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large enough, but the lede normally doesn't require citations since it summarizes the article. If I were to directly cite it in the lede there would be 44...

doesn't have a real lede -- I would suggest a lede that summarizes the most important aspects of the article, as described by wp:lede, be added prior to...

(and not just the lede), or to have a footnote that provides a reference for it (per DYK rules). Only being mentioned in the lede without a citation...

aircraft "crashed inverted". According to WP:LEDE, I have removed the reference for the accident in the lede, as the entry for it has all the information...

that he was inspiration for characters in Lonesome Dove, as shared in the lede is not itself cited. Suggest this be expanded and sourced in article text...

However, the lede says "Crawford ... considered it the worst game he released," and is unsupported. No citations are required in the lede, but it should...

Self nominated at 15:37, 6 July 2014 (UTC). Date, length verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appears to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

inline citation is provided for the specific claim in the hook. Also, the lede contradicts the hook by stating that "most" rather than "all other known"...

a proper lede.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:24, 17 November 2013 (UTC) @User:Sturmvogel 66: Fixed the other problems. I'm not sure about the lede however....

mainly written for geologists. That's fine, but my recommendation is that the lede paragraph of the article should also be rewritten to explain the article's...

{{Incomplete list}} Lede paragraph from List of unrecovered flight recorders Flight data recorders (FDRs) and cockpit voice recorders (CVRs) in commercial...

hook is grammatically wrong, ala led not lead). Next, some parts of the lede are not rehashed in the body -- not acceptable. Other than that the other...

clean. I do have a problem with the actual name not being mentioned in the lede, this isn't being clever or hooky, it's just confusing. Strongly suggest...

would probably add two paragraph or something to the lede just to have more of a summary - ithe lede looks a bit telegraphic. But overall no problems to...

it wasn't that the lede contains nearly every bit of the remaining article. The lede is intended to summarise and at present the lede is almost all that...

waiting on QPQ. Can some of the lede information be duplicated in the article body? WP:LEADCITE discourages references in lede sections unless absolutely necessary...

reasonable citations. I have a slight issue with the hook and the WP:LEDE: the lede is the only place where "based on the Bridget Cleary incident" is clearly...

about in the hook. I still don't really understand it after reading the lede. The article needs a though our copyedit as well, but that is not a DYK issue...

copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - A bunch of the lede pings as possibly plagiarized on an Earwig scan. It looks like identical...

rewritten. {{cleanup lead}} {{intro}} {{intro-rewrite}} {{lead}} {{lead section}} {{lead-rewrite}} {{lede}} {{lede rewrite}} {{rewrite lead}} {{vagueintro}}...

eligiblity: Cited: N - ALT1 is cited, but the main hook is mentioned in the lede, where it is uncited Interesting: Y Other problems: N - Both hooks are over...

easily meets the standards for DYK. There are no citations in the lede, but the lede only summarizes things covered in greater detail in the body of the...

Hook is clearly below maximum and verified immediately following. No image. Lede paraphrasing is a little close in places and could use a copy edit. QPQ missing...

Only issue is that the lede section is too short. There are a few areas in the article that are yet to be addressed in the lede so fixing that should be...

more traditional works have many more errors. Having changed a ref in the lede, I don't think that any part of the article relies solely on Rayment, but...

so, but that doesn't mean not I'm missing something. Which claim in the lede are you concerned about? 78.26 (spin me / revolutions) 13:27, 22 June 2015...

mentioned in lede. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 16:07, 25 January 2018 (UTC) @BrownHairedGirl: Added ref for hook fact in lede. Will that work...

eliminating the piping and one redundant content footnote in the lede, and moving the other lede footnote down to the first section. -- Presearch (talk) 18:07...

should perhaps be reduced to 400 or less. Article lede should perhaps be restructured per WP:LEDE to ensure it reflect whole body (e.g., what about Restoration...

in spring in the body of the article rather than just the lede, in accordance with MOS:LEDE. --ceradon (talk • contribs) 16:52, 19 February 2015 (UTC)...

the lede is referenced to the tables (except for the first paragraph), I'd suggest that you add references to the table-referenced bits of the lede, just...

career. As such, I don't think calling her an actress in the lede is warranted. See WP:LEDE for more detail. If reliable sources cover Rorke's acting career...

is no issues with either article's lede. AHeneen (talk) 02:03, 9 July 2015 (UTC) I'm good with that. The actual lede I was looking at was in the other...

[not verified in body] Template documentation[view] [edit] [history] [purge] Shortcuts {{nvbTemplate:Nvb}} {{nvibTemplate:Nvib}} This template is specifically...

Template documentation[view] [edit] [history] [purge] Shortcut {{NoLeadTemplate:NoLead}} Place {{Lead missing|date=May 2026}} at the top of articles where...

paraphrasing. My one concern is the lack of in-line citations in the lede. Since the lede summarizes the body well, just a quick placement of a few already...

However, I have just tagged the page with a {{lead too short}} tag as the lede is one sentence long. Perhaps this doesn't matter, but all the same I think...

citation, and interest. Only problem is one external link needs to be repaired. Lede is a bit short and could better summarize the article.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk)...

to review, at least). Short enough. AGF on Swedish source. Article: The lede is too long for the article (it is currently 1/3 of the article). Size and...

Next question, what is meant by the second sentence in paragraph 3 of the lede? it currently reads "They typically live in caves or burrow into sediments...

which correspond with the hook lack inline citations. (b) One of the non-lede paragraphs (Location section) lacks a reference. --Rosiestep (talk) 03:22...

fine for the most part, other than the minor aspect about citations in the lede of the article. I think either ALT could work, with my preference being for...

Reminder New reports or details should go in the body of the article, not the lede. Please do not add new info directly into the intro section. Add it first...

to wikilink the first non-lede occurence of the term. I know some editors prefer to wikilink only the first occurence (lede + main article). I find the...

of stand-alone lists where the list inclusion criterion is defined in the lede. Do not use on articles. {{Stand-alone list}} produces If editors wish to...

printers Comment: Statement and source supporting hook can be found in the lede and in the second to the last paragraph in the 'Bookbinder' section Created...

{{intro}} {{intro-rewrite}} {{lead}} {{lead section}} {{lead-rewrite}} {{lede}} {{lede rewrite}} {{rewrite lead}} {{vagueintro}} The above documentation is...

article is new, long enough, and compliant with WP policies through the lede. The hook is NPOV, interesting, and cited with an in-line citation with direct...

article has a lede which summarises the article, but none of the references in the lede are used in the article itself, which suggests that the lede contains...

into hook. I suggest making use of Template:As of in the article's lede and post-lede paragraphs, so that its dated claims (As of January 2018) are more...

of a paragraph in the lede (an unreferenced paragraph, in fact) but is only included as a passing mention in the article. The lede should be a summary....

who added the tag to add something to the lede if they feel fit, but it is quite a short article so the lede seems quite adequate to me. Sionk (talk) 23:41...

referenced the incident in the passage below, I used the term "honey trap" in the lede (and the hook) without a direct citation of that passage. I have included...

citations for the different names in the lede. It doesn't seem controversial enough to warrant citations in the lede, and I think have four right at the start...

the 2nd para of the lede fits right in with the first para.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:11, 9 October 2013 (UTC) Is it not OK as the lede is meant to summarize...

link decades? I'll write a short lede for the article. --Soman (talk) 13:59, 13 August 2012 (UTC) I've expanded the lede a bit and added sections now. --Soman...

where one character caused the death of another. Plus, like the article lede, it's a bit too in-universe, which it seems to me we try to avoid in DYK...

going to be nominated for featured list status, I've reverted the lede back into a lede format, as it is a lengthy introduction for the list below, and...

paraphrasing issues. Please add a ref to the Location paragraph. All other non-lede paragraphs have refs and all appear to be RS. Images are from Commons. QPQ...

the lede so I'm not sure it's accurate. I also don't have access to the cited book. ALT1 seems to derive from an unsourced assertion also in the lede. ALT1...

