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 The following is an archived discussion of Radio Rewrite's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the...

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it appear lowercase, so it is more efficient for this purpose to simply rewrite the text in uppercase, or use "{{subst:lc: ...text...}}" to store lowercase...

Other people can rewrite this, though. Am I allowed to, or is that COI? – Muboshgu (talk) 22:18, 22 February 2012 (UTC) You can rewrite it... I'll pick...

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sentence, or does this article need a major rewrite? The Interior (Talk) 05:43, 11 November 2011 (UTC) Major rewrite - that was a particularly egregious sentence...

therefore need a rewrite to avoid such close paraphrasing/copying While the first issue is easy to fix it might take too long to rewrite the article but...

Lead Rewrite tag is a barrier to the DYK nom. QuakerSquirrel (talk) 21:16, 7 June 2021 (UTC) I tagged the lead but sorry I don't feel up to rewriting it...

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has a citation, and citation #5 verifies the hook fact. Slight grammar rewrite though... – Muboshgu (talk) 21:28, 12 November 2013 (UTC) ALT1: ... that...

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the first part of the hook either. C679 09:52, 13 February 2014 (UTC) I rewrite the section and fixed the refs. --Gfosankar (talk) 05:06, 18 February 2014...

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pages, but not of discovering problematic pages.) Let me go through and rewrite everything that I did not write or extensively edit. It should take me...

section out?Lihaas (talk) 14:22, 24 March 2012 (UTC) I've done an extensive rewrite of the article. It needs a re-review by someone who isn't me. --Orlady...

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permissions letter the copyright holder is expected to send. Otherwise, you may rewrite this article from scratch. If you would like to begin working on a new...

interesting rewrite of what was a rather shoddy example of a WIkipedia article. No wonder the editor was PO. No plagiarism concerns. The attempts to rewrite by...

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but rather than investigate the copyvio status fully, I have chosen to rewrite the climate section in this article. It should be OK now. Cwmhiraeth (talk)...

to be one, so I've added it to both hooks.) And I can't find a way to rewrite it while maintaining the delicate chronological indefiniteness that seemingly...

8 September 2019 (UTC) @Raymie: I tried to rewrite it a bit. The list content is not IMHO easily rewritable as it contains mostly legal and scientific...

had to go "back to the rewrites" after she resigned as prime minister? Source: "Liz Truss Biographers Are 'Back to the Rewrites' After Prime Minister Quits"...

show (La piñata de los $25,000), not a translation thereof. Overall: Fine rewrite. The fleshing out of KVEA's early history was especially welcome. However...

look, I noticed a lot of close paraphrasing. Antidiskriminator, please rewrite the article in your own words rather than borrowing entire expressions...

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted and want more time to rewrite it in your own words, you can contest this deletion, but don't remove the...

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Olympics" in ALT1 Whouk (talk) 09:44, 29 July 2012 (UTC) Thanks for the rewrite. I suggest using ALT1. The original hook is something he claimed after...

grammatical errors. @Human3015: I also suggest ALT3, a grammar rewrite of ALT1, and ALT2, a rewrite of Hook 1: epic genius (talk) 15:15, 19 November 2015 (UTC)...

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characters), neutral, sourced, no copyvio. But I would suggest a slight article rewrite to clarify and give it more general interest. The hook fact is in the lede...

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11 October 2017 (UTC) Thanks. The middle paragraph might merit some rewriting so that it doesn't resemble the source so much, however. Jo-Jo Eumerus...

prose rewrite, but I can't put my finger on how. – Muboshgu (talk) 18:34, 6 September 2012 (UTC) Thanks for the review. How about this rewrite: ALT1:...

Shellnut (talk) 15:52, 27 February 2012 (UTC) Bare urls are gone, but the rewriting has not been tackled yet. I find this an impressive expansion, I shall...

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rewrite that offending copied text, though. – Muboshgu (talk) 03:43, 15 April 2021 (UTC) @Muboshgu: I don't think Wikipedians should have to rewrite text...

Yngvadottir, my statement that your "rewrite may have lowered the accuracy" was not to criticise you rewriting the article, but merely to emphasise my...

is my own suggestion so I cannot approve that, unless its considered a rewrite of Alt0. However Alt0 IS a hook and it has a ref, but I cannot read the...

some of the sourcing. The article has been orange-tagged as needing a rewrite. Cheers  — Amakuru (talk) 10:28, 27 June 2022 (UTC) It's been three weeks...

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Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:34, 17 October 2022 (UTC) @Onegreatjoke: Ok, should I rewrite the above hooks to be more interesting or write new ones based on other...

I'm not sure this is ready to go. While an "expand" tag is fine, the "rewrite" tag is considered enough of a danger sign to generally stop an article...

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help links |halign= - Align the help links table Note: We still need to rewrite the help links table with portal-specific content. {{WikiProject Portals}}...

but in order to avoid that interpretation, I've taken the liberty of rewriting the section and removing fluff components that could be taken as advertising...

released in 2002." If you want to keep the hook as-is, I'd recommend rewriting that sentence in the lead to "It was released on 28 August 2015 and was...

Hidalgo, Mexico City? Reviewed: Kyle Holbrook Comment: Effectively a total rewrite of the article has occurred. In September 2015 an IP greatly expanded the...

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Rewrite the plot summary in original language; the "Full Synopsis" on that website provides plenty of information that could be used in the rewrite....

Adityavagarwal (talk) 02:18, 21 September 2017 (UTC) @Fitindia: Please could you rewrite the final sentence in the article as I find the second half of it incomprehensible...

copied and pasted. Please don't put it on the main page without a complete rewrite. --(AfadsBad (talk) 10:27, 2 October 2013 (UTC)) Also species and genera...

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people used "the world's largest" and "largest" is ambigous. So I would rewrite it as "led the team that installed the world's most powerful currently...

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Nominated by Nvvchar (talk) at 05:53, 22 April 2015 (UTC). Hook needs a severe rewrite: of in as in in. EEng (talk) 21:45, 7 May 2015 (UTC) @EEng: ALT1: ... that...

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chilling effects on freedom of speech, and accuse the government of trying to rewrite history? http://www.ponarseurasia.org/sites/default/files/policy-memos...

terrible shape and I'm actually shocked it survived AfD so it was a complete rewrite keeping a mere two sentences and adding the rest from scratch with references...

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498 characters A bit of copy/paste in the history section (see here). Rewrite the "enjoyed non competitive matches" part, and if done right, the solution...

from when I started rewriting it and not from the article's creation date. Thanks. SilverserenC 00:29, 13 May 2012 (UTC) The rewrite is acceptable in terms...

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this article has existed in the main space since 2005 and despite a large rewrite hasn't been expanded enough to be eligible. Am I missing something here...

free, hook is interesting and sourced, QPQ performed, though I'd slightly rewrite it: – Muboshgu (talk) 23:06, 23 January 2012 (UTC) ALT1 ... that the former...

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07:51, 1 October 2016 (UTC) Comment I personally did a massive copy edit/rewrite of the whole article. I would say that the close paraphrasing issue is...

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history ) ... that according to one critic, "Farewell" is a "shameless rewrite" of Adele's song "Someone like You"? Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Semavi...

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source a little too closely. So I think this section at least would need a rewrite, though I haven't looked closely at the following section yet. Gatoclass...

happens at Loyola. Article is sufficiently sourced. Let me try a slight hook rewrite... – Muboshgu (talk) 03:33, 10 April 2013 (UTC) ALT1: ... that cockroach...

poor and you work has been a vast improvement and effectively a total rewrite. However as the previous article was not a copyvio (that I could find)...

