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This template tags a statement for basic copyediting. Place this after the statement that needs copyediting: {{Copy edit inline|date=April 2026}} Do not...

-Nizil (talk) 19:05, 30 July 2014 (UTC) Copyediting done. Regards -Nizil (talk) 04:55, 31 July 2014 (UTC) Copyediting has been done. Good to go with any of...

looking for: the necessary copyediting mentioned by Drmies at the end of July still hasn't been done. If the copyediting is something you don't think...

Verifiable against sources. QPQ needed. Neutral, but still needs some copyediting. Eg. As head of the NPC, Ao enabled Naga politics to adapt to and adopt...

factual and interesting. QPQ is present. However, some portions need copyediting for English, and I'm not quite sure that the bullets in the first major...

spotchecks came up negative. The article is in need of a good, solid copyediting run, though; there are a few runon sentences, missing punctuation (including...

sentences in need of copyediting. Artem.G (talk) 16:15, 5 November 2021 (UTC) Essentially, the entire article needs to be copyedited for grammar and flow...

was pasted into other text. The article will need to go through some Copyediting to be acceptable, especially the "early life" section is messy. The copyright...

needs to be copyedited before it can be promoted for DYK. See Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests. When the copyediting issue is resolved...

interesting) is sourced and appropriate for DYK. The prose could use some copyediting though, I spotted some grammar mistakes and acronyms that are used before...

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Self-nominated at 08:59, 29 September 2021 (UTC). The article needs copyediting first. In addition, the table in the article is mostly empty. Narutolovehinata5...

checks out. Good to go. Some copyediting is done. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 17:36, 27 May 2014 (UTC) I did some more copyediting, and the article now scrapes...

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but I have a few concerns. First of all, the article needs serious copyediting for grammar, punctuation, etc., and its tone is not nearly neutral enough...

I think the hook could use some copyediting, though. ViperSnake151  Talk  17:02, 27 February 2015 (UTC) Copyedited hook. Yoninah (talk) 18:41, 28 February...

reports pretty high rate (68.9%) text similarity on the source [1]. Copyediting is needed to address the issue. The hook is well-formatted and interesting...

to thinks it means, and so forth. This article requires substantial copyediting.  Sandstein  20:06, 27 June 2014 (UTC) User:Sandstein, While I agree...

else for copyediting. I will remove all paraphrases and add new sentences. Regards. --Nizil (talk) 10:19, 18 December 2012 (UTC) copyediting done by User:Ipigott...

plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Other problems: - Could use some copyediting, as well as incorporating more diverse sources. Hook eligibility: Cited:...

promotion. Ruby 2010/2013 22:20, 9 March 2013 (UTC) I've done some more copyediting. I hope that takes care of your concerns.--Carabinieri (talk) 02:08,...

review was done. However, two tiny issues have to be resolved as: Needs copyediting for "He was assistant coach of the and the German national team from...

have now either been sourced or have been removed. As for copyediting, what needs to be copyedited? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:20, 22 February 2018 (UTC)...

[[Article]], and I think the Taskforce could really use someone with your copyediting abilities.|signature=Your friend, ~~~}} Invitation to join WP:RRTF Rick...

expanded the lead and did some copyediting. Evano1van(எவனோ ஓருவன்) 06:58, 24 July 2013 (UTC) I've done some additional copyediting; the prose is still a bit...

much for your review. I applie now to the Guild of Copy Editors for the copyediting of the article. For the hook, I hope spmeone elde can suggest an ALT...

Wikipedia style for the Executee names than bold. I agree that some copyediting would be good. Boud (talk) 03:05, 16 June 2019 (UTC) No different, the...

article and a good hook. However, I think the article does need some copyediting. From the paragraph that starts with "His crime attracted..." on, some...

Copyediting and wikification would be desirable, but not essential for DYK (am I right?). — SMUconlaw (talk) 08:21, 8 March 2012 (UTC) Copyediting is...

name. 03:57, 15 March 2012 (UTC) Thank you for the review. I did some copyediting to both articles. If you think more is needed, mayby you could specify...

long enough, AGF the offline citation for the hook. I did some minor copyediting, including moving some material from the lead paragraph into the article...

you need me, The Squirrel Conspiracy (talk) 04:43, 13 October 2015 (UTC) Reinstating tick after copyediting. 97198 (talk) 06:17, 13 October 2015 (UTC)...

Save the Queen! (talk) 23:33, 31 December 2013 (UTC) The article needs copyediting. Commas are missing and sentences are fragmented, e.g.: "Noel Ernest...

honest, not currently legible. You will need a lot more than a slight copyediting to make this article eligible for the main page, being honest. It almost...

for a diligent review of this nomination! I especially appreciate the copyediting which has clearly improved the article. Cheers.--My76Strat (talk) 10:14...

05:29, 7 August 2011 (UTC) Mostly looks good, but article needs some copyediting before it can be used. Anaxial (talk) 16:42, 7 August 2011 (UTC) Please...

This article is new enough and long enough and I have done a little copyediting. The image is appropriately licensed, the hook facts are cited inline...

copyvio in the Spanish article per this It may need more rewording and copyediting in the English version I'm afraid but I've done the best I can. Thanks...

April 2018 (UTC) The article is tagged for copyediting. Yoninah (talk) 21:23, 11 April 2018 (UTC) OK, I copyedited it. Restoring tick per Piotrus, although...

However, before being featured as a DYK this article could use a little copyediting and formatting. Also, the intro is just a short sentence and should summarize...

copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Other problems: - copyediting, some refs are partially filled out Hook eligibility: Cited: Interesting:...

Abyssal (talk) 13:42, 20 October 2012 (UTC) I did about half of the needed copyediting today. Abyssal (talk) 14:18, 22 October 2012 (UTC) Finally! I have been...

help copyediting please ask on my talk page once you have finished updating Chidgk1 (talk) 06:49, 10 March 2024 (UTC) Have done some copyediting - please...

for independent copyediting. Add more information if you find. Regards -Nizil (talk) 17:53, 3 May 2014 (UTC) Hey, I requested copyediting help for you at...

wait some time. SpinningSpark 13:03, 15 April 2020 (UTC) The hook needs copyediting too, try this; SpinningSpark 13:18, 15 April 2020 (UTC) ALT1 ... that...

The article was recently expanded 5x and is well sourced, but it has a copyediting tag. Looking at the page it needs a little editing for grammar and English...

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Campus Ambassador for this course passed the DYK? COI. I'd help with the copyediting needed here, but it is quite extensive and needs many hours. SandyGeorgia...

for modification (198 characters) below. I nominated the article for copyediting (see: Wikipedia:WikiProject Guild of Copy Editors/Requests#Lithuanian...

BlueMoonset (talk) 18:18, 25 August 2016 (UTC) Placed a request at GOCE for copyediting. But that would not solve the "large of amount of unsourced statements...

OCLC 163822128. Reviewed: Bowne Park Comment: Article may require some copyediting WP:GOCE requested  Done Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated...

that. If not, that should be clarified. I also think the article needs copyediting.--Carabinieri (talk) 01:04, 8 March 2013 (UTC) ALT1: ... that the eighteen-armed...

Do you mean the article itself needs copyediting for flow or that this DYK statement itself needs copyediting for flow? If it's this DYK itself that...

is new enough and long enough, AGF on sourcing. I needed to do some copyediting for missing definite articles and the like, which I suspect is just Indian...

cited books rather than using Google snippets. The article needs some copyediting to improve some odd sentence structure, and to fix a few grammatical...

there is close paraphrasing with the language issue. I have done some copyediting to tighten up the article. QPQ present. ALT0 is definitely the most interesting:...

you know nominations/Günther Rühle Comment: Article might need some copyediting. Created by Nizil Shah (talk) and Gazal world (talk). Nominated by Nizil...

March 2016 (UTC). Article is new enough, long enough, but needed lots of copyediting. I've corrected multiple glaring errors including her birth place (Karachi...

12 May 2012 (UTC) Looks ok for the most part, but really needs some copyediting by a native English speaker.--Carabinieri (talk) 12:46, 23 May 2012 (UTC)...

the article is copyedited and the review goes through then it's good to go" Mujinga (talk) 18:42, 11 May 2020 (UTC) @Mujinga: Copyediting is now complete...

Refs 1,2,4,6, and 8 are all either personal or company blogs; after copyediting the article is too short to qualify; there are unreferenced claims and...