Suggestions. Consider one round of copy edits across the article. Expand the lede to more than a sentence. There is definitely content in the body (e.g. organizations...

the lede, if the text in the body has the appropriate refs. And if the issue is not controversial. So you may wish to remove those. It gives the lede a...

the lede later tonight. Will also relook the desk vs door thing. Ktin (talk) 18:35, 13 December 2021 (UTC) Thanks for your patience Dumelow Lede expanded...

@Eccekevin: There are some typos and improperly-capitalized words in the lede. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:01, 11 July 2018 (UTC) The nominator has not...

quite accurate, as recent research (cited in the second paragraph of the lede and in the Taiyuan Massacre article), has shown that the reports from the...

rewrite to clarify and give it more general interest. The hook fact is in the lede, but unsourced. Later in the article the facts are sourced, but the hook...

have a done a copyedit and better lede on Mildred Harnack. If somebody can do a lede and do a copyedit.. I'll do a lede in the next couple of hours. scope_creepTalk...

4) is about the lede / targeting issue - is this about only the British gown, so change the title, or is it broader, so modify the lede / structure? On...

Detector" complaints a moderate rate (32.0%) of text similarity found in the lede. I guess a rewording is necessary. Someone with more knowledge can comment...

source: "it is the largest and best documented Saugeen Complex site" to lede: "is the largest and best-documented within the Saugeen Complex", so maybe...

a prostitute in a Bangkok brothel". What is incorrect about the lede? Should the lede and the hook differ? Neelix (talk) 01:45, 12 July 2012 (UTC) Needs...

particular species of barnacle (that seems to be the implication of the lede), or does it refer to a group of species with a similar appearance? Is it...

article needs a different lede. As in, a real lede not a circular restatement of the article title. I know that the current lede follows that of Unemployment...

has sources, QPQ done. Article could use a little more basic info in the lede and infobox, like date and location of birth. Morganfitzp (talk) 14:09, 15...

August 2015 (UTC) The hook fact is uncited in the lede and contradicted by the final sentence of the lede and in the history section. Belle (talk) 01:14...

@Buidhe: Can you supply a verbatim quote from the source that follows the lede sentence (which is the basis for the hook) that the Palestinian Authority...

and ALT1 are both uninteresting. Lede is almost impervious to someone unfamiliar with the special term used therein. Lede also does not adequately summarize...

MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 00:42, 8 April 2012 (UTC) This has been sitting here forever. The lede at List of United States state and local officials convicted of federal corruption...

nomination time. Its sources are inline cited. I'm not sure whether the lede is proper formatted. If you don't mind I would suggest as "The Church of...

habitations is an important factor. You have it stated as "exceptional" in the lede, is it really exceptional? Exceptional for the region, maybe? 1500m above...

be cleared: The image is ©-free but is not included in the article. The lede says he was the director of the Forum for South Asia Studies, however after...

expanding the lede a bit, a sentence or two. Other than that, looks fine: SiT article looks unprofessional with only 5 words in the lede. Crisco 1492 (talk)...

between plants with it. Article's lede looks good. A minor edit can be attempted to bring the article's body close to the lede and to the hook. But, with or...

without giving a reason? Source: See Shelter England & Shelter Cymru link in lede and Background Reviewed: Peterborough recall petition, 2019 ALT1 ... that...

Sourcing looks good. (By my understanding of common practice cites in the lede aren't necessary? If they are, then maybe just drop in an extra reference...

changed the lede with the fact cited in the hook.  Ploni💬  15:14, 2 January 2023 (UTC) @Ploni: Cool, thanks. Now the hook and the lede check out...but...

a yacht club? Yoninah (talk) 20:02, 18 June 2018 (UTC) I've expanded the lede and also added to the body of the text, "He was described by The Philadelphia...

formatted. The hook content is both in the body and lede of the article, but only cited in the lede. I'm not sure if that matters for this process since...

exception of the information on the disestablishment which only appears in the lede and is not cited. I also have some doubts regarding the comprehensiveness...

concerned about the article itself, which strikes me as disorganized. The LEDE doesn't really say clearly what ARQ-M is, it talks about how it does whatever...

complete. Good to go. I made some ws edits to lede. Not for DYK, but would suggest more radical trimming in the lede. Maury Markowitz (talk) 12:19, 29 June 2021...

a stab at the lede tomorrow. Rotideypoc41352 (talk · contribs) 16:03, 8 June 2021 (UTC) @QuakerSquirrel and Chidgk1: I've given the lede a shot. I would...

the hook and the intro were in the body but I've just added them to the lede as well. Please review. Thanks. Hybernator (talk) 14:19, 13 June 2015 (UTC)...

characters, but the article phrase that was used for the hook is from the lede and not cited. The source citation in the article body is after a sentence...

This template is intended for use by the Lede Improvement Team on articles with ledes that are currently being worked on by a team member. It should be...

(talk) 18:24, 18 March 2015 (UTC) @Gerda Arendt: Thank you. I am learning. Lede is summary, no? Think I have that now :) All incorporated into the body now...

you for reviewing this. I based the lede on Amador Valley High School, a FA so I kind of followed its lead on the lede sentence, but I'm happy to adjust...

with the subject. BuySomeApples (talk) 07:27, 11 January 2023 (UTC) The lede says Sosates "flourished during the reign of Ptolemy XII (80–51 BC)." but...

was a much more than 5-fold expansion in the lede section. 2. There were about 2000 characters in the lede on the nomination date. It seems neutral and...

not long enough, still doesn't make notability clear, and has more in the lede than in the Career section. Also, I have just looked at the source for that...

29 April 2021 (UTC) KittenKlub, I was going to promote this one, but the lede paragraph in the article is confusing. Is Oospunt the name of the region...

(UTC) Oh right, I forgot I had to do that. I am a bit concerned that the lede says that it was the only snowfall in those two places, which borders original...

(4645 characters). At the very least, I could see that it could have a short lede section, and maybe two separate sections about its history and the events...

rules, you may be blocked from editing: You are not permitted to modify the lede paragraph of this article without prior discussion and consensus on the talkpage...

15 November 2012 (UTC) All paragraphs have referenced sources (except the lede, which merely summarizes the content of the article). However, if a paragraph...

think you could add to the lede, though. She was a precocious little thing, and that would be interesting to have in the lede, how young she started studying...

supported below the lede and because the lede has other citations, I suppose Mailer pp. 102-131 could be stricken from the lede. Location (talk) 15:25...

the lede (this is optional of course as the expedition doesn't have its own article and is linked in Byrd's article, which is linked in the lede). Another...

sourced, but I think we should have a source for the second sentence of the lede (nick name for mosque). As for the hook, it is sourced to something that...

article, but some DYK reviewers like them to be sourced if mentioned in the lede. I am ambivalent about that requirement, but it might be a good idea to do...

However, Earwigs gives a score of 41.5%, and the lede seems to be based on this link. I'm not sure if the lede was copied from Stereoboard, or of Steoroboard...

species group. It's like the Honda Civic (tenth generation) lede image also being used as the lede image in Honda Civic, the former being a "subspecies" of...

fixed a quotation in the lede, and also added a "citation needed" template to the lede since all quotes, even if in the lede, need to be cited there....