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back to this page. Moonraker (talk) 11:20, 9 May 2019 (UTC) I think the rewrite will take some time. And the article has already been featured at ITN RD...

advisor went on maternity leave? Source Reviewed: Pubal Comment: Near-total rewrite of a draft written by Captainchris74 that had been languishing at AfC since...

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history verified; offline ref accepted AGF. However, I'd like to see some rewrite work done so that instead of starting off telling us about the "differing...

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nominated. It's large enough, sourced well, AGF on the Spanish. Let me try to rewrite the hook... – Muboshgu (talk) 03:04, 10 April 2013 (UTC) ALT1: that Spanish...

tense was wrong, and so forth. In the future I STRONGLY recommend you rewrite (rephrase) material rather than copying, pasting, and modifying for both...

legislature, wrote an obscure book about Spain, and fought at Gettysburg. I can rewrite ALT0 to give more context about Pickett's Charge, but Gettysburg is the...

only mammals (or only humans) were relevant. Editors are encouraged to rewrite this portion of text so that it accurately reflects "for whom" the particular...

it appear lowercase, so it is more efficient for this purpose to simply rewrite the text in uppercase, or use "{{subst:lc: ...text...}}" to store lowercase...

research flagged as problematic (perhaps on the article's talkpage, I can rewrite them. Wittylama 11:24, 21 January 2016 (UTC) Wittylama, the trick there...

late 1920 and was interned in Bizerte, Tunisia in 1921? Reviewed: Radio Rewrite Created by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Self nominated at 06:06, 17 March 2013...

NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 04:52, 1 June 2013 (UTC) However, I would rewrite the hook to say "...were once entombed at the..." - it's an above-ground...

with sufficient references. AGF offline sources for both hooks. Slight rewrite to main hook to make clear it's not the guitar instructor who became a...

to confirm that prose issues have been addressed. Suggesting a slight rewrite of the hook: ALT1: ... that freedom fighter Jatindra Mohan Sengupta of...

pull up the page that directly cites the hook fact in the article. Slight rewrite though... – Muboshgu (talk) 15:30, 27 September 2012 (UTC) ALT1: ... that...

only mammals (or only humans) were relevant. Editors are encouraged to rewrite this portion of text so that it accurately reflects "for whom" the particular...

Elizabeth Barrett Browning (pictured) drew on newly discovered material to rewrite the myth of the invalid poet guarded by an ogre-like father? ALT1: ......

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chance of copyvio. Article is GTG for DYK. However, for pity's sake, please rewrite the source sentence to something less awkward. Try something like, "Aviation...

never read the article before, nor the sources, I can promise that the rewrite was the best I could do, and uninfluenced by anything more than what was...

applicable guideline, MOS:IDENTITY. Please do not change feminine to masculine pronouns, or attempt to rewrite all sentences to avoid pronouns altogether....

tool, an eyeball check of highlighted repeated phrases indicates a bit of rewrite is needed. The other problem with the nomination is the hooks. Hook ALT0...

that the birth of his daughter gave Ben H. Winters the break he needed to rewrite his novel The Last Policeman in the first person? ALT2:... that The Last...

baseball team, yet still made the major leagues? Comment: Open to any rewrite, but that is the best hook. QPQ to come. 5x expansion by Go Phightins!...

this laboratory, I'm really not sure how to fix this with out a major rewrite of the article to include information about how the laboratory is run and...

Cup final? Source: The National Reviewed: Will Schofield Comment: I may rewrite the hooks pending the outcome of the final. Converted from a redirect by...

Article length newness and are good. No policy issues seen, and one small rewrite done. alt1... that adult Megaphragma mymaripenne wasps are only 200 micrometres...

also. Daniel Case (talk) 06:32, 27 November 2014 (UTC) Thanks for the rewrite, which is a definite improvement- would "medal-winning" be better (just...

the largest margin of victory ever? If the answer is yes, then I would rewrite the hook to focus on that event. Best, -- Notecardforfree (talk) 22:50...

Doom Island Comment: Was previously deleted at AfD; this is a complete rewrite. (In anticipation of a follow up question, we think Planet Mellotron is...

(UTC) Some rewriting is still needed to remove the close paraphrasing. CMD (talk) 12:45, 29 March 2023 (UTC) I don't know if you meant to rewrite the article...

including on the flag bearer factoid that is the hook. I put a slight rewrite to it for ALT2 since Standard-bearer is a notable topic. Article is written...

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yet clicking the doi-link takes the reader to the current assessment. Rewriting the url value to use the identifier from |doi= gives working link to the...

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equipment for home use free of charge? Hi Muboshgu, thanks for the review. The rewrite is a little misleading, though, and underemphasizes what is a pretty impressive...

Template:Did you know nominations/Cereal Killer Cafe Comment: I pulled a complete rewrite on this article, but saved and relocated the images that were in it. I...

Baseball for playing basketball with Jimmy O'Connell? Comment: Feel free to rewrite that hook, but I've expanded this article 5x in terms of prose today. The...

2017 (UTC) Tweaked further. Let me know if its good. Else, I may have to rewrite the complete plot :) - Vivvt (Talk) 15:25, 15 March 2017 (UTC) thank you...

area, as I find the hook a little misleading and it might need a little rewrite. The hook should correspond with the article, and while the hook use the...

heard it before.) mentioned in the article, and the fan fiction did not rewrite the series, no? With ALT1, "Christian friendly" and its negative reception...

of sufficient size within the appropriate timeframe. We should probably rewrite the hook for neutrality (see below). This appears to be the user's first...

Unfortunately, the current version (by another user) is not good, so I will rewrite shortly. Nominate it now to meet nomination deadline. Created by OnWikiNo...

plagiarism--close paraphrasing may exist as well. I would appreciate a rewrite of the article to clean up these problems everywhere they exist. Thank...

and I'm not sure if Destructoid is a reputable source. Or you can just rewrite the sentence. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 00:03, 3 October 2016 (UTC) @Hybernator:...

was added in its entirety during the rewrite. I researched and added most of the illustrations during the rewrite. I made a thorough check of the citations...

the content is new. Well, much of the information is the same before my rewrite, but the entire article's been replaced. I probably should've mentioned...

everything "FMWC"), so would appreciate any comments on how to improve or rewrite it. Created by Eviolite (talk). Self-nominated at 19:11, 11 December 2021...

know nominations/Étienne Carjat, and a review/hook proposal and complete rewrite for Template:Did you know nominations/Madwoman (book). Created/expanded...

a major rewrite. Seems to have potential as an article, though. Abyssal (talk) 18:47, 12 February 2013 (UTC) You've done some good rewriting, but I'll...

The hooks are verified, but I would suggest using ALT1 after a slight rewrite for clarity. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:02, 12 September 2012 (UTC) Revised ALT1:...

getting another, non-academic job would not be unthinkable. Not sure how to rewrite it while keeping it concise though. —Torchiest talkedits 15:19, 15 June...

sourced inline and appear to be interesting enough. ALT0 may need a slight rewrite though as this cafe "was", and is no more. No QPQ is required as this is...

at 02:32, 20 January 2015 (UTC). Date and length checks out. Needs some rewrite, too much close paraphrase from http://www.sikh-history...

do than pick a new hook. You need to rewrite part of the prose to avoid close paraphrasing, you need to rewrite part of it to be factually correct, and...

in the Williamson article is too close for my liking and may require a rewrite, so I'm withdrawing the nomination. Gobōnobō + c 01:09, 19 November 2012...

Reviewed: Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Tyler_Skaggs Comment: Open to any rewrite of the hook ... not sure this is quite clear enough 5x expanded by Go Phightins...

interesting hook... Colipon+(Talk) 17:26, 19 November 2014 (UTC) A slight rewrite of the original hook:Georgejdorner (talk) 16:45, 20 November 2014 (UTC)...