Christians? Source: TOI Reviewed: PR Man Singh Comment: May require some copyediting Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 05:03, 28 December 2019...

by Dr Aaij (talk) at 18:06, 7 March 2017 (UTC). @Dr Aaij: I did minor copyediting. Aporter90 did the difficult part and deserves full credit. :-) Ed [talk] [majestic...

hack. Yoninah (talk) 11:08, 5 January 2014 (UTC) There are also some copyediting issues. Too much information is in the lead; most of it should be placed...

-Nizil (talk) 19:55, 23 July 2014 (UTC) Thanks. Having done a little more copyediting, and I would say that it is now good to go. Edwardx (talk) 10:33, 29...

kind of issue yet, as I suggest the nominator or creator do some copyediting. Copyediting should also address, the writing style, which is a bit nonencyclopedic...

the article I can see why they are there. It seriously requires some copyediting before we could pass it and I also share the concern about neutrality...

looks good in small resolution, so it can be used. I've done some minor copyediting to the article. That she has an own road in Oslo, might not need a citation...

(UTC). New enough, long enough. Passes earwig. The proposed hook needs copyediting for clarity. --evrik (talk) 17:06, 1 December 2020 (UTC) Thank you for...

(talk) 15:37, 8 January 2015 (UTC) I have rewritten the lede and am copyediting. I will make a new hook for this. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 22:18, 8 January...

News (btw this is not cited in the infobox). The article needs some copyediting, for example "The airstrike hit the residential area in dedicated to...

14 December 2012 (UTC) Long enough, new enough, could use some very minor copyediting, but still good enough. ZappaOMati 01:18, 18 December 2012 (UTC)...

and QPQ is present. However, I do have concerns that relate to the copyediting. I'm not sure if this is just my unfamiliarity with Indian English, but...

bit of general copyediting. Edwardx (talk) 12:50, 27 February 2017 (UTC) The sources (for both things) look good and the copyediting is an improvement...

leave comments in the text rather than go through each one here. Some copyediting I can do but some I can't as I'm not familiar with the film. The image...

be further wikified. I am not thrilled with the current hooks. Some copyediting of the text is needed as well. --evrik (talk) 22:43, 30 December 2019...

editor is needed for copyediting because I'm at my wits' end. --CeeGee 18:37, 16 February 2014 (UTC) Victuallers has copyedited in full. Pls, proceed...

be placed correctly. Musa Raza! Thank you for your suggestion about copyediting by me. As you know the matter better, I think you can do it better. Besides...

lawyers' fees in 117 years of litigation over his estate? The article needs copyediting. I remember this case from law school, probably everyone who's been there...

by 2x2leax (talk) at 21:37, 7 September 2022 (UTC). I did some minor copyediting, but the article seems in good shape. AGF on the Spanish sources, and...

Balović Comment: Bjs-sec created this article at AfC. I did a bit of copyediting and am nominating it for DYK. Created by Bjs-sec (talk). Nominated by...

approved above. I just did a little more copyediting and wikifying, and do not see any grammatical or copyediting issues. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk)...

I have fixed issue 2. Awaiting copyediting to solve Issue 1. I have contacted a few other users as well for copyediting help. Regards,--BabbaQ (talk) 10:44...

one. I think Eric should get credit, as he did a substantial amount of copyediting (as he does for all GA reviews he takes on) so has made a significant...

I have is that I think that the article could stand to have a little copyediting (phrases like "Another comic that made fun of this topic is" don't strike...

been asked on her talk page, and replied: I see some places in need of copyediting, some where the sourcing doesn't quite line up with the content (eg....

11 July 2012 (UTC) Length, date, citations, QPQ etc fine, took a bit of copyediting but ready for launch - Basement12 (T.C) 12:01, 12 July 2012 (UTC)...

21 March 2014 (UTC) @Lagrange! Thanks so much indeed for your hard copyediting work. I've checked it out, and found everything fine. BTW, I was not...

-Zanhe (talk) 01:39, 13 June 2018 (UTC) I've copyedited the article quite a bit. The hook needs copyediting for grammar and flow as well. How about: ALT2...

big concerns about the article. First, it would benefit from extensive copyediting -- to rationalize the organization and wording, add links to relevant...

new enough, nominated in time and have inline citations. Article needs copyediting. Hook is interesting, short enough and hook-source is accepted AGF. QPQ...

Cited: Interesting: Other problems: - I've taken the liberty of slightly copyediting the hook for grammar and punctuation. Overall: Ready to go. — TAnthonyTalk...

sentence (in the fourth paragraph of the Legacy section) I read while copyediting the article that was missing a word critical to its meaning: it read...

article is now long enough, but needs copyediting for grammar. sstflyer 11:40, 22 September 2015 (UTC) I've copyedited it. Hope that helps. Interesting to...

to be waited for. I can unfortunately do nothing about the required copyediting. Someone with native English language and advanced experience has to...

especially for Eid al-Fitr). Article seems neutral; I had to do a touch of copyediting, but nothing major. Looks good to me. Raymie (t • c) 18:44, 11 August...

the war between Russia and Ukraine. As usual, I have done some minor copyediting. I have also modified the hook a little to make it more specific. Bahnfrend...

notable enough, and properly referenced. It might do with a bit of copyediting and cleaning, but that does not change my assessment as the article stands...

is new and long-enough, hook is fine, and supported by inline citations. I did some minor copyediting. NinaGreen (talk) 06:07, 20 January 2013 (UTC)...

enough and long enough. QPQ present. All the sources check out. Did some copyediting to make it a bit more idiomatic in English. Freely licensed image with...

article. It has a considerable amount of unsourced material and also needs copyediting.--Carabinieri (talk) 09:34, 5 October 2014 (UTC) Hi, I tried to source...

need to be adressed. I think I will find some time for doing a bit of copyediting work over the next few days. Also, I dare say that I don't understand...

2022 (UTC) From a quick look, it seems that the new edits were largely copyediting and the footnotes issues still need to be addressed. Narutolovehinata5...

but there are some issues. Some copyediting is needed. Currently the article is 1011 characters (and with copyediting likely to fall), it must be a minimum...

enough (1890 B per prosesize), DYK-appropriate quality. (Did some light copyediting.) Good and verifiable hook. QPQ done. Vaticidalprophet 05:09, 15 November...

 Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 06:22, 17 January 2014 (UTC). Article requires copyediting for flow. Language sounds pretty clumsy in quite a few cases. Eg. "The...

by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 12:48, 15 June 2012 (UTC) after some copyediting looks fine: refs reliable, hook under 200chars and sourced (in "reception"...

present. Hook is interesting and cited in article. I did some minor copyediting as well. Looks good to me. Raymie (t • c) 03:08, 7 October 2019 (UTC)...

today, so the article easily meets all the DYK criteria. I did a little copyediting in the paragraph containing the hook material. The article is thorough...

Russian submarine K-84 Ekaterinburg Length, reference and history verified. Did some slight copyediting. Daniel Case (talk) 19:41, 6 January 2012 (UTC)...

get started on your copy-editing journey: A how-to guide to Wikipedia copyediting Wikipedia's Manual of Style (MOS), a helpful guide to refer to while...

Everything checks out here: length, date, hook, sources. I had to do a bit of copyediting, but nothing major. QPQ not necessary. Go go go! Moswento talky 10:21...

forgot to check if the nominator had reviewed another article. As for copyediting, I personally didn't notice the need for it, but now that looks like...

Nominated by LauraHale (talk) at 00:55, 12 July 2012 (UTC) I have made copyediting, but it still passes 1,500-character minimum and is well-sourced. There...

in the public domain. The article is neutral and free from close paraphrasing. I did some copyediting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:57, 17 January 2016 (UTC)...

2012 (UTC) This article is new enough, and long enough. I did a little copyediting. I consider the original hook is the better. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:33...

Meanwhile, the article has been tagged for cleanup. You can ask for copyediting help at WP:COPYEDITORS. Yoninah (talk) 19:28, 25 July 2017 (UTC) @Yoninah:...

and table, this article has 647. Besides, it is in bad need of proper copyediting. Drmies (talk) 14:02, 25 July 2012 (UTC)  Done I set the hook in one...

have done some copyediting myself, and will give a few (but decidedly non-exhaustive) examples further down where I think copyediting is needed or at...

I'd like to suggest in the future that you spend a little more time on copyediting — having reviewed a bunch of your articles now, they are peppered with...