Unless the information in the lede isn't repeated in the article body, I'd suggest that you remove the references from the lede as redundant; just keep them...

all OK. I corrected a couple of typos, and "introduced" the Turgesh in the lede, for the non-specialist reader. Good to go. -- Vmenkov (talk) 04:54, 24 May...

nearly 20 collaborators. Also, the list of collaborators in the lede is not cited in the lede or in the body. Can this be resolved? Z1720 (talk) 17:17, 21...

you expand the lede to make the article more DYK worthy? --evrik (talk) 15:54, 24 May 2020 (UTC) @Evrik: I can work on expanding the lede, but it looks...

nominated at 19:09, 4 May 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

The lede sounds like the article will be company propaganda, which it is not; this should be improved before the article is used for DYK. The lede should...

Self-nominated at 18:10, 1 May 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. All refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

mentioned in the lede, for openers. Bishop was a Republican yet the lede more than suggests he was a federalist because of his family. Lede is very short...

full marathon of Cambodia in the body, though it is cited in the lede. Typically the lede has no citations and citations follow the text in the body of the...

the lede and not found anywhere else in the article. MOS:lede tells us that there should not be any references or unique information in the lede, which...

instead of being in the lede. The sentence that goes "It has been a local surprise hit" could probably be moved to the end of the lede or before the part about...

interesting. Question to nominator: Any reason why the lede has the Patella called out as kneecap in the lede but not in the body of the article? It will be good...

good length. No paraphrasing spotted. Alt1 is only mentioned in full in the lede and is not reffed. The main hook is cited to an off line source. Not sure...

at 02:28, 21 March 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

at 21:46, 10 April 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

styles? Edwardx (talk) 18:17, 9 December 2013 (UTC) hmmm.. the article's lede says " it is considered to be either Queen Anne Revival or Arts and Crafts"...

go. Might want to consider adding something in the last sentence in the lede into the hook, because that seems pretty important. Maury Markowitz (talk)...

expansion) verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF by seasoned editor. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

the lede is longer than any of the other sections (including the History section if you exclude the quote). Perhaps some of the content in the lede could...

October 2013 (UTC). Length, date ok. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS; all refs are offline. The...

18 August 2014 (UTC). Length (>5x), date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. No apparent close para-phrasing issues. Interesting...

Length, date, hook's ref verified. No apparent close paraphrasing issues. Non-lede paragraphs have refs. Interesting hook; its length is fine. QPQ done. GTG...

isn't directedly cited in the article (see 3b). (Lede should be a summary of the prose, where every lede fact should be cited.) A better hook might be one...

hook's reference verified. No apparent close-paraphrasing issues. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all the refs appear to be RS. QPQ done. GTG. --Rosiestep...

the points as mentioned with some rewording, in addition placed hook in lede, hope this helps.ChrisWet (talk) 00:58, 8 March 2014 (UTC) Very good with...

paraphrasing requirements, the lede seems really short considering the length of the article. I know this isn't a GA, but the lede really ought to be more than...

(UTC). Length (>5x expansion), date, hook's reference verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

nominated at 09:56, 1 November 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

would be that the info in the lede is not sourced anywhere in the article. czar ⨹ 11:28, 23 April 2015 (UTC) @Launchballer, lede needs to be sourced czar ⨹...

at 11:40, 25 April 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

03:46, 31 January 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have inline citations. All refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

verified. Hook's Chinese language ref accepted AGF seasoned editor. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

of stand-alone lists where the list inclusion criterion is defined in the lede. Do not use on articles. {{Stand-alone list}} produces If editors wish to...

lack citations. Second sentence in lede, pertaining to the hook, is not cited. Also, anything summarized in the lede should be covered in the body of text...

 Self nominated at 14:21, 13 September 2013 (UTC). Yeah great! Perhaps the lede could be a little longer, but everything checks out nicely. Good work. violet/riga [talk]...

proper lede (which is not an issue but improvement opportunity). I formatted the first sentence per MOS ( bolded the title and moved part of the lede which...

bolded, which I presume was an omission by the nominator). I'd note that the lede section contains some content not mentioned in the body text or directly...

think it might be helpful to insert a header into the article, separating the article body from the lede.--Epeefleche (talk) 08:09, 28 October 2011 (UTC)...

2014 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. I'm not a fan of multiple...

10:55, 26 January 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have citations. No apparent close paraphrasing. Image is from...

6 February 2016 (UTC). New enough, long enough, within policy. All non-lede paraphraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

hook fact was cited when stated in intro and reworded to match hook and source; also took xlink out of lede. Daniel Case (talk) 18:49, 10 May 2014 (UTC)...

2014 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

general the sourcing is fine, although it could use references added to the lede. Philepitta (talk) 23:00, 23 March 2019 (UTC) Thank you for the review. We...

it has an inline citation; its length is fine; it is interesting. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

at 16:53, 22 April 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. All refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

at 22:48, 25 April 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

article lede and I'm not getting into my mind what fits best here? The hook doesn't look hooky to me either. Could you place help rephrasing the lede? Can...

points. I will attempt the lede expansion later. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 22:55, 26 December 2017 (UTC) Applications summarised in lede. Graeme Bartlett (talk)...

Article issues not addressed, plus it has a "refimprove" template and a tiny lede. ( Back to TM:TDYK Article history ) ... that among the notable events of...

Six-Day War I dont think this is a full sentence. Can you also extend the lede?, it is too short. Other than that all looks good. Good article will come...

section. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:39, 15 August 2015 (UTC) I copy edited the lede. However, it already summarized the whole article. In fact, there haven't...

3 October 2013 (UTC). Length (>5x), date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No copyvio detected. Interesting...

sourced in the Grover Cleveland, so maybe you could use the source there. The lede should probably incude something about the professorships he held. Regards...

only place 30 countries appears is in the lede, which is uncited. You can either cite that sentence in the lede, or add a cited sentence in the body. Alt...

at 08:41, 28 June 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

not expanded on in the body of the article, and since the lede is meant to summarize the lede, I think you should tell a bit more about this in the body:...

19:13, 10 November 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs and all of them appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

at 15:06, 15 March 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All refs appear to be RS; all non-lede paragraphs have refs. No apparent copyvio issues; spotchecked the one ref...

at 12:24, 26 April 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

date, hook's ref verified. No apparent close-paraphrasing issues. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. Image is from Commons. QPQ...

you're saying but the age of death is unsourced. It is mentioned in the lede, but it is not backed up by references. Vacant0 (talk • contribs) 15:52,...

date, hook's ref verified. No apparent close-paraphrasing issues. All non-lede paragraphs have refs and all refs appear to be RS. Interesting hook. QPQ...

information, both in the hook and the article. The hook (as well as the lede of the article) both state that Maizefield was allegedly used as a hideout...

the cn tags would be in the lede of other articles, which might confuse editors as citations are not always needed in the lede, per MOS:CITELEDE. I propose...

09:23, 23 August 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

all of the material in the lede is cited in the body copy of the article, and there are no controversial statements in the lede likely to be challenged,...

at 13:39, 30 April 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

2015 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

3 December 2013 (UTC) Expanded. And put the problematic sentence in the lede and changed it.--BabbaQ (talk) 00:44, 3 December 2013 (UTC) Good to go. Length...

article and summarized in the first two sentences of the lede. The last paragraph of the lede summarizes the most important part from the "Influence" section--that...