The del Toro's quote is genuinely interesting, so I'd suggest a minor rewrite of that part of the article (see article talk) and possibly a new hook...

Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:14, 16 September 2017 (UTC) Suggestion: could you rewrite the opening sentence, which currently states "Titanium dioxide nanoparticles...

Self-nominated at 02:01, 12 April 2019 (UTC). That's a really impressive rewrite! You should nominate it for GA and it'll be an easy pass. Article is new...

article from a source with a few words similar, but I'm unsure how to rewrite "had an initial activity of 196 TBq" with out changing the meaning. I don't...

said total rewrite has been done. Juxlos (talk) 15:48, 24 January 2023 (UTC) Nominator hasn't edited in two weeks and the requested rewrites have not been...

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be a stickler about the five day rule, which most people aren't. Slight rewrite below. – Muboshgu (talk) 21:19, 21 January 2013 (UTC) ALT1: ... that a...

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sections by hand and think that the author of the article has managed to rewrite the material from the accident report well enough to avoid an accusation...

limited list, mainly being circles, squares and triangles. With the 2025 rewrite a new selection of shapes has been implemented, using the CSS 'clip-path'...

22:20, 10 May 2012 (UTC) Sufficient expansion, AGF on offline sources. Rewrite: ALT1: ... that Lawrence Berry Washington, a great-grandnephew of George...

a mile-long list of buleted, unlinked names. However, I'm not here to rewrite it from scratch. The wp:lede is completely unrelated to First Families...

I think this nomination can be saved, but it still needs some work: a rewrite, a restructuring, and expansion. The hook is just brilliant. --Pgallert...

environmental monitor was covered adequately by the last paragraph, but can rewrite the hook if you don't agree. I created the article and I think you will...

Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:19, 5 December 2014 (UTC) I have pulled a slight rewrite to support ALT3, complete with cite, and reinstated it as ALT4. Although...

self-critically rewrite the articles when the mistakes are discovered makes it problematic for me to think this is DYK ready without a complete rewrite. (If I...

Article on AFD, but probably will get kept. Was an unsourced BLP before rewrite WikiCup nomination Created/expanded by Secret (talk). Self nom at 23:26...

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used. I did rewrite the text from natal homing. To avoid problems like this in future, I will always make a note, even when I intend to rewrite the text...

copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - feel like a slight rewrite would be nice Overall: @Lightburst: Good article. Though, I feel like the...

all time (IMHO), which is backed up by the sources. I suggest a slight rewrite... ALT1: ... that John Bonham copied Charles Connor's drumming on Little...

where the tower now stands. If you don't think it's clear enough, I can rewrite it. Nyttend (talk) 20:46, 22 September 2013 (UTC) Sorry, I had read that...

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/MBM scandal Comment: Open to any rewrite. 5x expanded by Go Phightins! (talk). Self nominated at 22:58, 25 March...

could help him rewrite the article. Even though I'm sympathetic to Maury Markowitz's plea to give the nominator some time to rewrite the article, nine...

supported by WP:RS. Brought this out from an AFD, great rescue. Awesome expansion and rewrite. Nice job! 7&6=thirteen (☎) 13:24, 3 November 2022 (UTC)...

know if it is common practice in song-articles, but I would like you to rewrite some of the paraphrasing into prose, like the sectios about Pitchfork media...

pressing issue is that the hook is not clear enough. I would recommend a rewrite of the hook to make it clear what is meant by his participation in the...

much work to fix. Mikenorton (talk) 00:03, 17 November 2011 (UTC) I can rewrite those bits if necessary. But I should have noted that the creator of our...

I think a substantial rewrite would be necessary for this to run at DYK. @3678Agathe: if you want to undertake such a rewrite, please ping me. Best,...

concern. See [1]. I don't think it is an issue, but if you want to slightly rewrite a few sentences, it wouldn't hurt. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:06, 3 August...

you will need to add it to the article and cite it, or you will need to rewrite the hook to leave it out. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:31, 16 January 2017 (UTC)...

section. -- Ssilvers (talk) 15:42, 26 December 2014 (UTC) I believe this rewrite may answer your concern.Georgejdorner (talk) 19:44, 26 December 2014 (UTC)...

fact is throughout the "Program" section. I'm adding "ALT0c" as another rewrite to try to make the hook fact more clear. QPQ is complete, but there are...

Cielquiparle (talk). Self-nominated at 23:49, 2 December 2022 (UTC). : excellent rewrite and fivefold expansion of this article! Clearly meets the 1,500 character...

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if you point out the ones you spotted, I'll check the references and/or rewrite the sections if necessary. I also rephrased parts of the article as you...

from the Byzantine era in al-Harrah if you want to use that. Or we could rewrite the hook to simply say the Syrian town of al-Harrah was owned by a Beirut-based...

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paragraph has a minimum of one citation, hook fact adequately sourced. Slight rewrite for clarity and conciseness takes out the second "cyber police". – Muboshgu (talk)...

Subpages of this template. This hatnote is used to tag articles in need of general reorganization and/or rewriting to fit Wikipedia's Manual of Style...

While NOAA documents are in the public domain, the contributor should rewrite the problematic sections of the article in his own words in order to avoid...

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mark Sokolich Comment: Open to any rewrite of the hook, or a different hook if you can find one. QPQ forthcoming....

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Marcellus Neal Comment: Was previously AfDed here - this is a complete rewrite Created by Ritchie333 (talk). Self nominated at 17:26, 24 February 2014...

entirely. There is also an unreferenced sentence, and you should also rewrite the quote in the legal case section in your own words. --Jakob (talk) aka...

claim, instead falling under the realm of synthesis. I would recommend rewriting the hook, or using a different one entirely that is clearly supported...

structure and wording. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:18, 28 January 2016 (UTC) Comment Rewrite and copy edit complete. Does that work for you, Cwmhiraeth? 7&6=thirteen...

31 January 2022 (UTC). Overall: Cool article! But I think the following rewrite is better, and the source applies the word "pioneering" to Lewis' work...

have only done a cursory skim for that). This would need a near-total rewrite to pass. rʨanaɢ (talk) 15:10, 13 September 2011 (UTC) Fixed. Grutness....

are preferred... – Muboshgu (talk) 00:03, 19 September 2012 (UTC) ALT3 rewrite:... that winners of William Proxmire's (pictured) Golden Fleece Award for...

any sources that more concretely back up ALT1. I suppose it'll need a rewrite to make sure it's verifiable. ALT2: ... that Major League Baseball's new...

fail on that basis I have neither the time,desire or knowledge to improve/rewrite the entire article.Finnegas (talk) 22:46, 16 February 2013 (UTC) Being...

Sashashekhar (talk) at 22:10, 7 March 2014 (UTC). Comment: The hook needs to be rewrite as per DYK rules. --Gfosankar (talk) 07:48, 8 March 2014 (UTC) I got the...

Parliament, both in the hook and the article. Overall: Just waiting on the hook rewrite. SounderBruce 06:58, 14 March 2019 (UTC) Thanks so much SounderBruce. I've...

are plenty of other sources with the same opinion out there. Let's just rewrite it, shall we? Otherwise great work I must add. Lajbi Holla @ me • CP 10:33...

it should be less than 200 characters. Please provide another hook or rewrite the given one (personally it is not much interesting). Thanks. --Captain...

text for the hook, I feel it hews too closely to the original phrasing. A rewrite here should all that's required for me to give this the green check. Squeamish...

returning in 2013 and making his major league debut? Comment: Open to any rewrite of hook as needed, though I think this is the interesting tidbit. 5x expanded...