March 2012 (UTC) Everything checks out, though the article is fairly short and could use some copyediting.--Carabinieri (talk) 13:04, 5 April 2012 (UTC)...

interesting. The sources appear offline, so I'm assuming good faith. It could use a bit of copyediting though. --Al Ameer (talk) 21:16, 29 January 2017 (UTC)...

mainly by a plot summary that badly needs paragraphs and copyediting. The lead also needs copyediting, especially the 2nd paragraph. The hook is generally...

enough. The hook is cited, QPQ done and I saw no evidence of close paraphrasing. I did some light copyediting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:13, 4 June 2014 (UTC)...

present. And that is...quite a hook. (AGF on offline sources.) Good for me, just did a bit of copyediting to it. Raymie (t • c) 01:14, 3 July 2017 (UTC)...

new enough and long enough. The hook is well sourced. I have done some copyediting to the lead section. I do not believe the nominator is required to do...

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Pinboard (website) Comment: copyediting to the hook welcome Created/expanded by Ealdgyth (talk). Self nom at...

Good to go! --Tito Dutta (talk) 03:27, 21 January 2013 (UTC) Even with copyediting, the current prose size still meets the 1,500-character minimum. --George...

(UTC). This article is new enough and long enough, and I have done some copyediting. Its a sad story, the image is in the public domain, the hook facts are...

09:34, 11 April 2018 (UTC) @Titodutta:, thank you for completing the copyediting. I think currently awards are present in all three sections with repetitions...

Graeme Bartlett. I read the whole article through and did a little more copyediting for grammar. I noted a missing word or two in the second image under...

eawigs copyvio negative. page size and age ok. prose could do with some more copyediting. good to go. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:55, 31 May 2015 (UTC)...

2020 (UTC) Hi, I came by to promote this, but the article needs some copyediting for English grammar. It's also not clear if one or more representatives...

(UTC) @Owain.davies, CeeGee, and Theleekycauldron: I've taken a stab at copyediting the page, in a bid to get this nomination moving. It's not going to be...

This article is new enough and long enough. The hook is suitably sourced. I did some minor copyediting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 14:35, 19 January 2013 (UTC)...

April 2014 (UTC) Oops, I inadvertently removed the grandfather bit when copyediting the article with this edit. I've now added it back. Thanks for catching...

superficial aspects) because the sources are in Polish, which I can't read. I did some substantial copyediting.  Sandstein  17:56, 26 July 2012 (UTC)...

that need to be addressed; otherwise, this looks good. I have done some copyediting for the article. OceanHok (talk) 10:57, 26 January 2021 (UTC) TDogg310...

needs a bit of copyediting e.g. "There have been 3191 denounces in 2013".) EEng (talk) 18:07, 15 May 2015 (UTC) I don't know which copyediting is required...

date of creation are fine. Hook facts supported by references in Norwegian. I have done a little copyediting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:44, 6 June 2012 (UTC)...

only reservations I have is that the prose would benefit from a little copyediting. For example, "she had a terrible car accident" - I'm sure everyone who's...

policy issues: I'll note that the article could use another pass of copyediting. There are a handful sentences that could be clearer and errors like...

11:08, 19 April 2022 (UTC) @Storye book: Thank you for your review and copyediting. I did not know that rejecting a DYK-nom does not count for QPQ: I reviewed...

have included the articles "the" and "a" but they are missing, so some copyediting would be beneficial. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:00, 4 January 2016 (UTC)  Done...

article/hook (source says 900 grams). The article may benefit from a bit more copyediting (condensing multiple sentences into one, etc.), but there is nothing...

Turkish so I was unable to consider copyright issues. I did a little copyediting of the article and have tweaked the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:06, 28...

building could be taken only last Thursday morning...I will try to do copyediting, but unfortunately my English is and always will remain washed in Tiber...

All-in-all, these are both ready to go (although I get the feeling a little bit of copyediting would help). — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:40, 9 June 2013 (UTC)...

go over my edits to see if they are okay. I think some more cleanup/copyediting is still necessary, however. As for the hooks, I think ALT1 (which is...

it can proceed. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:38, 10 June 2015 (UTC) I tried copyediting the article. I made it less like a promotion (hoping I succeeded). Thank...

--Rsrikanth05 (talk) 22:41, 7 March 2015 (UTC) The article could use some copyediting for English grammar. There is also the matter of this incomplete sentence...

at 12:16, 26 February 2013 (UTC). Size and date check out. Did some copyediting to reduce/rephrase from long quotes, no other concerns regarding CP/CV...

contribs) 00:14, 13 October 2015 (UTC) That was fast! Thank you for the review and copyediting of the article. Yoninah (talk) 00:26, 13 October 2015 (UTC)...

—Vensatry (ping) 19:19, 14 December 2014 (UTC) Article requires significant copyediting. I've made an attempt but I need more info from the nominator to do anymore:...

turn.CeeGee 09:36, 17 September 2021 (UTC) @Cwmhiraet: @Vanamonde93: Copyediting of the article is complete now. A new review can be started. CeeGee 06:31...

sources including the hook source are in Norwegian and accepted in good faith. I did a little copyediting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:51, 7 July 2012 (UTC)...

sources, although the quote provided seems to support the hook. Some copyediting would be useful, although I'm not going to hold back the DYK for that...

draft to mainspace), and written nicely (also went through some minor copyediting). Hook fact is ... somewhat interesting, but I doubt there are many more...

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and close paraphrasing: Other problems: - Many sections are in need of copyediting for basic grammar and sentence flow Hook eligibility: Cited: - No inline...

A lovely article about an important building. The intro needed some copyediting for a general audience (done). There are a bit too many redlinks to the...

need a bit of copyediting though, which I've attempted to deliver. The Philippines are not my specialty, so I'd suggest getting copyediting from someone...

done, there is still the citation issues that need to be addressed. Copyediting would not resolve that. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:31...

in the public domain. The article has only one source but it is a reliable one. I did a little copyediting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:27, 13 May 2012 (UTC)...

repaired a few other things. Now the article could still profit from some copyediting, it reads a bit bumpy to me. --Pgallert (talk) 07:43, 30 December 2011...

neutral. I added the missing categories and talk page and did some light copyediting. Hook is correctly formatted. Hook has an inline cite. Is "in print"...

enough (3100 characters), looks within policy. I've done some light copyediting and connected it with the appropriate Wikidata entry. Hook is short enough...

out and no plagiarism noticed. However, the article could do with some copyediting to make it encyclopaedic in style. Ashwin147 (talk) 06:41, 23 August...

point. Yoninah (talk) 01:28, 23 March 2016 (UTC) Thanks @Yoninah: for copyediting the article and modifying the hook. I don't mind the "apparently", but...

Interesting: - n Other problems: - n Overall: The prose needs some minor copyediting, though it is "okay." I would verify the location of the bridge. --evrik (talk)...

understand why I care. Is it odd that he'd be from this place? Also needs copyediting.Secretlondon (talk) 22:58, 25 May 2012 (UTC) New enough, long enough...

(UTC) I came by to promote this, but found the article needed a lot of copyediting and formatting (which I did). However, I do not think it meets Rule D7...

Also the article is extremely negative and critical of him some slight copyediting is needed in the article.RADICAL SODA(FORCE) 06:44, 2 August 2017 (UTC)...

hook. No images used in article. AGF on one offline book used. Did some copyediting and removal of peacock terms and a bit flattery statements. Good to go...

reference. Paraphrasing and quality of prose look fine. I will do some copyediting; I would recommend a bit more linking of technical terms, if this is...

sections which do not require citation. Both articles needed a little copyediting (I've not bothered with the plot sections), but nothing serious. Edwardx...

December 2012 (UTC) Second paragraph was copyedited by me. Article reached the 1,500-character minimum, but my copyediting decreased prose size. Prose size,...

Nice little article, thank you for the read! I made a couple of minor copyediting changes to the article, and a suggestion to clarify a term but it doesn't...

inline cite. Article is interesting and well written. I did some light copyediting. No copyvios detected. Philafrenzy (talk) 08:55, 20 January 2018 (UTC)...

enough. QPQ present. Hook source checks out. No textual issues (did some copyediting). Suspect this will get a good number of views. Sammi Brie (she/her • t...

of the main sources is offline so I could not check that. I did a little copyediting on the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:31, 24 December 2011 (UTC)...

(talk). Self nominated at 16:51, 22 May 2013 (UTC). Fine article, but copyediting issue, I believe there should be a comma after the word "Knowles" in...

sources, and image verified. - PM800 (talk) 19:39, 1 September 2012 (UTC) Copyediting done by Yngvadottir  MehrajMir ' (Talk) 08:28, 4 September 2012 (UTC)...