07:13, 20 July 2015 (UTC). New enough, long enough, within policy. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

date, hook's ref verified. No apparent close para-phrasing issues. All non-lede paragraphs have refs and all refs appear to be RS. Images are from Commons...

date verified. Hook's ref --subscription required-- accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

rules are rules. It shouldn't take too much work though, write a proper lede for one and paraphrase that paragraph that was copied (it's terribly written...

August 2013 (UTC). Length (exceeds 5x), date, hook's ref are fine. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. Copyvio check shows no problems...

(UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. Very well referenced; all non-lede paragraphs have references. No copyvio issues detected. QPQ not required...

In response to your request for arbitration, the Arbitration Committee has decided that arbitration is not required at this stage. Arbitration on Wikipedia...

sourced, and interesting; their QPQ done; Image is N/A. Nice article. The lede could probably do with some expansion, but hey. —SerialNumber54129 paranoia...

20 September 2013 (UTC). Length (>5x), date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; the two refs are RS. No copyvio detected. QPQ done...

Article is well-referenced (although personally I'd avoid too many refs in the lede), hook is interesting and cited, no plagiarism (of course) and QPQ is done...

10 January 2015 (UTC). Length, date, ALT1 hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. All refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

No apparent close-paraphrasing. Very well referenced article, and all non-lede paragraphs have refs. Interesting hook; its length is fine. QPQ done. GTG...

November 2015 (UTC). New enough, long enough, and within policy. All non-lede paragraphs have reliable sources. No close paraphrasing or copyvio detected...

and media coverage. Every paragraph except for the lede has a citation, and the info in the lede is expanded upon/cited in the article. Hook is cited...

enough, within policy. Original hook is hook and within size limits. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

confirmed with an inline citation. No apparent close-paraphrasing. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. Very well-cited article....

accepted AGF, well-referenced little niggle: I dislike the ugly "as of" in the lede. Should be re-phrased, but this is just my personal preference. 155–158 North...

Reviewed Manuel Garnica Roldan Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

2015 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

at 10:49, 24 April 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. Interesting hook; hook's...

career section with a couple of headings, just to break it up. I think the lede section is way too short and doesn't adequately summarise the article's body...

consider it a meme, and almost a catchphrase, too. Think I should rewrite the lede a bit and add the appropriate cats? Daniel Case (talk) 14:46, 25 October...

2013 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No copyvio detected. QPQ...

The following is a list of colors. A number of the color swatches below are taken from domain-specific naming schemes such as X11 or HTML4. RGB values...

(talk) 04:25, 26 November 2013 (UTC) The first paragraph I believe was the lede which we usually don't have a requirement to be sourced, but now it is. Due...

23:59, 28 February 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

think her self portrait might work better. Lots of refs. I did copy edit the lede. Images are under a 70 year rule - does this work in the US? Nice article...

prescribed limits. However, Johann Strauss 'on a DVD' is only mentioned in the lede but not mentioned in the body of the text with a source. Just a minor detail...

Referenced throughout with reliable sources. Hook is mentioned in both the lede and the "Critical reception" section. And I pretty much like this song. :)...

is new to DYK so no QPQ is required. I have removed "award winning" from lede as per MOS:PUFF. Only one issue remains: Minard became a special correspondent...

searches tend to bear out the hook. Hook is cited in the body though not in the lede, and is short enough and interesting. Image looks ok small and is PD due...

02:28, 7 September 2013 (UTC). Length, date, hook are all verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent copyvio detected...

at 20:22, 23 March 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

(UTC). QPQ = Edward Hulton (senior) Length, date, hook verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent copyvio detected...

Hook's foreign language ref accepted AGF with seasoned editor. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

Just a comment, not a review. I think the article might benefit if a short lede was included; and then a main section about career, in addition to the personal...

14:24, 17 August 2013 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs are referenced. All refs appear to be RS. No copyvio detected...

Copyvio has one hit but that site very obviously copied an old revision of the lede without attribution. Sources look good from spot checks; rest AGF per GA...

need a couple of inline citations. Also, the very first sentence in the lede is extremely confusing--took me a few re-reads to decipher it--and should...

Hook is interesting; supported by refs. All refs appear to be RS; all non-lede paragraphs have refs. No apparent close-paraphrasing. Img is PD and used...

02:50, 22 November 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

little too short. 和DITOREtails 08:15, 6 January 2014 (UTC) I've expanded the lede a bit, thanks. --Canley (talk) 03:04, 7 January 2014 (UTC) That's better...

at 00:19, 18 April 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

6 February 2016 (UTC). New enough, long enough, within policy. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

found. You might want to also mention that the house was restored in the lede. One sentence would do it (but not required here). Article is good to go...

title> – emitted when <article title> does not have any sections except the lede Advisory message: markup removed; cannot link – this is emitted when a section...

21 October 2013 (UTC). Length (>5x), date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No copyvio detected. Image...

2014 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; both refs are foreign language so unable to check for...

17 July 2013 (UTC). Expansion length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; excellently referenced article; all refs appear to...

copyvios detected. QPQ done. Interesting hook; hook's length is fine. One non-lede paragraph is missing a ref; after this is addressed, the article will be...

Africa Comment: Statements and sources supporting hook are found in the lede and the 9th paragraph in the 'Printing career' section. (The paragraph begins...

2014 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. QPQ done. GTG. For Women's...

2014 (UTC). QPQ done. Article new and long enough; all paragraphs except lede are sourced. There are a variety of online sources; no close paraphrasing...

date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF by seasoned editor. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. All refs appear to be RS. All refs are offline. Interesting...

who don't understand this necessarily, having a sentence at the end of the lede that says "class", and the source clearly saying "subclass" in its title...

it's reasonably well cited. I've added a citation for the statement in the lede about the application of EHF therapy and one for his date of death as they...

Created/expanded by Prioryman (talk). Self nom at 18:00, 31 October 2011 (UTC) The lede is rather short compared to the sections. All of the sources are offline...

"Source:" at the bottom? For another, the lede is far too long compared to the article's body. Generally, the lede should summarize the text in the article...

(UTC). New enough and long enough. QPQ present. Hook fact is cited (in the lede) to two offline sources (AGF). Sufficient inline citations (I note one paragraph-ender...

Another great little article. Added commas to hook, and touchups in the lede. Long enough, new enough, well cited. Waiting on QPQ. Maury Markowitz (talk)...

section to be redundant. Also, why does the hook fact appear only in the lede? ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 12:35, 13 October 2013...

to the nominator for next steps. Can I also request another pass at the lede. Also, the External links has an IMDB link. Is that the same person? Seems...

accepting them AGF of a seasoned editor. No apparent close-paraphrasing. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. Very interesting hook; its...

than 200 characters -- citations check out. Fixed close paraphrasing in lede (hook). QPQ satisfied. Article good to go. -- Gwillhickers (talk) 22:23,...

at 13:05, 30 November 2017 (UTC). @97198: long and new enough. Every non-lede paragraph is cited. Article is neutral in tone. Earwig doesn't pick up anything...

Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: - no -- lede paragraph needs to be reworded. Overall: Mostly ok -- a little rewording...

it's fine), date, hook's reference verified for both articles. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

review to follow, but right now the article is in need of reorganization. The lede is very long, almost as long if not longer than the actual article text....

Self-nominated at 17:53, 1 May 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. All refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

July 2014 (UTC) Thanks for the review. That statement was footnoted in the lede, but not in the body. I added a footnote to the body. --Orlady (talk) 12:54...

hook 1 is more likely to be chosen). I would recommend that you expand the lede a little more and add temporal range information to the taxobox (if you don't...

detected; note, though, that most of the refs are Spanish language. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. Logo img is from Commons. QPQ done. GTG. --Rosiestep...

date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF by seasoned editor. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

The link is in the article--it is currently the first link (found in the lede). And, as noted, this is my first nom (as far as I can recall) so I don't...