(talk) 03:30, 29 December 2020 (UTC) Thanks, @Eddie891:, are you open to a rewrite of the hook. Nothing major. As a reader, I found this hook a tad hard to...

You need to rewrite the quotes, especially the section with the list of quotes, into prose or move it to wikiquote. For some tips on rewriting quotes into...

subject but it does not seem to today. It was not a major source and I could rewrite the bits involved. It had 3 photographs and some associated text. For example...

has been done. Earwig brought up a few sentences that you will need to rewrite to remove close paraphrasing. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:20, 14 February 2021...

(talk) 09:29, 18 February 2016 (UTC) I may have been too genteel during the rewrite. The source states, "The Lao called in a helicopter to evacuate their wounded...

That is not backed up by the source either. There's probably more. Please rewrite this article. In some spots it needs citations, in others it engages in...

enough even if the synopsis is omitted. And it is hardly worthopaedic rewriting a synopsis when an excellent one aleady exists and can be appropriately...

intrepretation of quotes given in a third source. For me, the article would need a rewrite into more encyclopediatic style. --Soman (talk) 08:40, 17 August 2014 (UTC)...

cannot see similar words (and a reference) for this fact. Need to check and rewrite the hook I think and add a ref for it. Thanks. 22:50, 17 January 2016 (UTC)...

sources, too, I would like to request that you go over the whole article and rewrite the material in your own words, not copying or following the sentence structure...

done. I will expand the article after DYK and take it to GA. So I will rewrite the lead after the expansion. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 05:35, 16 January 2019...

applicable guideline, MOS:IDENTITY. Please do not change feminine to masculine pronouns, or attempt to rewrite all sentences to avoid pronouns altogether....

capitalization {{Template capitalization}} – ?? Module:String2 Magic words that rewrite the output (copy-paste will get the text as displayed, not as entered):...

high priests. The correlation, however, is erroneous." Is it possible to rewrite these to be more clear? I take it to mean that the list is inaccurate in...

000-bottle wine cellar and a Beverly Hills winery?" Which is really just a rewrite of the present hook. Either phrasing of the hooks is supported by the following:...

a single sentence article is definitely new enough, a new "creation by rewrite", plus expanded enough. I make the length 1,861 characters, so plenty long...

satellites, I think. Secretlondon (talk) 22:35, 15 September 2012 (UTC) That rewrite helped. Good little article. Ready to go. The Interior (Talk) 22:49, 15...

that require further evaluation to decide what to do with them (e.g. rewriting, merging, deletion). The category articles tagged with this template will...

Hook sources are unavailable online and are assumed on good faith. A rewrite for the hook is suggested to avoid ambiguity. Cinosaur (talk) 06:05, 27...

@DannyS712:Hi, I'm not sure if I could nominate a section of the page. I rewrite a section of the inner core page but I don't know if that counts. Kaiwenw...

removed from the page. If the source is a credible one, please consider rewriting the content in your own words and citing the source. If you believe that...

{{Uw-ga-driveby|example|Feel free to renominate the article after your rewrite is complete,}} {{Uw-ga-driveby}} Hi! I noticed that you nominated the article...

September 2014 (UTC) Hi, I just added a supporting ref to source #7. Will rewrite those lines you cited. Thanks! --RioHondo (talk) 07:23, 12 September 2014...

Since this issue is recurring in the nom's noms (nom), I'm recommending a rewrite to avoid the copyvio. (Also the article has excessive quoting, which should...

16 July 2014 (UTC). Although a lot of effort has gone into completely rewriting this article I fear it does not meet the DYK criteria as the article was...

articles needing cleanup. fiction – set |fiction=yes if the article requires rewriting to maintain an out of universe approach per Wikipedia:Manual of Style...

Chinooks were used for this record, just that Chinooks were used. Potential rewrite of DYK is recommended. Content: is interesting, is accurate and cited,...

sources to support how many medals he has won. But I'm not sure how to rewrite the sentance in the article.What about a quirky like the one below (ALT1)...

(talk) at 18:31, 28 March 2012 (UTC) Checks out, except the article needs rewriting to fix close paraphrasing. For example, from this source alone, the following...

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referenced (AGF for foreign language references). However, the article needs a rewrite as it isn't written in the best English in places. For example, "A minibus...

Promotional tone and unbalanced pseudomedical claims Dosha - Needs mostly rewriting Maharishi Vedic Approach to Health - WP:PSCI Items inactive for too long...

thing here is that Amando Doronila doesn't reveal his sources. I could rewrite that part though so that it's as if he is the one questioning it (which...

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/ZunZuneo Comment: Open to rewrite if necessary. Created by Go Phightins! (talk), Dainomite (talk). Nominated...

--Rosiestep (talk) 03:00, 7 August 2012 (UTC) Good to go following brilliant rewrite (far more than a copyedit!) by Rosiestep. I added "partially" to the hook...

I had caught up on my QPQ reviews. I'm perfectly fine with that slight rewrite in the hook. – Muboshgu (talk) 22:04, 30 April 2013 (UTC) The areas of...

sentence corresponding to the hook). The hook probably also needs a small rewrite, because it's currently ambiguous and might imply that Forde discovered...

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Clown (talk) at 06:14, 5 June 2013 (UTC). Comment — Perhaps make a slight rewrite to the hook to make clear who he is and that he has a POV: ALT1: ... that...

Reviewed: Plaza Rajah Sulayman Comment: Article recently underwent a complete rewrite from June 6 - June 8. 5x expanded by Samuel Peoples (talk), Parkwells (talk)...

it is). SilverserenC 21:18, 19 May 2015 (UTC) I would still ask you to rewrite some of them in your words. OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 16:32...

enough. This result from Earwig is a bit worrying; I think you should rewrite the bits highlighted. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:40, 9 February 2017 (UTC) @Cwmhiraeth:...

perspective is rather different to that presented. I am not sure how big a rewrite is needed to meet neutrality guidelines, but I fear it may be substantial...

October 2013 (UTC) The quotes look fine to me, but if you would like to rewrite the sentence in your own words, please do so. The hook can stay as is,...

amulet may rewrite the history of Christianity? Source: https://greekreporter.com/2024/12/13/early-christian-inscription-northern-europe-rewrite-history/...

to the previous version with the reference in the correct position, or rewrite the paragraph so as to not make it so long. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew...

Thanks. --PFHLai (talk) 00:08, 1 February 2012 (UTC) Hook is verified. Rewrite on clause looks good, and Mattlore has cleared up the "Kiwi" bit. I'm fine...

Guide, Swords & Spells, Variant Dungeons & Dragons games, More... Update : Rewrite to be out-of-universe: Companions of the Hall, Dark Sun, Elf (Dungeons...

or two. Gatoclass (talk) 13:35, 1 December 2013 (UTC) I have posted my rewrite of the article, but it could still use an additional cite here and there...

well-referenced. I rewrote several instances of close paraphrasing; you really must rewrite the material in your own words to avoid copyvio on Wikipedia. The hook...

Leona Lewis#2014: Film debut and fifth studio album. It would need a total rewrite to be eligible for DYK. DoctorKubla (talk) 07:52, 6 February 2014 (UTC)...

@Yoninah: I think that's a good idea. Should I just edit the hooks above or rewrite them below? Raymie (t • c) 23:50, 30 July 2018 (UTC) @Raymie: I guess we...

link to Metacritic (about the only non-promotional source used). After a rewrite to improve the article's quality, this might be appropriate. --McDoobAU93...

I'm OK with the linkage used to the article, the alternative would be to rewrite the hook I think, possibly by adding ", demonstrating the influence of...