The result was: rejected by Yoninah (talk) 21:17, 26 March 2016 (UTC) copyediting and neutrality issues ( Back to TM:TDYK Article history ) ... that in...

Template:Did you know nominations/Pranati Nayak Comment: might need some copyediting. QPQ pending. Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 07:49,...

September 2014 (UTC) And thank you for your diligence. I've done some more copyediting. I did try to teach our new editors at the editathon about not copying...

so a QPQ is not required. However, the article is in dire need of a copyediting. Multiple sentences in the article read awkwardly. The "Publication"...

other is in Turkish and accepted in good faith. I have done a little copyediting to make the English flow better. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:30, 11 January...

article is neutral and free from copyright issues. I have done some copyediting on the article. How about ALT2 ... that Swedish professor Johannes Bilberg...

ashamed of their actions? Reviewed: Comment: The article may need some copyediting, so I will try to fix that in time. (I've replaced the original hook...

Hook is fine, and has an inline citation. QPQ done. I did some minor copyediting to the hook, including adding a link to Northern Territory. Hope that's...

It's a great article, and I've made some reasonably minor clarification/copyediting amendments (Gwillhickers, please check those are OK!). From my perspective...

copyright issues because the sources are almost all in Turkish. I did some copyediting to make the English more idiomatic, in particular changing "room" to...

supported by RS, article within policy, qpq not required. - I did some copyediting on the article and added inline citations immediately following the fact...

for the hook sentence in the article. Also, the article needs a little copyediting; the lead includes the sentence A friend of Chen Yuanyuan, concubine...

05:58, 29 July 2014 (UTC) Thanks for your further work. I've also done a little copyediting. Now good to go. Edwardx (talk) 09:53, 29 July 2014 (UTC)...

01:29, 5 October 2021 (UTC). Overall: The article could use some minor copyediting; in the Iowa Straw poll section, for example, it says "Quayle, however...

raised.—♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 21:52, 11 March 2016 (UTC) I added the article for copyediting. I am improving the article for NPOV.Saff V. (talk) 05:59, 15 March 2016...

added in 2012. Photo with adequate licence. The hook might need some copyediting/tweaking, maybe shortening. For instance, I think we can just say the...

The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. I did some copyediting and think the word "adapt" in the original hook and the article should...

13:37, 15 November 2019 (UTC). New enough, long enough. I have done some copyediting; no textual issues found by Earwig. Must AGF on source as it appears...

spot checks I made did not reveal any close paraphrasing. I did some copyediting of the article and the ALT1 hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:56, 25 March 2016...

I'm aware there's a lot of references that still need to be inserted, copyediting, etc., however, the hook is properly referenced, there's no copyvio,...

are offline but there is no reason to dispute them. I have done some copyediting and suggest an alternative hook: Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:19, 4 January 2012...

recommend expanding the article further. In any case, the article requires copyediting for grammar and style; I have added a relevant tag, this will likely...

hook length. Spot-checks of policy okay, although article could use a little copyediting here and there. Wasted Time R (talk) 15:00, 3 March 2012 (UTC)...

it is 149 characters only. HaEr48 (talk) 23:58, 30 October 2016 (UTC) Copyediting is done (thanks Corinne!). Can we look at this nomination again? HaEr48...

any substance to this complaint – BlueMoonset and I agree that no more copyediting is needed, and the sourcing isn't a problem. Can we get a fourth opinion...

for tick. Made the suggestion of "...manor of Adeli..." I'll continue copyediting and improving the article.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:49, 19 February 2015...

species? Reviewed: Hans Raj Vohra Comment: Article may require some copyediting Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 07:06, 14 December 2019...

English-language sources and didn't see any issues with reliability and close copyediting. I notice the books don't have ISBN numbers attached; but that's easy...

at 04:31, 28 February 2021 (UTC). Article looks good (did some minor copyediting) and is more than fivefold expanded (prose size 268 B to 7929 B or 51...

source does not make p321 available, so must AGF. This page required more copyediting than usual; maybe take another look through before nominating pages in...

", - easier to grasp than the original hook. - Article: I did minor copyediting, but didn't know how to fix "he did not call for liberal thought should...

qpq is performed) -- long enough, hook short enough, etc. Needs minor copyediting though -- the line in question, for example, seem to have an extraneous...

neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. I did a little copyediting and have added ALT1 as alternative wording for the hook. A QPQ has been...

help. Thanks in advance. CeeGee 08:56, 5 October 2012 (UTC) Did some copyediting. Abyssal (talk) 14:32, 5 October 2012 (UTC) This should be good to go...

require copyediting rather than merely saying you think it might require copyediting without any hint as to what problems might require copyediting. —David...

(UTC). New enough, long enough, DYK check all green. Could use a little copyediting. Maury Markowitz (talk) 21:20, 4 December 2018 (UTC) Promoting. The grammar...

hook facts have inline citations, the article is neutral and within policy. I did a little copyediting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:20, 29 October 2015 (UTC)...

(OK pending QPQ) New enough, long enough; I just had to do a round of copyediting. Hook checks out (it does make me wonder why they got such a steep cut...

use some more wikilinking, and the article could definitely use some copyediting. There is an instance of "we" in the article as well as some improper...

but is otherwise good) all checkout. The article could use some more copyediting (I tweaked a little myself) but otherwise is good enough for a new article...

1413–1414. ISBN 81-237-1978-7. Reviewed: Brooklyn Army Terminal Comment: Copyediting is requested at GOCE. Created by Gazal world (talk). Nominated by Nizil...

new, neutral and long enough. It cites sources inline. I made a minor copyediting. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports no signifivant text similarities...

[[Article]], and I think the Taskforce could really use someone with your copyediting abilities.|signature=Your friend, ~~~}} Invitation to join WP:RRTF Rick...

it's good to go. Secretlondon (talk) 23:53, 6 June 2012 (UTC) Did some copyediting on the awkward phrasing, how is it now? - The Bushranger One ping only...

phrase, "designer label" does not appear in the article. Note: when copyediting, I also added an External links section to force a contents box, but...

prose than the other article, but could still benefit from a little copyediting Hook cited N - once again the words "Roya Film House" are not listed...

Connection (talk) 07:41, 5 December 2017 (UTC) The prose could use some copyediting, but I think the article's good enough for DYK now. --Paul_012 (talk)...

@Dharmadhyaksha and Mehedi Abedin: The article has a citation needed tag and needs copyediting for sentences such as "Parents of Choudhary and Sarojs have been MPs/MLAs...

{{Cleanup-copyedit}} {{Cleanup-english}} {{Copy-edit}} {{Copyedit}} {{Copyediting}} {{Gcheck}} {{Grammar}} {{Grammar check}} {{Spacing}} {{Spelling}} {{Repetition}}...

Smsarmad (talk). Self nom at 20:57, 27 May 2012 (UTC) The article needs copyediting.--Carabinieri (talk) 11:55, 28 May 2012 (UTC) Copy editing completed...

removal of some bloat, Furcifer bifidus is too small at 1076 bytes. It is also in need of some copyediting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:48, 16 November 2012 (UTC)...

original hook over ALT1. No copyvio issues, though I have done some copyediting. It's fine by me and certainly a topic I had no idea on. Raymie (t •...

04:51, 14 March 2013 (UTC) Your edits were good. Stuff I should have caught while copyediting. Thank you. Gamaliel (talk) 15:33, 14 March 2013 (UTC)...

(talkallam) 13:50, 21 May 2024 (UTC) Alessandro57 can you clarify what kind of copyediting you're looking for. I'm guessing you're looking for a level of prose...

but let me know if it needs more copyediting. Thanks! 001Jrm (talk) 22:17, 17 May 2015 (UTC) I went ahead and copyedited the page for English grammar and...

me! Fuzchia (talk) 00:18, 25 November 2015 (UTC) This article needs copyediting for English grammar before it can appear on the main page. Note unintelligible...

above per suggestions from Smsarmad. Recent edits on 3 October were copyediting, which have improved readability in some spots, have not affected DYK...

23:07, 4 October 2018 (UTC) Hi, I came by to promote this, and did some copyediting and formatting of references. I noted one dead link (footnote 8). Yoninah...