It's still there in the lede.  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 13:06, 19 February 2026 (UTC) I have rewritten the sentence in the lede.Faldi00 (talk) 09:46, 28...

New enough, long enough, within policy. Well-researched article; all non lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

mean? I have removed unwarranted spaces in the article. Some links in the lede and infobox would be also helpful. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 04:43, 3 April 2019...

at 22:45, 18 June 2013 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

"known" matches article and source better ("known" is in the Valls article's lede). I agree with with Rochelimit about both "calçotada" and "castells" needing...

(UTC). Lenght (>5x), date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. All refs appear to be RS. All refs are offline so unable...

ironic turn of events", since this is more a matter of opinion than of fact. Lede requires proofreading. Good but not yet ready. groupuscule (talk) 23:02,...

AGF by seasoned editor on reference which isn't available online. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

25 January 2021 (UTC) Reading the article, I think a more comprehensive lede is needed to explain the rest of the article. I read it and didn't understand...

2013 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. This is a well-referenced...

The article could also use a tidy of the lede: moving the citations to the body, and ensuring all text in lede is supported by the article body. I have...

title italicised as it should be. Have a small gripe about citations in the lede but that's not relevant to this review. Nice! Cheers Kingoflettuce (talk)...

November 2011 (UTC) KF is OK (new, long, neutral, refs, no cv). Fine for DYK. Lede is too short, and other sections; phraseology could be improved. But, fine...

faith. The only comment I would make is that another sentence or two in the lede as a better summary would look nicer. But, regardless, it's accepted. Good...

date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF by seasoned editor. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. Both sources used are reputable, but offline. No apparent...

address this issue? --Rosiestep (talk) 03:39, 5 June 2014 (UTC) All non-lede paragraphs now have sources. --Rosiestep (talk) 04:07, 6 June 2014 (UTC)...

07:05, 22 March 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verifieid. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

Length (>5x), date verified. Hook's German-language ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. QPQ done (for transparency...

articles#Paragraphs and added Google translate with minor touchups in the lede. Everything checks out. Article is good to go, but the review's missing....

the article. I'm unclear on which sections are not completely sourced. The lede doesn't have any sources which I think is fine according to WP:LEADCITE but...

still lean towards ALT1 for now. My main concern at the moment is that the lede only gives his date of birth and implies he's still alive even though he's...

first memoir published by a First Lady of the United States? Source: in lede Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Japan National Route 281 Created...

duplications. I have added one more reference with clarification in the wp:lede. Good to go. Poeticbent talk 18:09, 11 July 2015 (UTC) New enough. Long enough...

date are fine. Hook's ref is verified with ref2. All refs are RS. All non-lede paragraphs have a ref. QPQ done. Hook is interesting; its length is fine...

2013 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS; well referenced article....

your concerns. I have now removed unneccessary extra citations from the lede.[3] As it is his Batman fan film works that are receiving recognition from...

nomination's approval, I do think that the lede and manga development could be expanded further. The lede says nothing about the manga's development,...

has 189 characters with piping, bolding and linking. I've copy-edited the lede to complete some sentences and dropped "And" from the one that had it. The...

November 2014 (UTC). Length (>5x expasion), date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs and all appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

appears unexplained the first time. I would like to see it explained in the lede. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:04, 5 December 2011 (UTC) I went with NKVD in the...

sure the hook is referenced in the article. There are no references in the lede (which is fine) but in the body we don't say rotting wood anywhere - we say...

2014 (UTC). Length (>5x expansion), date, ALT1 hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs and all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

.. ;-) Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 07:09, 19 May 2013 (UTC) Thanks for the review. Expanded the lede a bit. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:17, 19 May 2013 (UTC)...

from specimens collected by "Orii of the Orient" (pictured)? Source: in lede (but in Japanese): 「東洋のオリイ」(東洋 = Orient; の = of; オリイ= Orii) Reviewed: Template:Did...

an image and requires no QPQ as nominator has 0 DYK credits. However, the lede of the article should be expanded before nomination is passed. Liam E. Bekker...

(talk) 20:04, 10 May 2014 (UTC) Comment. Could we have a bit earlier in the lede to the etymology of its latin name? It is well-referenced but not mentioned...

Overall: There are some copyvio issues. The first two sentences of the lede appear to be copied from this source. Some issues with the hook which I have...

length/substance in the article in order for it to run on DYK – breaking out a lede or sectionating could accomplish that, or just adding a bit more information...

The only thing left on the checklist is that there's no references in the lede; I don't know if that's a problem or not, so again, somebody who's better...

(talk) 18:28, 18 January 2022 (UTC) I was referring to the sentence in the lede that says "collapsed in 1996 following a storm", not the one in the body...

Hook's ref in the pdf accepted AGF as the document won't open for me. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all of the refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

the citation given where the name change is mentioned? Not the one in the Lede where citations are frowned upon but the one in the body of the article?---Balloonman...

5 July 2023 (UTC) I think it would be better if it were moved into the lede, which I've done. Good to go.--Launchballer 14:58, 8 July 2023 (UTC) Hi,...

paraphrasing. I did a first pass copy edit and replaced a sentence in the lede which was unsupported by the rest of the article. It now has a photo but...

I had it in the lede, but not in the body. It is corrected now, but I am confused about the part of the Fenner Prize. Both in the lede and body the file...

at 18:24, 13 June 2013 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. Copyvio check doesn't find...

verified; half accepted AGF) is ok. No apparent close paraphrasing. All non-lede paragraphs have refs. QPQ done. GTG. --Rosiestep (talk) 19:08, 28 November...

ref verified; the other half is accepted AGF by seasoned editor. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

article? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:56, 13 July 2015 (UTC) I cited in the lede where with the source that states she is a soprano. SusunW (talk) 21:58,...

7 November 2015 (UTC). Long enough, new enough, within policy. All non-lede paragraphs have inline citations. The one ref used is a RS. No images. QPQ...

date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF by seasoned editor. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RL. No copyvio detected. Interesting...

2013 (UTC) Not DYK criteria, but I'll put the years of operation in the lede. Passengers appear to have been minor overall in this railway's business...

(UTC) Length, source and history verified. I fixed some format issues in the lede. I also don't think the little pictogram is necessary in the section hed...

are referenced. The hook fact is referenced in the body, but the article lede doesn't mention the new Big East Conference, which creates a discrepancy...

2021 (UTC). Policy compliance: Adequate sourcing: Neutral: - Not quite. The lede talks about a "media sensation" and describes her as "a symbol" and "an icon"...

7 December 2021 (UTC). Substantial new GA; only issue I see is that the lede doesn't cover the entire life (what about 1792-1814?); I would suggest to...

chronological description of the development of the party. Article now has sections, and lede has been reworked. --Soman (talk) 08:46, 5 April 2012 (UTC)...

Article is new, long enough and cites sources. Fixing order of refs in the lede is welcome. Dup detector finds no close paraphrasing. Hook is interesting...

December 2011 (UTC) Although it's not a DYK requirement, I've further expanded the lede per your suggestion. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:57, 27 December 2011 (UTC)...

gesandt Comment: Statement and citations supporting hook can be found in the lede and in the first sentence in the second paragraph of the Printer section...

2012 (UTC) Hook is not directly cited and almost nothing else is cited. Lede is missing a quote. Article is salvageable, but will require a lot of work...

verified. Hook's ref requires subscription service; accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. QPQ done. Interesting hook;...

hooks. Its length, date verified; hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

Monument Comment: Statements and sources supporting hook can be found in the lede, and in the first sentence of the Printing career section. Created by Gwillhickers...