Met Office. 1991–2020. Retrieved 1 January 2022. "Record-breaking heat rewrites May temperature records across the UK". 27 May 2026. Retrieved 27 May 2026...

Cabinet of 1969, had been jailed from 1948 to 1952? Approving ALT1 and my rewrite, ALT1a, as being clearer and having inline citations for the hook facts...

also like the first hook. If an image hook is needed, though, here is a rewrite of the second hook. The picture caption describing the orchestra pit works...

its own. As such, this article would unfortunately require a complete rewrite before becoming eligible for DYK. --GGT (talk) 11:07, 16 January 2022 (UTC)...

as a reader. Skyes(BYU) (talk) 20:11, 17 December 2018 (UTC) I suggest rewriting ALT0 in a more folksy way: ALT0a: ... that small-town Utah doctor John...

a bit. If it's still under, I'm willing to add some more content; I'll rewrite the specifications list in paragraph form if necessary, though I think...

hardly differing in wording from the original. I suggest you completely rewrite this paragraph in your own words, and then someone will be able to approve...

create a garment to celebrate the rebuilding of the Netherlands. Please rewrite and reorganize this section in your own words. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 21:16...

Self-nominated at 12:10, 21 August 2016 (UTC). The joy of all things you need to rewrite the hooks to link the article name in the hook. The article name link has...

@Launchballer: I have lengthened the lead. Which paragraphs in particular need rewriting? Should AFC have picked up on big WP:CLOP issues? Moondragon21 (talk)...

current article. Replacement of the prior editor's text shows at least a 90% rewrite.Georgejdorner (talk) 17:05, 20 November 2014 (UTC) Yes, I see efforts on...

of Dale Earnhardt"; there currently isn't room for both facts without a rewrite. BlueMoonset (talk) 14:52, 1 February 2014 (UTC) @BlueMoonset: Rewrote...

stages of their development. I think this may need a fairly extensive rewrite. Andrew Gray (talk) 18:09, 28 February 2013 (UTC) Thank you for your comment...

Image is public domain. QPQ done. Hook ref verified. However, I would rewrite the hook to make it more juicy, and leave out the picture: ALT1: ... that...

pass it all the same. ALT2 sounds fine as it is, just a bit of a brevity rewrite. Corvoe (speak to me) 15:17, 14 July 2014 (UTC) I would be fine with your...

a bit. I'm trying to fix the in-universe nature of it. Does it help to rewrite it like this? ALT1: ... that BioWare credited the game Star Control as...

particular obvious hook options in the, so approving this with a slight rewrite (present tense skipping parantheses). Though not a critical issue for DYK...

violet/riga [talk] 10:18, 11 November 2012 (UTC) Could you provide an example so I can rewrite it from a more neutral tone? I'm guessing this relates mostly to the Design...

better yet, rewrite them in your own words. I got as far as footnote 5. Would you mind looking over the rest of the refs and either rewriting in your own...

requirements if the article could still meet the 5x requirement if this rewrite happens. @Nikkimaria: What are your thoughts on this scenario? Narutolovehinata5...

thanks. Britishfinance (talk) 23:29, 16 March 2020 (UTC) Ok, I think the rewrite is good enough, and that was the only issue blocking approval. —David Eppstein...

article, her profession is linked to Computer imaging. Secondly, could you rewrite the hook caption? Perhaps: "First direct image of a black hole, 2015"?...

complete, thanks to recent recoveries? Comment: Given a big cleanup and rewrite the last 24 hours - would be nice to see this on DYK to commemorate the...

close paraphrasing from the trove.nla.gov source. See Earwig's. Please rewrite and reorganize these sentences in your own words. Yoninah (talk) 22:53...

Titodutta (talk) at 10:35, 9 June 2013 (UTC). The plot deserves a good rewrite, I feel. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 10:48, 10 June...

Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:19, 2 December 2022 (UTC) I'd rewrite it as something like this: ALT3 ... that a scene in "Axe and Grind", an...

(UTC) I have tagged the article and explained the need for a complete rewrite on the talk page. However, I don't have a lot of hope for the page creator...

needs to be explained. If you want "schoolhouse" in the hook, you can rewrite it as Adelphi schoolhouse instead. As for the other points of the review...

additional sources to the George of Izla article and do a double-check/rewrite of the Gabriel of Sinjar article to make sure that it does not stray to...

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reads like a list of excerpts from the sources you're quoting. Could you rewrite this so we know who these people are and why they're promoting the song...

Ridley Scott's 2023 film Napoleon a "very anti-French and very pro-British" rewrite of history? Source: “ And a biographer of Napoleon, Patrice Gueniffey in...

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meeting or that Andersson was meeting only with the governor. You could rewrite it as "...to a meeting that the county governor attended?" or "...to a...

found no major issues but think the following two sentences could use a rewrite to move a little further from the wording used in the source: "He notably...

You'll see that those errors were inserted in the few weeks since my rewrite. I'll have more time to do some page history restoration this weekend czar ♔...

people also think it's a better DYK than the king one, I am very willing to rewrite this. Thanks again! Harren the Red (talk) 08:41, 27 June 2025 Suggested...

articles needing cleanup. fiction – set |fiction=yes if the article requires rewriting to maintain an out of universe approach per Wikipedia:Manual of Style...

duh :) Probably better to match the hook to the image, so before I go rewriting the hooks, can you confirm which image you prefer at the DYK size? (The...

Award and was restored recently after suffering another aggression". I can rewrite the sentence by saying it was vandalised twice in its first year. Unknown...

Gwillhickers (talk) 00:21, 1 January 2023 (UTC) A more comprehensive review and rewrite of the article is necessary. Here is another sample from a different section:...

There is a little close paraphrasing in your ALT1 hook; surely you can rewrite the deaths of two young activists, perhaps indicating they died from their...

one of the sources. Provide a citation for the unsourced sentence and rewrite the lead in your own words, then I'll give this another look. --Grnrchst...

words) readable prose size. So that's close, and I plan to expand and maybe rewrite the lead tomorrow, so if reviewers could hold off till then, we should...

paraphrasing. No QPQ needed for first-time nominator. Image is pd. ALT0a, a rewrite of ALT0, is cited inline; foreign language source is AGF. I'm wondering...

directly from Fine, p. 50. (Google Books preview). Please make sure you rewrite any prose that has been copied in this manner in your own words. — Toдor...

is in the public domain. If the text is not freely licensed, you must rewrite or summarize it entirely in your own words. Changing a few words is still...

cited source. Activism, you need to make some major changes here, if not a rewrite of the whole article. Abyssal (talk) 15:29, 2 October 2012 (UTC) I've fixed...

(UTC) * Contains several questionable statements. I am in the process of rewriting its content and adding more references. Can promotion be held off until...

fix this; if that should take too long time, I will see if I am able to rewrite the paragraph. Oceanh (talk) 15:48, 9 January 2016 (UTC) How about using...

least, which it isn't right now. In fact, I'd strongly recommend that you rewrite it with an eye toward summarizing it because as it is, it's just another...

2020 (UTC)The4lines @The4lines: I suggest you find reliable sources and rewrite this in a balanced way. There are always two sides to every story. Yoninah...

proposal; however, I feel that it may not meet WP:EGG. Would it be possible to rewrite ALT3 to make the link to "Economy of Sarawak" clearer? Narutolovehinata5...

evolves.Blethering Scot 18:12, 27 May 2015 (UTC) The article doesn't need a rewrite, but copyediting is definitely needed. Also, is the article subject really...

source, mostly in the students' demands but also in other places. Please rewrite these in your own language, or put quotes around it. Yoninah (talk) 22:31...