Overall: All hooks seem ok. My favourite is ALT2. I've done some minor copyediting of the article's text. Bahnfrend (talk) 05:40, 29 December 2021 (UTC)...

nomination. --evrik (talk) 13:43, 6 April 2022 (UTC) It appears that copyediting and other edits have been accomplished. Is this nomination good to go...

according to the source provided) The article needs a little bit of copyediting, too much small paragraphs, not all paragraphs have at least one source...

confirm this). Earwig mostly catches quotes. No textual issues; did some copyediting. Good to go. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:30, 15 August 2022 (UTC)...

here. Once the article has been fully copyedited, the nomination can resume. Both hooks could use a bit of copyediting as well (the original hook is not at...

ミラP 15:56, 18 February 2020 (UTC) Thank you for your reviewing. Requested copyediting was done. I accept ALT1. CeeGee 17:33, 18 February 2020 (UTC)...

believe I might be considered to be a bit too involved after my recent copyediting of the article. G S Palmer (talk • contribs) 00:09, 26 October 2014 (UTC)...

policy. Well-written. Great hook, especially ALT1, but needs a little copyediting how about: "... that the Guardian called the 2015 Bangkok Half Marathon...

but it does not quite succeed in doing so in an interesting way. Some copyediting is however needed before this is ready for the WP:Main page. This is...

(talk) 01:53, 7 June 2016 (UTC) I'm sorry, the entire article needs copyediting. I just listed a few examples above. Just starting the article, we come...

just a quick glance, I see that the article is in desperate need of copyediting. The very first sentence is a mess. After seeing that, I skipped to the...

That's not a biggie so I will give this a sign off :) (also; the article could do with a little copyediting) --Errant (chat!) 13:38, 2 May 2012 (UTC)...

just a little more copyediting and it will be good to go. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 10:35, 24 July 2022 (UTC) Copyedited a bit more, anything...

Doesn’t seem to be a usable image which is a shame. I took the liberty of copyediting a bit of the bio as it looked a bit strange. Hook is within policy and...

appropriate expansion, it needs some serious massaging for wikilinking, basic copyediting (e.g. wikipedia style for headers and tone), as well as bottom-of-article...

topic, long/neutral enough, adequate sourcing, though it needs a bit of copyediting (there were a few run-on sentences). However, I have a problem with the...

16:15, 15 December 2011 (UTC) The article needs a certain amount of copyediting, which I'm in the process of doing. I'll flag it up here when it's done...

article has been copyedited a bit now. Shall I consider the review again with the new ALTs now? Or are we waiting for more copyediting? @Alessandro57:...

stating that it comes from the Library of Congress collection. I did some copyediting.  Kiefer.Wolfowitz 13:31, 14 August 2011 (UTC) Comment: We can't use...

checks out too. I see places here and there where it could use some copyediting, I will pitch in and fix a few things here and there for you, but I would...

enough and long enough and the hook is appropriately sourced. I have done a little copyediting on the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:18, 4 March 2012 (UTC)...

such close proximity. I also removed a stray "and that..." during my copyediting, which you may wish to address. Overall, nice job, and thanks for creating...

@Dodger67: Expected any comment from you regarding the article after copyediting. CeeGee 11:38, 29 June 2021 (UTC) @Dodger67: Typical behavior of you...

07:49, 6 September 2015 (UTC) Reinstating my tick for ALT1 now that the copyediting issue has been addressed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:22, 6 September 2015 (UTC)...

have reviewed this one, but instead I found it in need of rewriting and copyediting, so I did that instead and no longer consider myself to be neutral enough...

at 18:54, 16 July 2017 (UTC). This article is in substantial need of copyediting. I started to work on it but decided that the prose and concepts were...

(talk) 01:04, 12 February 2013 (UTC) The article still desperately needs copyediting by a native English speaker.--Carabinieri (talk) 10:11, 12 February 2013...

is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. I have done a little copyediting to the article. QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:07, 10 June 2018...

worth fixing before the article gets a final tick. I did some minor copyediting. Hope that's OK. NinaGreen (talk) 00:59, 20 March 2013 (UTC) There were...

03:41, 8 December 2015 (UTC) Length is fine. However, there are some copyediting issues that need to dealth with. Some language clean-up is needed. Also...

view the English is of a good standard and does not require further copyediting. The hook is appropriately sourced and the image appropriately licensed...

morning. Article now meets size requirements; I've done a bit of grammar copyediting on both the hook and article. I'm not 100% sure the websites used as...

isn't a very good hook. And in any case, this can't continue until the copyediting is done, because right now there are several grammatical issues. Narutolovehinata5...

for vassals to receive a tribute. Also, this article really needs some copyediting.--Carabinieri (talk) 13:53, 5 April 2012 (UTC) Am I wrong or your comment...

sentence needs copyediting. I might just sort that bit out myself. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:07, 11 March 2024 (UTC) CeeGee, I have copyedited the article...

Self-nominated at 13:41, 22 May 2022 (UTC). Overall: I've done a little copyediting of the article for readability and some minor copy vio issues other than...

geographically ignorant? Otherwise good to go. Thanks a lot for your reciew and copyediting. Yes, I agree with you, and added "Turkey" to the hook. Regards.CeeGee...

2019 (UTC) Overall: Sorry for the delay, Fkbowen. After a little bit of copyediting, I believe this article is good to go. Nice work! Michael Barera (talk)...

Bolter21, nor I, have English as our mother tongue, I strongly welcome any copyediting by native speakers. As for content; I´m sorry, I don´t see that Musheirifa...

As usual, I have done some minor copyediting. All three hooks appear to be accurate. ALT2, which I have also copyedited slightly, is my favourite; the others...

see on the Talk page that it's nominated as a good article. I did some copyediting. One small problem with the hook: when I downloaded the reference for...

so much indeed for your time. I added missing refs and did some minor copyediting. I hope I did not forget anything. CeeGee 11:05, 8 January 2021 (UTC)...

was copyediting done to please LlywelynII. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:58, 4 December 2014 (UTC) Well, that's ALT "2 " and "3", yes, some copyediting was...

was injured? ZappaOMati 22:31, 13 December 2012 (UTC) ALT3 I prefer. Copyediting may be need, but I hope that's minor. --George Ho (talk) 22:38, 13 December...

bit there. Raymie (t • c) 17:21, 6 January 2020 (UTC) OK. Thanks for copyediting. It is fine now. Good to go. CeeGee 17:28, 6 January 2020 (UTC) @CeeGee:...

length and the hook fact has an inline citation. I have done some more copyediting and I think the plot text is OK now. I do not believe you need to do...

think that each school banned the book individually. Overall: Minor copyediting for consistency here and there is possible, but everything is alright...

wouldn't necessarily make sense to all readers. I will also do some minor copyediting and come back with other comments. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 06:44, 8...

mainly about the chemical itself. Overall, the article still needs some copyediting and better matching of sources to text in several places. Boud (talk)...

there are still many other ways you can contribute to the project: copyediting, compiling lists of recordings, picture and sound clip researching, etc...

source accepted in good faith. However, the article seriously needs some copyediting for context, as currently Iqbal isn't even properly introduced. QPQ requirement...

unclaimed since 1929? @Crisco 1492: I am proposing another hook after copyediting the article again.--Skr15081997 (talk) 12:44, 9 July 2014 (UTC) I like...

30 August 2012 (UTC) New enough and long enough. I have done a little copyediting. The image is appropriately licensed and the hook is appropriately sourced...

03:51, 10 November 2015 (UTC). Comment: this really needs some serious copyediting. There are numerous confusing and run-on statements throughout the text...

AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:44, 24 July 2024 (UTC) Thanks for copyediting Majhi. I have copyedited the election article now. You can check it and do minor ce...

00:38, 2 May 2017 (UTC) @ComputerJA: Thanks for the review, and for copyediting/fixing issues in the article. As you suggested, I've fixed the source...

There were some things I found ambiguous in the prose and I did a little copyediting. The page is neutral and supported by in-line citations. Earwig didn't...

a beautiful work of art. Thanks for creating it! I tried to do some copyediting but did not find anything that I could improve. I was going to remove...

concerned. Farang Rak Tham (Talk) 23:57, 6 March 2018 (UTC) Thanks for the copyediting and the suggestion on the hook phrasing - I have changed it accordingly...

editing has been done since January 3. The article needs wikifying and copyediting. Only one source is cited, and the page remains a stub. Could the nominator...

least without substantial qualification). The first hook also needs some copyediting, viz.: ... that excavations at Tel Qiri in northern Israel have discovered...

time on this! Insomesia (talk) 09:59, 15 June 2012 (UTC) I just made a copyediting pass. I'm neutral on this one, and someone else ought to make the call...

prose, interesting, not plagiarized, though it could do with a bit of copyediting before it hits the main page.--Wehwalt (talk) 17:06, 28 March 2015 (UTC)...

that there was already someone who copyedited it. 001Jrm (talk) 18:52, 9 June 2015 (UTC) Sorry, it needs more copyediting. The third example cited above is...

an interesting and properly sourced hook. The article text could use copyediting but that's not a big enough issue to block DYK, and the wording looks...

current political scandal. I have taken the liberty of doing some minor copyediting. I don't think a QPQ is necessary since neither author has any DYK credits...

articles seem neutral and I detected no policy issues. I did a little copyediting to clear up some typos but the other points mentioned by SojoQ are outside...