The lede should summarize the article, but the 2nd paragraph essentially duplicates part of the main body. In general cites are not used in the lede except...

go. --LauraHale (talk) 12:40, 7 June 2012 (UTC) Apart from the fact that lede requires no citations, the fact is obvious from the tables. I've added a...

nominated at 18:53, 14 April 2014 (UTC). "most common" is mentioned in the lede of the article but it is unreferenced. I'm intrigued to see how this crime...

December 2014 (UTC) Thanks for mentioning it. I added disambiguation to the lede. Please indicate if you have any preference about the two hooks; not the...

G. Froe Comment: Statements and sources supporting hook are found in the lede and in the 'Publisher and book seller' section, first paragraph; Partial...

date fine, sources reliable, photo licensed. One small issue: the lead (or lede) is usually either (1) without inline citations, summarizing info from the...

21:49, 27 August 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

for its listing as a Ramsar site. The sentence is unreferenced both in the lede and the main article (it is not covered by ref. #5, which originally was...

Self-nominated at 18:10, 23 April 2022 (UTC). The hook is good but the lede needs to be revised: it needs to use a longer dash rather than '-'. Narutolovehinata5...

date, refs, hook check out. However, the first passage (too long to be a lede) has 3 parts out of whom only one has a reference. --Soman (talk) 16:06,...

wait so long. ~ Pbritti (talk) 00:31, 8 December 2024 (UTC) I've added a lede to short tag, and I'm seeing one unformatted / bare URL.  — Chris Woodrich...

painting by a different name, we can use that one. Article lede: The second part of the lede appears a tad WP:PROSELINE and can be tightened. e.g., currently...

references but the hook fact is not directly suported by a citation either in the lede or the body of the article. Additionally there is an unused ref (named "ruth")...

company? I thank its unusual that he is mentioned as a football player in the lede as that seems a minor bit when I read the article. But can I thank you for...

Length, date, hook's ref verified. Very well referenced article; all non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No copyvio detected. QPQ...

length is 1500 characters. This article meets that even without the plot and lede. Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:26, 23 December 2011 (UTC) Issues have been addressed...

Aymatth2 (talk) 01:27, 13 February 2014 (UTC) "Long intro" tag removed. The lede is five paragraphs, so it will be shortened into four or less without deadline...

only used in the lede and looked like a circular reference, but I got caught up trying to move the other reference out of the lede too and find something...

external links, time, size, hook length and interest. Main problem is that the lede does not summarize the entire article and requires expansion. British Isles...

have a ridiculous number of references. Strictly speaking a fact in the lede doesn't need a ref and some of the sentences have three or four references...

subject. The only thing I would advise is adding a sentence or two to the lede that summarizes the history section as a whole, but that's something that...

bow to your judgment.) I didn't use this photo as the lede image because I personally like the lede image better (she looks strong and powerful), "but"...

have to look through Appendix B from page 381 onwards. This will affect the lede too. starship I have added one reference. RRD (talk) 09:33, 28 July 2019...

online (that the three women were from the same research group). All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

copy-edit. Also, please see if you can remove the 10 source links in the lede and move it to the respective sentences in the body. Regarding the hooks...

Memoirs in the 1890s, the book was not published until 1975? Source: in lede ALT1:... that the The Personal Memoirs of Julia Dent Grant were the first...

are clearly appropriate, I'm not convinced that either of the two in the lede are appropriate: the article doesn't directly mention violence and deaths...

QPQ done. Sidenote, it's a bit odd that the personal life stuff is in the lede only, but that's not DYK-relevant. Cheers! Kingoflettuce (talk) 13:24, 30...

Template:Arb premature/content Template:Arb premature/end Template:Arb premature/lede Wikipedia:Arbitration Committee/Clerks/Procedures Wikipedia:Arbitration/Policy...

any problems or copyvio in the article (there was a missing "BC" in the lede which I added myself). It might read better to add "the" before "Man of the...

{{intro too short}} {{intro-expand}} {{intro-tooshort}} {{lead-too-short}} {{lede too short}} {{short intro}} {{short lead}} {{too short}} The above documentation...

1963, Vol. 53, Parts 1 and 2 (1963), p. 59. Reviewed: Comment: Perhaps the lede picture can be used. No QPQ: I have nominated fewer than five articles Improved...

(UTC). I will review this one. I've already removed some errors from the lede.Zigzig20s (talk) 18:45, 19 December 2017 (UTC) Not new but significantly...

October 2011 (UTC) Yep, should be good to go. Also slightly expanded the lede. You may want to consider doing so further. Plot Spoiler (talk) 16:30, 4...

(2972 char); never been on front page before, neutral in tone, every non-lede paragraph has at least one citation; no apparent copyright violations; images...

among other issues. Also citations should not be in the lede, if something is in the lede, it should be in the body with a citation there. Also beware...

needs reference, the fact of being the first priest is only mentioned in the lede. --Soman (talk) 16:46, 29 November 2016 (UTC) @Soman: https://en.wikipedia...

can bump it up by 483 characters it will be a 5x expansion (expanding the lede would be an easy 200, at least). Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:07, 14 January 2012...

also on Barnum Avenue) and a summary of the history have been added to the lede. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 19:18, 10 August 2015 (UTC) That wasn't quite what...

does not have an inline citation is a summary of its section, much like a lede, so it should be fine. The hook checks out to a source cited in the article—not...

(UTC) @Gerda Arendt: Thanks for the review and consideration. Expanded the lede a bit and QPQ is done. —Vensatry (talk) 16:33, 2 October 2018 (UTC) thank...

I'd remove the Wikilinks around "Dutch Chess Champion" since that's in the lede of the article and work on wording something a little catchier than "...who...

aspect of life," according to reviewers. Is ready to go. I opened up the lede to explain the term upfront, but the article itself is in good shape. I would...

but please expand the lede a little bit. Makeandtoss (talk) 13:09, 9 May 2024 (UTC) @Robertsky and PSA: An article with a lede that short would deserve...

20:40, 14 October 2016 (UTC) (cont.) No apparent close-paraphrasing. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. The image in the article...

primarily as a historical curiosity: Sibelius's lone opera. appears in the lede, but is not cited there; and I could find no cited statement that it is his...

because of state budget cuts?". Ok, I added access dates and expanded the lede. The new tighter hook is ok with me. —David Eppstein (talk) 08:04, 30 December...

mention of the hook fact as stated in WP:DYKRULES rule 3b, in this case the lede of the article is the only place that the world exrtinct is stated so this...

only as an "IOU"). Article is new enough, long enough, each paragraph post-lede has in-line citations, and is within policy (e.g., spot-checks suggest no...

(talk⁄contribs) 02:17, 30 December 2016 (UTC) Those sentences are just a lede for the subsequent model sections, but I will add the same references to...

14:44, 20 February 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

In this edit (DIFF) I have implemented the recommendation to include some citations in the lede. Regards -- Presearch (talk) 17:59, 30 May 2019 (UTC)...

{{expand lead}} {{intro too short}} {{intro-expand}} {{intro-tooshort}} {{lead-too-short}} {{lede too short}} {{short intro}} {{short lead}} {{too short}}...

with the hook. Maybe not germane to the DYK nom but the assertion in the lede that it is the oldest building on the Royal Mile is patently untrue, and...

introduced to the page and nothing was copied. I'd just recommend expanding the lede with a couple sentences about the group's fame and last appearance. With...

outstanding issues (though I would recommend adding a second sentence to the lede). The hook checks out in its current state, but I think it's a bit excessively...