(talk) 10:44, 10 July 2012 (UTC) OK - Quick rescue job done. Almost total rewrite, complete re-referencing. I did find a great hook: ALT4:... that in The...

issue in the article has been resolved. I have tried to have my temporary rewrite looked over for possible copyvios, but no luck. Hopefully I haven't undone...

too much 'like an advertisement' Template:Cleanup list Template:Cleanup rewrite Template:Confusing Template:Context for articles that need to provide more...

(talk) 22:26, 12 February 2015 (UTC) I've gone in and done a complete rewrite of the page, to improve the English language usage, citing additional English...

material. - PM800 (talk) 21:33, 20 October 2011 (UTC) Would that require rewriting the material, or finding new material to be added? The first paragraph...

article. It's good for an article to have some quotes, but paraphrasing or rewriting is often better. The Independent quote in Production giving rise to the...

I checked the page size in words: it is 1813 words now, and before the rewrite it was 350 (this revision). Artem.G (talk) 11:51, 4 August 2025 (UTC) hi...

page. — Amkgp 💬 09:48, 7 December 2020 (UTC) Comment: could you please rewrite the second sentence in the Risks section (starting with "For example, if...

close paraphrasing for me. I'll AGF with Turkish sources, but a general rewrite to make sure there is no close paraphrasing at all would make me happier...

some alternate phrasing and points of interest. Let me know if I have to rewrite it in the original nomination.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Lbal...

part of the article and I didn't check it before my nom. I may have to rewrite and provide a new hook. – Muboshgu (talk) 15:40, 10 July 2024 (UTC) Updating...

nomination was the second edit) or the editor who was responsible for the major rewrite and expansion, Realitas (now Realitas~enwiki after account names were made...

section. C679 12:57, 9 February 2014 (UTC) I think it needs a thorough rewrite. The first version supplied by WP:COI account, and there are still signs...

access the Illinois wildflower website which is strange but I tried to rewrite the hypericin section that I remember from the page. If you'd like to look...

text is too close to the original, so much so that it needs a complete rewrite. And to answer the question in the artefacts, no, graphics from this essay...

but it's a bit too closely-paraphrased for comfort, so I would advise a rewrite. The hook is cited and verified by the citations, and it is interesting...

when it's run. Thanks -- Presearch (talk) 21:10, 27 September 2012 (UTC) Rewrite makes it neutral and the hook stays under the character limit.--The Devil's...

reviewing by somebody willing to register with the source. The hook needs rewriting, following the review of the article. I know that it is an excellent faculty...

Overall: @Kafoxe: Good article. QPQ needed. Though, i'd also suggest a slight rewrite of the article. Mainly because it kind of feels like the article nears...

When we say we overhauled this article, we mean it. This was a massive rewrite to make the article both encyclopedic in tone and reflecting the history...

but I'd say it's best to make sure that all of those got purged in the rewrite. Hog Farm Talk 16:38, 23 December 2022 (UTC) @Hog Farm:, nice to see you...

Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient." So you need to rewrite the paragraph so that it consists of a single sentence, or add additional...

13:26, 11 June 2012 (UTC) Don't close this just yet. I'll take over and rewrite it. – Muboshgu (talk) 17:52, 14 June 2012 (UTC) I just put every source...

meet normal expansion limits, BUT: along with my additions it IS a FULL REWRITE... does that make it eligible? A quick comparison of the edit history from...

meaning of quite a bit of the text, as mentioned by Drmies above. I could rewrite some sections but I think we should give DYK a miss on this one. Cwmhiraeth...

doesn't meet the "new" criteria. It looks like Amccann421 did a substantial rewrite on 11 May but the prose size remained roughly the same. It also had nearly...

version before I started was copyvio text that I had to either remove or rewrite. So, I would suggest that the five-fold text expansion be counted based...

source, which makes me uncomfortable. Perhaps this sentence could use a rewrite? - Mailer Diablo 13:54, 15 August 2018 (UTC) Also, is it Petros Lanztas...

article was created from a redirect in January 2007, it wasn't part of my rewrite. Earwig says it closely matches three articles. According to the source...

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(talk) 21:39, 30 January 2016 (UTC) While this appears to be an excellent rewrite, it sadly does not qualify as a 5x expansion. According to DYKcheck, this...

decrease in size rather than an expansion. This was in two steps: a cut/rewrite on May 10, and a further expansion on May 17. However, as it says at WP:DYKSG#A4:...

of the original content was copyvio from IACM Expressions and I had to rewrite the whole thing. Moved to mainspace by Zanhe (talk). Self-nominated at...

same information, with inline citations, in the body of the article and rewrite the lead to only summarize the rest of the article. I also recommend wikilinking...

Malikepolat (talk) at 04:50, 7 March 2014 (UTC). Comment: The hook needs to be rewrite as per DYK rules.--Gfosankar (talk) 11:30, 7 March 2014 (UTC) I got the...

says the extent of her contribution has been debated. Perhaps you could rewrite the hook with a more specific fact, such as her quote about having all...

by this singular source might not be sufficient, could it be better to rewrite the hook to something like "that in South Korea, six-time world wushu champion...

about the design that could be mentioned, so I would suggest a partial rewrite. Specifically, stuff I believe should be removed includes the trivia that...

2016 (UTC) The general reader won't realize that. Is there some way to rewrite the hook to bring that out? EEng 02:58, 12 September 2016 (UTC) If this...

Clark in 1943". I can tell which parts of the Oxford bio you're trying to rewrite: I would recommend giving the article another read through and rephrasing...

way for some well-meaning anon down the line to completely, innocently rewrite it into something more like the original in the name of improving the prose)...

one cited source. However, a more compelling hook could be created by a rewrite of the original and alt hooks: ALT2 ... that Gopala Chandra Praharaj spent...

containing quotes inaccurately reproduced. Rather than using this tag, please consider being bold and rewriting the text to make the quote accurate....

02:12, 2 September 2012 (UTC) I feel your pain. I usually go the total rewrite route in these situations, but it hurts to remove plausibly true stuff...

close paraphrasing at this time to be suitable for DYK without a major rewrite. --Melburnian (talk) 02:16, 5 July 2012 (UTC) sigh - yes I see now using...

affiliated with the Baltimore Orioles of MLB. If it seems misleading, please rewrite. Created/expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nom at 19:41, 28 August 2012...

(UTC) Thanks. I know I didn't add any information to the hook, but I did rewrite it, so maybe another reviewer could sign off on ALT3. Pinging @Cwmhiraeth:...

support much. so I would urge no, don't accept this unless someone can rewrite with reliable. After reviewing this article's sources, I agree: "Artist...

who was from Michigan and was born in 1845. It was incorrect. I had to rewrite that sentence and used the citation from the Arlington National Cemetery...

tagged with a "major edit" template, I'll review it afresh whenever the rewrite is completed.-Bryanrutherford0 (talk) 14:29, 28 November 2017 (UTC) After...

do not know if this strays too close to the source and would require a rewrite. I've asked Nikkimaria (talk · contribs) to take a look. Cunard (talk)...

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publicise an entity, person, product, or idea, and would require a fundamental rewrite in order to become encyclopedic. However, the mere fact that a company...

criteria to check. Abyssal (talk) 21:59, 11 October 2012 (UTC) Have done a rewrite. I'm assuming you were referring to the section concerning the night club...

proposing different ALT (alternative) hooks in this process - you never rewrite past proposals, instead you add new ALT1, ALT2, etc. There's also a style...

not mention the 1960s, or the specific stock off of the coast. We could rewrite it to say that they rely heavily on fisheries, or, as I was looking through...