Overall: Thanks for creating this article, Upjav! I've done quite a bit of copyediting, but I think that this article passes the DYK requirements. Nice work...

(though could be more thorough), no image to look at. I've done some copyediting at the article, and I've asked some folks about formatting the precise...

sources are all in Romanian (although the article could use a little copyediting - everything is very comprehensible though). I like the original hook...

BlueMoonset (talk) 14:48, 31 May 2016 (UTC) Review: Overall: I did some copyediting and added links to most of the journal articles that didn't have them...

itself might need some work: the article at the very least needs some copyediting due to grammatical errors. In addition, much of the "Release and reception"...

a well written article with only very minor issues. I did some minor copyediting to the article and the hook. A couple paragraphs need citations, which...

Spanish corvette Tornado • Richelieu-class battleship (for content, not copyediting) Requested articles Type 988 Radar • Type 992 Radar • MSC-218-class minesweeper...

|user={{subst:REVISIONUSER}} |date={{subst:date}} }} |user= The name of the user who copyedited the article, without linking or including the User: prefix. Use {{subst:REVISIONUSER}}...

review this. Please be patient - it may take a while because it needs copyediting (but not content change). Storye book (talk) 17:09, 30 December 2023...

policy except an unsourced statement in the intro. The article also needs copyediting, and there are many bare urls in the sourcing that need fixing. The article...

to travel guides, but better too many than too few.) I did some minor copyediting and renamed the article to title case. Hook is okay, but allow me to...

captivating irony... —Gaff ταλκ 15:40, 30 October 2014 (UTC) I have done some copyediting on this article and a new reviewer is now needed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:23...

preferred but and I know its written in an iffy way. Any suggestions for copyediting? Improved to Good Article status by Panini! (talk). Self-nominated at...

17:00, 2 February 2021 (UTC) @Gerda Arendt: Thank you very much for the copyediting as well. I followed your recommendations. CeeGee 17:19, 2 February 2021...

11:41, 26 November 2014 (UTC). I've fixed a few things and done some copyediting, but in general it looks fine. Length and newness are OK. However, sourcing...

enough and the image is in the public domain. I have done a bit more copyediting and would go for ALT1 as being more interesting. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:36...

Mehediabedin (talk). Self-nominated at 19:56, 19 September 2022 (UTC). I am copyediting this article, as requested on my talk. Here is a suggested hook :) ALT1...

is offline. (As a note, I'd like to suggest that you look at my minor copyediting changes to see a few areas where your English needed a bit more revision...

article.Georgejdorner (talk) 16:41, 15 November 2014 (UTC) I did some copyediting to remove the close paraphrasing. Yoninah (talk) 20:09, 15 November 2014...

Drmies (talk) 22:51, 13 November 2021 (UTC) Hi Drmies, thank you for the copyediting that you did, I appreciate it. I removed that promotional bit that you...

Press description might be a bit of a primary source. I've done some copyediting in the "Reception" section and removed a newspaper quote that seemed...

19:01, 29 January 2018 (UTC) Hi, I came by to promote this, and did some copyediting on the article. I added some citation needed tags to facts and wonder...

out, no apparent copyvios, no QPQ needed (first DYK). Did some minor copyediting to the article. Whether they are first cousins or second cousins they...

nominator; no QPQ needed. This should be ready to go. I did some light copyediting in one section, but nothing major. Raymie (t • c) 03:42, 21 September...

first, but only on aesthetic grounds. Hook is fine. I recommend a good copyediting, which shouldn't affect appearance in DYK. I also suggest expanding the...

read the article (and it's not an incredibly high number either). Minor copyediting, let me know if there are any issues. Otherwise, ALT1 is good to go.—Bagumba...

boring to me, so I'm only interested in approving ALT1. I did light copyediting to the page and to ALT1 and added a link to ALT1 as well. Hook fact checks...

from a redirect, long enough article, QPQ done, no apparent copyvios, copyediting done by various editors since creation it seems, hook cited and verified...

Recreation section; not a problem for DYK, but might be worth more general copyediting): "are name" should be "are named". Additionally, the "see also" links...

26 August 2019 (UTC) @BlueMoonset: Doing the second review right now, copyediting Samuel Charache and reading the sources. (I only submitted the nom like...

June and meets the length requirement (but I'll reassess that part once copyediting has been done). Earwig reveals no copyvio and I didn't spot any instances...

copyvio issues. Hook length is okay at 142 characters. I've done a little copyediting on the hook text, two changes for grammar and one because I think 'viewed'...

and there are sufficient citations for the topic. I've done some minor copyediting. The second reference may need to be fixed; when I tried it it didn't...

information about the shooting location. The article could use some further copyediting, and the lead could make a quick mention of the plot and the reception...

paragraph. In addition, both the hooks and the article could use some copyediting. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:24, 20 October 2021 (UTC)...

1864 Invasion of Missouri specifically quoted multiple instances of copyediting errors in the book? Clampitt 2013 in the text ALT1:... that when Price's...

(UTC) Comment Hook makes little sense, and the article needs significant copyediting too. Edwardx (talk) 19:19, 4 September 2016 (UTC) Reply. Edwardx I think...

further review, the description section could use some wikification and copyediting with linking to other relative articles, "then" is used in place when...

Belle (talk) 23:49, 16 June 2014 (UTC) Thank you, Belle for kindly copyediting the article. It is acceptable now, and although you have questioned the...

(UTC). Policy compliance: Adequate sourcing: Neutral: - It needs some copyediting Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: Image...

has promise but could still use some copyediting. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 07:51, 22 August 2020 (UTC) I copyedited the article. None of the alts are really...

neutral and I detected no copyright or plagiarism issues. I have done some copyediting. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:38, 9 July 2019 (UTC)...

possible for it. AGF on the offline source Karr. No textual issues. Minor copyediting of adjective length distance in hook. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 02:13...

the link for the text of the full deal to find it. Text could use some copyediting. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 21:25, 6 May 2021 (UTC) M1nhm I was going to promote...

sandwiches to eachother and so on. @NearEMPTiness: thank you. I did even more copyediting to move away from the source. It is unclear to me what drying the "centers"...

second hook is a little obscure. As usual, I have carried out some minor copyediting as well as the review. Bahnfrend (talk) 09:06, 22 October 2022 (UTC)...

to contribute! Whether you can help with formatting, adding sources, copyediting, or simply watching articles. Every bit helps. Just copy and this to...

|user={{subst:REVISIONUSER}} |date={{subst:date}} }} |user= The name of the user who copyedited the article, without linking or including the User: prefix. Use {{subst:REVISIONUSER}}...

article contains numerous typos and errors. I have tagged it as needing copyediting. Hook eligibility: Cited: Interesting: - n Overall: Current DYK guidelines...

enough, adequately footnoted, and appears to be free of copyvio concerns. Thanks to Yoninah for copyediting. --Orlady (talk) 21:01, 9 February 2014 (UTC)...

request, please given User:7&6=thirteen credit for this DYK nomination as well for his copyediting. Thanks.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 20:08, 16 March 2017 (UTC)...

present. Image is freely licensed (GODL). Hook facts check out. Did some copyediting and added more categories. No textual issues. Sammi Brie (she/her • t...

apartments? Other: QPQ is done, no image to look at. I've done some copyediting at the article. Would another reviewer please accept or revise my proposed...

--GDuwenTell me! 22:46, 17 July 2014 (UTC) Thank you. I also did some copyediting, and added a line from the source. I think ALT1 is the better hook; the...

for the GOCE. --Mhhossein talk 06:42, 11 April 2022 (UTC) @Mhhossein: copyediting done. --evrik (talk) 03:45, 14 April 2022 (UTC) good to go with the proposed...

unquestionably long enough, extremely well-sourced, QPQ done. Article needs copyediting, as there are several grammatical errors: missing (or rogue) punctuation...

undue (especially the gay foster home controversy). Needed to do some copyediting. Approve for June 19 — consider possibly integrating a "designed by Ben...

in April, that's half a year ago. (Aside from that, the article needs copyediting for English prose quality, quite a few grammar error, up to and including...

