the League of Copyeditors. Here are some other...

WP:proselines, one-sentence paragraphs, unsourced statements, and WP:peacock terms. sst✈ 14:47, 3 October 2015 (UTC) Will hopefully work on proselines,...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

(one place explicitly marked), clarification (ditto) and turning from proseline into proper prose. Also per TRM. Thryduulf (talk) 10:32, 22 April 2017...

using words like "should" and "generally." The same language applies to proseline, but we never block on that basis alone. I agree the standard should be...

article could be a good target for the ongoing section. If we solved the WP:PROSELINE issues with it, and expanded each section to a short synopsis of major...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

throw more litter onto the pile Gender-neutral language Myth vs fiction Proseline Reading in a flow state Turning biology research into a Wikipedia article...

has plenty of prose, unfortunately it's a pretty textbook example of proseline. --LukeSurl t c 10:10, 30 April 2018 (UTC) Weak Oppose, regional-interest...