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2022 (UTC) I was quite short on time earlier, apologies. A sample hook rewrite might be "... that Iraqi poet Isa Hasan al-Yasiri (pictured) ran away from...

prestigious than mask/mask. I chose the English term but how about this slight rewrite below?  MPJ-DK  11:27, 30 August 2016 (UTC) ALT1= ... that the main event...

Stanford Fleet Street Singers first became renowned on their campus for rewriting their alma mater as a rap? Source: "According to the Book of Stanford...

copyvio reveals no problems (only minor phrase matches that are difficult to rewrite), content of the hook is backed with inline citations to reliable sources...

Madhubani art, she stands tall in the list of famous Mithila painters". Please rewrite the lead and other overly-promotional statements in an encyclopedic style...

paraphrasing than changing a word or two to a very similar word. You need to rewrite what you find in sources in your own words. Distinctive phrases, even ones...

needed as a significant contributor to the article (complete restructure/rewrite) with five+ previous noms. Struck the second hook, which comes from a quoted...

long unattributed quote lifted from the Nighthawk source. Why don't you rewrite that? Although, I don't think many of the sources used are really RS. I...

nothing about "finely textured" unless that's a rather poor attempt to rewrite "smooth". Also, some ambiguity was lost - "usually [...] red" is not the...

each other. --Animalparty-- (talk) 02:08, 11 March 2014 (UTC) With the rewrite and expansion I don't see any problems now. The article is new enough and...

day or two. Yoninah (talk) 01:16, 22 December 2014 (UTC) I completed the rewrite, adding more sources, formatting all the references, and removing the close...

when writing my articles. Rather, I read the source and summarise and rewrite in my own words. However, occasionally a sentence may stick in my memory...

hidden in a Chinese well nearly 90 years ago has forced scientists to rewrite the story of human evolution....An international team led by Prof Qiang...

too much 'like an advertisement' Template:Cleanup list Template:Cleanup rewrite Template:Confusing Template:Context for articles that need to provide more...

they should be okay now. Please take a look. If you are okay with the rewrite, sign off on the article. I just want to get this out of my queue, so I...

I had a citation originally but the submission messed up and I had to rewrite the hook (I think I might’ve made a formatting mistake) and I forgot to...

(UTC) I will try to look for more facts in the coming days, or perhaps rewrite the original hook sound a bit better (IUCN says "This fish is prized in...

would be a better phrasing, imo. Or if we were open to a more sweeping rewrite: ALT2... half of Berlin's Old City Administration Building (pictured) was...

Thanks for your patience. With respect to the first ALT, I'd prefer to rewrite it according to your suggestions, but not eliminate. What the oratorio...

22:55, 10 August 2020 (UTC) Ahsoka Dillard, thanks for the review! Your rewrite unfortunately I think introduces faulty parallelism, and thus won't work...

some of the planned patches haven't been released yet so I'm planning to rewrite them all anyway when they are. Axem Titanium (talk) 20:49, 28 July 2020...

detailed comparison. I'm striking my approval check and asking for a thorough rewrite. Binksternet (talk) 09:43, 7 September 2020 (UTC) Okay, all the copyvio...

Flibirigit (talk) 17:02, 20 May 2019 (UTC) I will need a day or two to rewrite the body. I have discovered more text that is not supported in the cited...

where these are already used, but in articles that I start or massively rewrite I use what I'm most comfortable with. It is "friar" (indeed, "brother")...

former schoolmate from Mt. Carmel High School in Quezon City" needs a rewrite, the grammar is somewhat confusing, and in part not supported by the reference...

"pioneer"? MPJ-DK (talk) 22:45, 14 June 2020 (UTC) I was going to propose a rewrite, but honestly, I think you're wrong on this one, Coffeeandcrumbs. Pioneer...

preserve the article history. Within the past few days I did a complete rewrite in my sandbox; virtually nothing from the deleted article was retained...

will remove the complete plot section in that case as I am in no mood to rewrite it just for the sake of DYK. Let me know. - Vivvt (Talk) 19:22, 10 June...

cleanup maintenance templates {{Lead extra info}} {{Lead missing}} {{Lead rewrite}} {{Lead too long}} {{Lead too short}} {{Infobox too large}} {{Not verified...

article uses first-person (I, we) or second-person (you) inappropriately. Please help rewrite it to use a more formal, encyclopedic tone. (May 2026)...

article. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 12:52, 6 November 2014 (UTC) Nice job on the rewrite; you added some interesting facts. Your lead is still a bit scanty; it...

attributed in prose (e.g. "The New York Times reports that"). I would just rewrite this in your own words. (This isn't relevant to the DYK process though...

(talk) 19:35, 28 August 2017 (UTC) Since I'm having a little problem rewriting the hook, I'd like to withdraw this nomination. Special thanks to Usernameunique...

that it might be better to either use it in the form of a block quote or rewrite/paraphrase it into in-line prose. In addition, as there seem to be no shortage...

paragraph in the source, I believe this paragraph should have a little rewrite before we promote this article to the main page. Cheers, Mentoz86 (talk)...

Article history ) ... that after Viola Roseboro' suggested Willa Cather rewrite My Ántonia completely, Cather may have based the novel My Mortal Enemy...

--Moscow Connection (talk) 15:18, 25 January 2014 (UTC) I need help in rewriting it. I really tried, but Japanese magazines don't like to publish their...

Template:Did you know nominations/Milan A. P. Harminc Comment: Before my rewrite, there was a large unsourced paragraph that should have been removed and...

(i.e. "every phraise with at least x words in common"), so that I can rewrite them as needed?Ferox Seneca (talk) 01:29, 21 August 2011 (UTC) Interesting...

meaning. The continuing demand that Wikipedia contributors should creatively rewrite the article with different terminology is a demand to destroy the verifiable...

2013 (UTC) And that's why we rewrite. If you use direct quotes of reviewers, add those in quotation marks, else, rewrite. Tito☸Dutta 14:01, 24 September...

understanding on the part of the contributors. Nothing short of a complete rewrite, starting with secondary sources such as Geodynamics by Turcotte and Schubert...

MSincccc talk 03:27, 28 December 2023 (UTC) @MSincccc: if you could still rewrite the associated text as its a very clear lift from a copyrighted source...

2014 (UTC). Kudos to the nominator for greatly expanding and completely rewriting the former unreferenced stub! Article is long enough, new enough, and...

Percentage All pages needing cleanup 34,138 0.48 All articles needing rewrite 6,525 0.09 All articles needing expert attention 1,320 0.02 All Wikipedia...

errors in the text. Also, the hook seems to be a double negative. I would rewrite the hook as well. --evrik (talk) 13:41, 4 April 2022 (UTC) As per DYK check:...

2017 (UTC) @Mindmatrix: Done some copy-editing on the article. No need to rewrite the hook, actually it's interesting way to attract more readers to the...

random facts about the books thrown together in a Wikipedia page. Could you rewrite these articles ensuring they~read more like prose, instead of one big trivia...

little useful and interesting meat, and a great deal of filler. A major rewrite will be necessary to include more meaningful material and remove a good...

a bit of repetition in the prose, and now it's at 1496 characters. The rewrite of the hook is inaccurate; it should say "from mentioning the Second World...

19:48, 12 December 2023 (UTC) @Arbitrarily0: I am not sure I like the rewrite of the hook as it seems to be lacking something. Will promote ALT0 as more...

Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 394#The Yemen Times. I do suggest this rewrite of the hook to remove other internal links and keep traffic to Jalal's...

Evolution_of_the_horse#Equus. The second paragraph of that section was a substantial rewrite from the evolution article, as I went back to the original sources and...