18 October 2013 (UTC). New and long enough article. Hook check out. Copyediting done. The hook, however, can not be promoted with clarification needed...

publication, which falls short of WP:1R. The article also needs general copyediting and restructuring, especially the placing of photos and subheads. Large...

exactly where the quote ends. have added cn tags accordingly and done some copyediting. Not a major point, but in "at about 6:30 in the morning" 6:30 in which...

sources. Let me know if I need to change or edit some more. Thanks for copyediting and reviewing. :) 001Jrm (talk) 06:23, 29 December 2014 (UTC) Thank you...

concerned about the language in the article - it could probably use some copyediting before the front page. Also, the entire career section is uncited. Juxlos...

I did not notice any copyvio problems with this page. I did a little copyediting. The page was nominated on the day it first entered the mainspace, but...

27 December 2021 (UTC) @Sammi Brie: Thanks a lot for the review (and copyediting)! I moved the ref tags from right after the authors' name to the end...

do it. Any takers?--Ishtar456 (talk) 12:09, 25 March 2012 (UTC) Some copyediting has been done, and quotations are now proper blockquotes. So that should...

I did mention we needed a QPQ but completely forgot when I did more copyediting. Yes, please feel free to provide one. I appreciate the help. MX (✉ •...

Beijing's gold can be mentioned in the infobox. Have done some minor copyediting. I personally am skeptical about mentioning awards that don’t have their...

(UTC) Moves completed (including this nomination page and corresponding copyediting of its content to match).--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO...

SkywalkerPL (talk) 23:26, 2 August 2015 (UTC) Thank you. I did some more copyediting. Please let me know if it meets your approval. Yoninah (talk) 21:51,...

sections? Additionally, the criticism section on the final needs some copyediting. ViperSnake151  Talk  23:30, 17 March 2015 (UTC) @ViperSnake151: done...

initial review, and approved it. Yoninah subsequently felt that some copyediting was needed and the hook citation was not done properly (Gfosankar thought...

about 50-60 words short. Can this be expanded? (Also, some subsequent copyediting reduced this further to 645 words). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus|...

Thank you for resolving the hook concerns, but the article issues and copyediting concerns remain unaddressed. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions)...

long enough, neutral and no apparent copyvio problems found. Done some copyediting. Hooks fact checks out. QPQ is also done. Good to go with ALT2a. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§...

(talk) 18:40, 5 July 2019 (UTC) Comment Article needs some amount of copyediting. Some sentences seem abrupt or don't have a meaning at all, particularly...

Mentoz86 (talk) 16:50, 23 January 2012 (UTC) Done, along with some minor copyediting. Nyttend (talk) 18:23, 23 January 2012 (UTC)  Done Now every sentance...

RRD (talk) 10:57, 5 April 2019 (UTC)  Done Thank you also for your copyediting. CeeGee 11:16, 5 April 2019 (UTC) Newly created article, article over...

--v/r - TP 18:52, 11 October 2016 (UTC) Thank you TParis (and EEng for copyediting the hook). Good to go, on the assumption that your DYK review will be...

(talk) 06:32, 27 August 2012 (UTC) Sure, sounds good. Thanks for the copyediting.:) --SGCM (talk) 06:38, 27 August 2012 (UTC) Good to go with the new...

online reference. Hook is interesting, but I think it needs some minor copyediting (grammar). Oceanh (talk) 20:17, 29 May 2013 (UTC) I don't think this...

2014 (UTC) I apologize; I read the whole article through, making minor copyediting and linking changes, and found that it did read very well. Restoring...

Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy, although it needs copyediting. QPQ met. Hook is the right length, cited, and isn't negative. My only...

This is particularly important in a medical article. I will do some copyediting for grammar. EricEnfermero HOWDY! 02:38, 17 December 2013 (UTC) Comment...

source. The major issue, however, is that the article is in dire need of copyediting. The tone to me at least seems strange and doesn't feel like a Wikipedia...

checks out in terms of length and citation. The first hook should be copyedited to ...that while the standard guitar-tuning has one major third amid four...

necessary); until this is done, the DYK should not pass, and some additional copyediting would be useful. I'll be putting a couple of queries on the Talk page...

2022 (UTC) @Mary Mark Ockerbloom: I should add that I did some minor copyediting for MoS kinds of things. And that it was a very interesting article and...

discussion.-Nizil (talk) 04:05, 13 March 2019 (UTC) @Royroydeb:, after some copyediting, the article fell short of the 2480 figure (2224 now). I request you...

2000 characters of prose. The tone is OK (though I've done a little copyediting). I'm a little concerned about a few sources. [1] does not appear to...

probably you might do a little bit of math. Also, I have done a bit of copyediting for the article. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 15:44, 17 February 2021 (UTC)...

Copyvio Detector" reports no significant text similarities. Article needs copyediting (see e.g. ... died died ... under "Background"). The hook is well-formatted...

(talk) 19:51, 14 February 2020 (UTC) Thanks for reviewing! QPQ and some copyediting done, links added to explain the jargon terms. Alex2006 (talk) 10:39...

time of nomination, the article reads fine though could use some light copyediting. This might seem daft, but the hook fact is not explicitly stated in...

Everything is either cited or introduces a heavily cited table. Light copyediting of hook. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 03:49, 28 July 2022 (UTC) @Sammi...

modified it as ALT1a (and also modified the article, along with some copyediting) because Sarkozy's second wife did not have the name Cécilia Attias until...

however. Article seems in decent shape, although might need a round of copyediting; it's presentable, but some of the sentences are phrased a little clunkily...

season" which may be too similar. However: The article needs a lot of copyediting - "Continued violence discourage" is not proper grammar, for example...

Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:30, 26 November 2018 (UTC) I did some copyediting. Philafrenzy (talk) 13:43, 26 November 2018 (UTC) Some more suggestions:...

Miyagawa (talk). Self nom at 20:41, 7 December 2011 (UTC) I did some copyediting to make up the 50 characters for a 5x expansion. Age, length, hook all...

Lebanon: Jadawel. ISBN 9786144181614. Reviewed: Comment: Feel free to copyediting. Created by Ruwaym (talk). Self-nominated at 18:41, 14 August 2022 (UTC)...

perception rather than its neighbour cognition). I have done a little copyediting - such things as a few additional links and correcting the capitalisation...

met, QPQ waived as no credits are outstanding. I've made some minor copyediting and removed "reportedly" from one sentence, as one of the sources already...

me! <3) (talk) 11:34, 23 July 2014 (UTC). This article needs a full copyediting. I've tagged it as such. If I understand the hook correctly, the idea...

status verified. No obvious problems with article. (I've done some minor copyediting to remove unnecessary hatnotes.) QPQ exempt. Half of the hook is cited...

we are good here. It is new enough and long enough. (I've done some copyediting to reduce clunky text.) 2008, 2009, 2011: All new enough and long enough...

section this would be very useful. Additionally the article needs to be copyedited for typos. EagerToddler39 (talk) 00:43, 15 January 2014 (UTC) It might...

WP:NFOOTY as they've played for Turkey senior team, and I have done a bit of copyediting. The Career statistics section is sourced to the Maclar (matches) section...

Thanks, Evrik. Could you suggest a tighter hook and explain what sort of copyediting is needed? Dahn (talk) 06:32, 4 April 2020 (UTC) Alt1 ... that Moldavian...

Self-nominated at 10:27, 20 February 2019 (UTC). @Cat's Tuxedo: I would suggest copyediting the hook as it's a bit confusing or difficult to read (I understand the...

New enough and long enough. QPQ not needed (2 credits). I've done some copyediting to sourcing. It's unusual that a paragraph not ending in an inline citation...

2012 (UTC) : The article is sufficiently long, though it could do with copyediting to remove minor grammatical errors and awkward constructions. The hook...

short sentences, which are a bit clunky. That could resolved by some copyediting. All we need is a trimmed hook, and that minor copyedit. --BrownHairedGirl...

Japanese-American actor was usually cast as a villain? The article also needs copyediting. I tried to smooth out the Summary section, but didn't do the rest. Yoninah...

the offline sources used by the author I would hate to do any further copyediting of the original material because I cannot understand the meaning of quite...