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going on there. It's only supposed to care about "American" if it's in the lede. I'll take a closer look when I get some time. -- RoySmith (talk) 23:55,...

requires some minor work in sourcing. Specifically, the sentences in the lede should be a) written in the body of the article and then should be sourced...

needs more sources to confirm it, and in any case is only mentioned in the lede rather than the body. ALT1 is mentioned in the article and verified in the...

January 2016 (UTC) Gerda Arendt Thank you! I added "traditional Mauritanian music" as suggested to the lede. SusunW (talk) 00:02, 1 February 2016 (UTC)...

Two is that the lede should describe, briefly, what entrelacement is. If it's cited in the body, you don't need to re-cite it in the lede, but it does need...

Thank you for the correction. A close paraphrase of ALT1 also appears in the lede and doesn't use an inline citation. I just missed that it was used again...

not cited in the article and also should not appear only in the lede because the lede serves to summarize what is in the article. Interesting: Other problems:...

long but I don't think it can be cut down much, it's just aa long page. The lede describes them as "Earth's Mightiest Heroes", can we add that to the body...

left the last citation in the lead per my understanding of Wikipedia:MOS_(lede)#Citations; that sentence covers a controversy. -Arb. (talk) 16:57, 28 December...

Spainish is right, everything checks out. Not quite related to the DYK, but the lede on the article needs to be shorten. Meanderingbartender (talk) 13:32, 8 April...

that whoever promotes may have a better/clearer/etc. image to choose for a lede hook and I assumed you wouldn't mind having it go forward without - Basement12...

the Arabic-speaking ones, and this latter is what's stated in the source's lede. Please revise the hook to reflect the article and its sources. Thanks. BlueMoonset...

it being built in a Gothic revival synagogue ? It was in the text in the lede (first para), and that is now reflected more clearly in the text in the body...

keeping an eye on this thread. I've added "less than seven years" to the lede/lead, does that work? I can upload the article about self-service temporarily...

now, as (a) it has an orange tag at the top regarding the length of the lede, and (b) the next queue for 11 November is composed entirely of WW1 entries...

the subject and hook interesting. Alt hooks could be generated from the lede, but the current one is good. Somnifuguist (talk) 23:28, 12 April 2021 (UTC)...

Self nominated at 20:32, 7 April 2014 (UTC). Length, date verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

18 February 2013 (UTC)  Done. The citation in German at the end of the Lede paragraph says it. I added new anchor. If you would like to propose an ALT...

a stub, I have expanded the article accordingly and information from the lede to the body. Let me know if you find it sufficient or if you want more before...

apparent close-paraphrasing issues. Refs appear to be RS. Issue1: not all non-lede paragraphs have refs yet. Issue2: no QPQ yet. @Paul W: Thank you for an interesting...

"Mela played the viola and once played in front of an audience". Also, the lede could be a bit longer and more informative, i.e.lacks basic info', like DOB...

but so far, as I understood, not with that article. I have changed the lede, its not brilliant but OK now for DYK. Serten (talk) 21:21, 7 October 2014...

paraphrasing. Cbl62 (talk) 04:36, 18 August 2011 (UTC) A minor point: the article lede says he was signed as a "street free agent". That term is wikilinked, but...

2022 (UTC) in progress. Long enough and well referenced. I hacked at the lede as it included stuff not in the body, feel free to improve. I think Alt2...

new enough, and presentable. No copyvio. However, some sentences in the lede aren't reflected or cited in the article body. Can you add to the body and...

heads up, @Launchballer! I have moved the second and third paragraphs of the lede to the first section and rewrote it as History. @Luiysia, if you disagree...

interesting enough, fails verification. Was the book published in 2007 (lede) or 2008 (hook)? Article: Long enough, new enough, referencing looks good...

If that's not enough, couldn't you split the text in the background and lede between the two articles that need some more to meet the length requirements...

of Suharto at the time of the Indonesian invasion of East Timor, but the lede instead specifies Habibie's later role as President of Indonesia. Perhaps...

at 12:38, 21 March 2014 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

little, feel free to change anything you don't agree with, and added a WP:lede section. I enjoyed working on this article and learnt a lot about the history...

(UTC) Yes these definitely work. Prefer ALT1 personally. Final note: the lede says "It is a non-sectarian", which is not explained anywhere. You could...

policy Y QPQ: checks out Y The hook is present in the article only in the lede. There are two inline citations, one from Rolling Stone India and the other...

duplicated the reference for this were it is first mentioned in the article lede. No copyvio issues that I can find. GTG - Basement12 (T.C) 18:18, 22 May...

recommend rephrasing "warehouse for a tobacco factory" if possible. The lede is too short, only a sentence, and this needs to be fixed before the article...

sourced (ADF on offline sources). The hook, however, occurs only in the lede and doesn't have an inline citation, or any citation at all inside the article...

matter, but to avoid argument I've added a little to each article (to the lede as you suggested and the odd titbit elsewhere) and each is now at leats 1900...

The claim about the radioactivity in the tunnels has been removed from the lede. As for the first sentence, almost every source I could find that uses that...

(talk). Self-nominated at 12:40, 17 April 2016 (UTC). I have coedited the lede and hook and I confirm that the hook fact is reffed. Article and hook are...

sources. In the hook, I miss a year and a picture. The hook fact is in the lede and I believe it, but I don't find it in the article with a source. --Gerda...

and length are fine. However, the intro needs to be a bit longer (see WP:LEDE) and there are major gaps in the citations; in particular, citations are...

(UTC). @Cwmhiraeth: long enough, recently 5x expanded enough, every non-lede paragraph cited, nothing questionable on Earwig, neutral. I think I would...

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nomination. The relevant text is at the end of the third paragraph in the lede: "... in 2007 Afrikaans-language newspaper Rapport dismissed journalist Deon...

22:16, 7 December 2015 (UTC) Perhaps this is a language problem, but the lede statement "Swedish serial killer and baby farmer" implies murders and baby...

09:04, 2 February 2017 (UTC) Philafrenzy, thank you - I've expanded the lede. DarjeelingTea (talk) 02:55, 3 February 2017 (UTC) Do you want to add an...

QPQ all fine. Image is also fine but might not be the most exciting for a lede hook. Citations fine for any of the hooks, I'd go with the original suggestion...

I'll let it slide this time. Updates may be needed in the future, and even lede paragraph falls short of great, but the whole article is decent enough to...

this from prep because there's a "citation needed" tag at the end of the lede (and it's justified, too; that's a pretty extraordinary claim, and it isn't...

at 19:43, 1 July 2013 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede sentences have refs; all refs appear to be RS. After spot check, no apparent...

Blofeld 07:21, 8 May 2013 (UTC) Thanks! Per your suggestion, I expanded the lede. MaxVeers (talk) 18:23, 8 May 2013 (UTC) What is a "vehicular spring"? You...

new (16th), long enough, no copyvio found via spot check, QPQ done. The lede was relatively non-neutral ("embroiled", "unfairly criticized", "her associates")—I...

releases? I also don't see the hook stated in the article, other than in the lede, which is typically an uncited summary. That they made three albums together...

2014 (UTC). Length, date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

(UTC). Creation date OK; 7655 B length good; every paragraph other than lede is referenced. No evidence of close paraphrasing. 178 B hook good, sources...

the one used. AGF for offline ref. Also, shouldn't the translation in the lede read "shall be abased?" To my ear, it sounds better. Marrante (talk) 16:14...

Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:21, 20 March 2020 (UTC) @Cwmhiraeth: I reworded that second lede sentence. How about this ALT1: Raymie (t • c) 19:20, 20 March 2020 (UTC)...

2014 (UTC) The first source discusses it, I just didn't mention it in the lede. That's been remedied now. Better? SilverserenC 11:23, 28 May 2014 (UTC)...

is free. No QPQ required. Fixed some prose in the article based on the lede's source. Article sourcing spot checks are ok. A lot of copyvio overlap, but...

enough and long enough for our purposes. The hook itself is directly in the lede and referenced, so good there. Hook is interesting enough. And you don't...

interesting, neutral, and cited in-line (I extended one of the refs to cover the lede since that's where the hook is from, hope you don't mind. Hooks are required...

Romanian at some previous point in time? That seems like something that the lede should mention one way or the other. Maury Markowitz (talk) 22:46, 18 February...

Copyvio Detector" claims text similarity only for the first part of the lede. The hook, I prefer ALT1, is well-formatted and interesting. Its length is...

are confirmed in the article's inline sources, and all paragraphs now have citations, including the lede. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:44, 16 May 2012 (UTC)...

to be lifted from the abstract of a journal article Hook fact is in the lede without a direct citation, but it is cited in the body. References do not...

to Hubbard's supposed reincarnation (there are three of them: one in the lede, one in the body of the article, and one in an image caption.) At present...

quote is excluded. Well referenced, including the hook. Some facts in the lede are not repeated in the main body (info only). No obvious paraphrasing. I...

add up to 14; I've added a more direct citation but it had to go in the lede. - The Bushranger One ping only 23:07, 29 June 2012 (UTC) Concerns addressed...

(UTC) @Theleekycauldron: Added source to the paragraph / added source to the lede. (CC) Tbhotch™ 19:28, 21 February 2022 (UTC) 'preciate it, Tbhotch :) theleekycauldron...

jump out at me: a minor one is that the aircraft S/N is mentioned in the lede, but never in the article and is thus unreferenced, while a bigger one is...

1,500-character minimum. Each of two details is repeated twice: once in lede and in development section. However, that is not a big deal, especially since...

About my main issue is that there's no mentioned of the plot at all in the lede: even a short synopsis or summary should probably be there. Narutolovehinata5...

seems to cover the material adequately, although "nearly half" is in the lede but is not also in the body of the article - I think it should be added to...

April 2015 (UTC) I like ALT2. Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

at 07:50, 27 March 2015 (UTC). Length, date, hook's ref verified. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

lede. "former associate of the victim who thought they" - body uses "she". "Later testing demonstrated that a tonal reverse had occurred," - the lede...

(UTC). Lenth (>5x), date verified. Hook's offline ref accepted AGF. All non-lede paragraphs have refs; all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close-paraphrasing...

to a general audience, which this hook isn't. The second paragraph in the lede has some interesting facts that could probably make good hooks. Morgan695...

10:14, 12 January 2020 (UTC) @Illegitimate Barrister: I reworded the article lede to match the DYK nomination. Jayab314 11:30, 12 January 2020 (UTC) Perfect...

unlinked names. However, I'm not here to rewrite it from scratch. The wp:lede is completely unrelated to First Families of Pakistan (which is the subject...

Argentina-grown ballet dancer to gain international fame" .... which is only in the lede and is not quite what the hook claims. Happy to approve a hook based on this...

however (the Washington Post v. The New York Times). I also rephrased the lede. No copyright violation detected. The hook is short enough (136 characters)...

and a half ago. I would add that although the new details are good, the lede has become more opaque since Yushan's original edit; it would be good to...

excluding lists. Some expansion is needed, but no unnecessary stuff, and lede does not need to be expanded. --George Ho (talk) 17:46, 28 June 2012 (UTC)...

of the Look Here hook. al-Manam: Article is new enough and long enough. Lede's mention of the Sabra and Shatila massacre is abrupt but appropriate given...

2015 (UTC) Yoninah, thank you tremendously for the catch. I've amended the lede with the correct math, and added the additional inline citation to support...

"difficult to understand"? Source: Osborne's classic, page 8.1, cited in the lede as well Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Hauptfriedhof Mainz Created...

concern is that the article is technical and difficult to understand. The lede to the article does give an intelligible summary, though. I am a new reviewer...

August 2022 (UTC) Yes, the article body is now sufficiently detailed, but the lede needs work to reflect what has been added. As it stands now it doesn't even...

is important to establish context for all who read the article beyond the lede. I also think that WP:FAIRUSE applies to the goal statements. They aren't...

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03:23, 20 April 2017 (UTC) That's done in the body text. I think IATA on the lede alone should be sufficient as they are a major organization. - Mailer Diablo...

@MichaelQSchmidt: Needs a serious copyedit - "and event marking 25 years", ROS lede, etc. Willing to take a stab at it if you're OK with that. Maury Markowitz...

(UTC) The lede has been replaced. I hope someone picks this up for review! Renerpho (talk) 07:33, 5 September 2024 (UTC) @Renerpho: Lede's fine for DYK...

verified. Well-referenced, well-written article... nicely done. All non-lede paragraphs have refs and all refs appear to be RS. No apparent close paraphrasing...

in the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:20, 16 March 2012 (UTC) It's in the lede. You're right, I've changed the title and DYK credit template Crisco 1492...

ref verified. QPQ done. Interesting hook; its length is fine. Not all non-lede paragraphs have references yet; they need to be added before the article...

article and exciting enough to use. There is no copyvio, and everything post-lede is cited, QPQ did not access hook, but was done. Picture is in article and...

recommend replacing it by 'prince' or 'vizier' (although, apart from the lede the article doesn't actually mention him being a vizier, only his descendants)...

fact, you can simply put ref #1 at the end of the second sentence in the lede. --CeeGee 18:23, 10 July 2014 (UTC) done, all facts and refs now in the body...

role in the selection of the texts isn't cited or mentioned outside the lede. Fix that and it's good to go. Picture is fine too (not exciting, but fine)...

spotcheck doesn't see anything that would be a dealbreaker for DYK. The lede sentence appears to be a copyvio of an article about the Lakota Sioux, but...

Article is big enough and new enough. Neutrally written. All except the lede is referenced (that would normally be OK but...) Hook is in the article....

to sneak in @AnnieLiu13 :) There is also a "citation needed" tag in the lede that needs to be taken care of, as indeed that info is not found in the article...

from the still-required QPQ. The only issue I found in the article was the lede wording: should it not be "It was released on" rather than "It released on"...

looking it up directly. All looks in order. One thing I'd ask is why the lede says she went by the name "Charlotte Smales" as I can't see this in the ODNB...

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take it there are no estimates that are less than $18 million? Every non-lede paragraph has citations, image is appropriately licensed. Accepting on good...

new enough. It is more than long enough (though i'd suggest shortening the lede a bit, it restates a bit too much of the article body for its length). The...

23 August 2024 (UTC) Article is not "long enough" due to the bare-bones lede section—please expand. Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 15:39, 20 September...

mentioned (uncited) in the lede, and Mary Quant is not linked in the body but only in the lede. In fact, several statements in the lede are only mentioned there...

of the awards she won." Although it's cited, the word "legendary" in the lede might not be neutral. Anyway, citation 6 is the most important; its source...

Wikipedia article. Also, mush of the lede paragraph is uncited exposition instead of a summary of the cited text below. The lede needs to be fixed and the bulk...

Ages ended. The "claim" alluded to in the lede should be expanded on in the body of the article per MOS:LEDE if it actually does refer to a pre-Singer...