I remember this area of the article when composing it; a bit tricky to rewrite without losing the message. I have rewritten the passage to read, "...which...

Devilman article was based on that. Will rewrite.Tintor2 (talk) 22:48, 1 September 2020 (UTC) Gave it a rewrite.Tintor2 (talk) 22:55, 1 September 2020 (UTC)...

that Icebar Orlando is the world's largest permanent ice bar? With the rewrite the original is a bit clunky so suggest going with ALT1. AGF for the book...

January 2014 (UTC) Or "credited for". ))) On a serious note, how about this rewrite: ALT3:... that Kwee Tek Hoay's novel Drama dari Krakatau blames the 1883...

the version that is currently visible is not the version I wrote. I'll rewrite that line to emphasize his national hero status. I'm a bit hamstrung by...

include the name of the article in the hook, check this suggestion out or rewrite the hook: *... that under The North Carolina Community College System's...

think the hook is a bit confusing and hard to follow. Perhaps you could rewrite the hook so that it presented in a clearer and more concise way? I'll try...

nomination. And thank you for the reminder to work on my big NBC10 Boston rewrite. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 18:09, 17 July 2024 (UTC) @BeanieFan11: Please...

written more as a throwaway line in the article. I'd recommend a slight rewrite to the hook: ALT1: ... that the characters in the Broadway play Vanya and...

proposal. — LlywelynII 13:34, 14 July 2016 (UTC) Sorry, you want me to rewrite the article so it focuses on the hook? Is this type of suggestion within...

worry about, but I think there should be more substantial "new" content or rewrite before DYK. Rules aside, it would be nice to cite sources more recent than...

work or element of fiction in a primarily in-universe style. Please help rewrite it to explain the fiction more clearly and provide non-fictional perspective...

(UTC) Hi, Ryan, thanks for looking at the article and clearing it. The rewrite of the hook is fine, as it puts more emphasis on the new article title...

know nominations/Night Life (Willie Nelson song) Comment: Will try to rewrite that lead when I have more time and braincells available. I had meant hook...

Launchballer 18:03, 3 January 2025 (UTC). Everything looks good. Would rewrite hook to note that this was a cover. My first read of this suggested the...

been new enough anyway; length sufficient (was 1,519 characters; after a rewrite by me is currently 1,589); referencing adequate and no plagiarism or overly...

Since it is a rather long sentence that you copied from the source, please rewrite it in your own words. Is there any more information you can add to the...

could consider it a meme, and almost a catchphrase, too. Think I should rewrite the lede a bit and add the appropriate cats? Daniel Case (talk) 14:46,...

that contains the hook. Note that the 7sur7 article is most likely just a rewrite of the HuffPo article. Good to go: . Drmies (talk) 18:26, 18 April 2016...

stilted, but appears grammatically correct. AGF on the sources. Can you rewrite the hook? --evrik (talk) 23:39, 16 July 2020 (UTC) Let's see. I couldn't...

EEng (talk • contribs) 05:05, 29 June 2014‎ Thanks, EEng. That's good rewrite of the main hook. Would you perhaps have the energy to do a full review...

unacceptably close paraphrase of the primary source. It needs almost a complete rewrite. There's also something wrong with the start of the fourth paragraph, since...

May 2020 (UTC) Three close-paraphrasing issues sorted.(i hope) A minor rewrite for two of them, and a removal for the third. Both videos are tagged on...

2020 (UTC) Then I suggest you rewrite the rule because at the moment, it seems to only be against blanking stuff and rewriting. I'd prefer to take it to WT:DYK...

was published last week with serious BLP violations. I did a complete rewrite of the article. The WordsmithTalk to me 23:12, 1 May 2017 (UTC) QPQ done...

it's hard to rephrase things like that, but that's too close; it needs a rewrite or in-text attribution, perhaps both. It would make sense to go through...

Route 40" and "U.S. Route 40S" are not necessarily the same thing, so the rewrite is actually introducing a new fact that must be verified in the article...

these are individual sentences, they aren't so bad, but there's ways to rewrite them, Moonswimmer. To fix these issues, the WMF has a training module that...

(UTC) Well that seems to me to be an abuse of the process. If you want to rewrite Alt2 then we can consider that too. Surely you are saying to the nominator...

it in other articles. Yoninah (talk) 21:16, 23 May 2012 (UTC) Ok, I'll rewrite it. Done. 10:55, 24 May 2012 (UTC) Also, it being a cul-de-sac means that...

you can't make WP:OR claims about "genocide denial" either. You need to rewrite elements of this article in a more appropriately NPOV manner, and stick...

Template:Did you know nominations/Arthur Kopit Comment: Open to any hook rewrites Improved to Good Article status by Go Phightins! (talk). Self-nominated...

(UTC) @Chipmunkdavis: I've added another alternative. It probably needs a rewrite. --ProtoDrake (talk) 09:50, 15 July 2020 (UTC) Replace "used in" with "planned...

didn't see it, so I finally gave up and deleted it from the article. I will rewrite portions of the article today, specifically including information on the...

of another DYK nomination. However, there is a need for condensing and rewriting the material, focusing on Wang Zigan alone – his life and work. Perhaps...

2015 (UTC) New review needed. @Jakec: I have modified the hook above, rewriting part of it to: "ran taco stands" (plural). In support of this, I have...

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Patrick Schuster Comment: Open to rewriting the hook - information is cited in last sentence of lead. 5x expanded...

speaker and some of her quotes would make better hooks than these. You could rewrite ALT2 this way: ALT2: ... that computational biologist Bette Korber describes...

used up what creativity I have for it (which does not extend to trying to rewrite the described series from multiple authors), but for the foreseeable future...

be rewritten. Cmprince (talk) 11:32, 17 July 2012 (UTC) I've done some rewriting of the article, although I must note that it's difficult to describe architecture...

issues are a big deal. I don't think that can be fixed without a complete rewrite. I suspect the author(s) of this article didn't really read the references...

you for getting back to me, and for reviewing the article. I've tried to rewrite the article a bit to remove the tags, although I think the concern about...

close paraphrasing from the aviationanalysis.net source. If you can't rewrite it in your own words, perhaps you could put it in quotes and say it's from...

that require further evaluation to decide what to do with them (e.g. rewriting, merging, deletion). The category articles tagged with this template will...

halfway house or something. If you would like to use this hook angle, please rewrite it; maybe put the bolded subject first. Alternatively, you have a lot of...

hookier. Johnbod (talk) 18:42, 16 December 2019 (UTC) What's lost in this rewrite is that now it sounds like she became an antiques appraiser to make money...

nominations. Gog the Mild (talk) 22:34, 13 February 2025 (UTC). Overall: Great rewrite, Gog. I don't see any issues with the page. Easy pass here and I imagine...

in the lead. Yoninah (talk) 19:39, 18 May 2014 (UTC) Done, plus some rewriting of awkward and grammatically incorrect sentences.--¿3family6 contribs...

professionals". These are examples only, a full check and significant rewriting is needed here. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:24, 23 March 2013 (UTC) In my defence...

that little bit in the architecture section is a leftover from before my rewrite; fixing it now. :) sawyer * he/they * talk 04:32, 17 February 2024 (UTC)...

syndicate, while the hook states it as a fact. The hook will require a rewrite, and also the statement needs an end-of-sentence citation per WP:DYKHFC...

out. The article is NPOV. There is no BLP involved. With some textual rewrite to accommodate the hook, this article should be GTG.Georgejdorner (talk)...

detail. As Administrator Nick-D stated this article is nearly a complete rewrite from the 19 September version of this article, and well cited.--RightCowLeftCoast...