(UTC) I came by to promote this, noted the peacock comment, and did some copyediting on the article to bring it up to Wikipedia standards. I added several...

reviewing, list issues in the review; don't edit the article beyond basic copyediting (typos, punctuation etc) i.e. don't change content, otherwise you may...

appears to be the nominator's preference (although it will need some copyediting). As all the new hooks are fine to me, I will leave the final choice...

February 2020 (UTC) Hey Paparazzzi, I have completed my QPQ and done some copyediting. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 08:59, 2 February 2020 (UTC) @CAPTAIN MEDUSA:...

tradition, or more of a sub-culture. I'm not sure, maybe this just needs copyediting.--Carabinieri (talk) 18:24, 5 April 2012 (UTC) Even in Portuguese it...

[2] does say grew up in Harlem, New York from 1952. It turns out some copyediting may be required, maybe submit a request at WP:GOCE. One example: change...

2022 (UTC). @Orygun: New enough and long enough. QPQ present. Did some copyediting (I strongly suggest looking into clipping your Newspapers.com citations...

(UTC). I don't think anyone should get a DYK credit just for a bit of copyediting. Credits should be for people who make a substantial contribution to...

The hook is cited to and included in the source; I did some needed copyediting. One thing needs resolution before this nomination can continue: there...

currently 88 characters short of prose for consideration, and I do see some copyediting issues which I have tried to fix. It is new enough, however. As to the...

in Swedish so I was unable to consider copyright issues. I did some copyediting of the article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:33, 29 February 2016 (UTC) @BabbaQ:...

(UTC). This article has several unreferenced sections. It also needs copyediting. Furthermore, the website cited in the first footnote, which appears...

interesting article. Within policy, but article could use a little copyediting (still some broken sentences) and precision when referring to things...

article. Before I go on for a more complete review, please do some minor copyediting of the article. There are many locations where an extra space is needed...

Northamerica1000 I have made a few changes to the text, but there is minimal copyediting I can do that will change any of this. The names are what the names are...

Yerpo Eh? 06:44, 30 March 2012 (UTC) PS: the society's article needs copyediting because there are a couple of awkward passages. I'd rather not touch...

April 2022 (UTC) Overall: Articles passes, though it could use some copyediting for flow. --evrik (talk) 14:45, 29 April 2022 (UTC) Offering an Alt for...

1 May 2024 (UTC) @Cypp0847 and Juxlos: I have tagged the article for copyediting, as there are grammar-related issues throughout the article (tenses,...

the article itself, but I just think the hooks themselves need some copyediting, i.e. ... that the penalty circle on a field hockey pitch isn't really...

prefer ALT0 but both are good. The article does need some very minor copyediting for style, since the way it is written is a bit essay-like. I'll leave...

14:25, 9 July 2021 (UTC) @Victuallers: Thank you for your review and copyediting. Please check the reworded hook ALT1 below? CeeGee 17:29, 10 July 2021...

a remarkable drop in abortion numbers), but I think it wil need some copyediting to make clear that it is abortions and not births that have dropped....

you. Poeticbent talk 18:23, 14 December 2012 (UTC) I did a little more copyediting and divided the copy into three clear sections. There were many other...

Everything else seems fine, SCP Foundation#Spin-off works may require more copyediting.OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 07:15, 2 May 2015 (UTC) I was...

wheelchair tennis in 2017? I like ALT1. I usually remove "also" when copyediting but here, with a single sentence, the "also" gives a clear signal that...

@Nizil Shah:. RRD (talk) 14:16, 1 April 2019 (UTC) I have done some copyediting. Reassessment done and issues resolved. I did a minor correction in ALT1...

it? :P I have fixed the bare URL's, and read through the article and copyedited. Will read through one more time later today, to see if it is anything...

simply state that the whole article needs copyediting. Could you please at least suggest where it should be copyedited, or point out what the issues are (grammar...

--SupernovaExplosion Talk 10:41, 13 March 2012 (UTC) Thank you. I did some more copyediting and added a section about auction sales. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 14:19...

American racism and McCarthyism for a Chinese daily newspaper? Thanks for copyediting and adding new sources. I read the sources and they don't really cast...

be taken from the article to which readers are being directed. (2) No copyediting was done. Fund raiser is not the correct noun - remove the space. (3)...

It has few problems. The article has grammatical mistakes and needs copyediting. I will also make few notes in article to clarify. BTW, the topic is...

actually says that it was the Augustinians. Also the article probably needs copyediting by a native English speaker.--Carabinieri (talk) 06:13, 20 October 2014...

in the article Interesting: Other problems: - Hook needs reworking, copyediting Overall: --evrik (talk) 03:06, 14 May 2020 (UTC) @Evrik: Please, see...

added references to ends of paragraphs as you requested. (and done some copyediting) Graeme Bartlett (talk) 04:56, 5 December 2019 (UTC) Then this article...

ALT 1 hook; the other one looks to be a little long. Needs some minor copyediting but otherwise ready. Neutralitytalk 22:30, 7 October 2016 (UTC) I agree...

31 May 2022 (UTC) ALTs 0 and 1 seem good to go, although I did some copyediting of ALT0. Nice work, Kingoflettuce! theleekycauldron (talk • contribs)...

closed. (Looking through the article, there are places where it could use copyediting.) BlueMoonset (talk) 23:52, 15 August 2019 (UTC) OK. I edited the article...

paraphrasing that was of concern, rather than copyvio. Looking again after your copyediting, it should now pass muster, but close paraphrasing is always going to...

- but see above, some work needed on the hook. I will try to help by copyediting the phrasing in the article, but the hook will need some tweaking. Looking...

2019 (UTC) Mostly everything looks in order, but there are still some copyediting issues that need to be taken care of: The opening sentence of the lede...

Surtsicna (talk) 23:56, 11 January 2014 (UTC) Thanks for reviewing and copyediting. I have removed "Margaret" from the hook per your suggestion. I prefer...

footnote, so that needs to be fixed. Finally, the article needs some minor copyediting as I can see some grammar and spelling errors. Narutolovehinata5 (talk...

final part of the hook suggested above. I think the article would need copyediting, and a new hook proposing. Relentlessly (talk) 22:43, 7 February 2015...

"gallery". Upon a second look at the article, there's quite a bit of copyediting that is needed; passages like "the fashion had moved on with the time...

with almost 1650 characters. Recent enough. Hook fine. I did a little copyediting, but prose is fine. I looked at some of the sources, and it looks like...

Beginning review. Article is new enough and long enough. Did some light copyediting. Should it be "Coffee production in the Democratic Republic of the Congo"...

non-US bios to fill out the prep sets. But your articles all need light copyediting to bring them up to form. What are "long years" (in the first paragraph...

copyedit to the Guild of Copy Editors, which is currently holding a copyediting drive through the end of the month, so it could receive an independent...

large maintenance tags on it. The article would also likely need some copyediting. Finally, the hook is fairly bland and not very eye catching. The article...

detailed. Thrakkx (talk) 03:48, 22 October 2024 (UTC) @Thrakkx: Thanks for copyediting the article and for reviewing this DYK nomination. I agree that your...

I just did a bit of copyediting and Earwig just catches a quotation to have been copied. I would be glad to help with copyediting on this article. Please...

source, it's a directory of books from a library in USA. And for the copyediting part, what is the main problem? Is it grammar or spelling or something...

not reviewed or checked your article, but I have noticed that it needs copyediting for Standard English. So before you enter another article for DYK, you...

references. I've gone through and done a portion myself, and some minor copyediting as well. Neutralitytalk 04:16, 20 April 2016 (UTC) Fixed. Unfortunately...

sounds like a mixture between a textbook and an essay. The article needs copyediting by someone who is well-versed in the topic. SL93 (talk) 23:00, 14 November...

new enough to mainspace and long enough. QPQ present. I have done some copyediting and have a few suggestions even as I approve this: The last couple paragraphs...

fun to review! New enough and long enough. QPQ present. Did a bit of copyediting. No textual issues. As a quirky (the hook fact is kind of the whole article...

wouldn't feel right in taking credit for this, all I did was a bit of copyediting, in addition to adding a bunch of convert templates, I don't think one...

when you have addressed the issues; it looks like you have done some copyediting, and that should have been mentioned here. Ruslik0, please let us know...

constructive comments. I've added quite a bit more content and done some copyediting. I hope you will find the revised article clearer and more detailed,...

--1l2l3k (talk) 15:41, 27 August 2018 (UTC) Thank you. I did some more copyediting for English grammar; please check that it looks ok. The one English source...

but ALT 2 is good for April Fools, and ALT 1 might need some little copyediting by a promoter, so I will leave this hook issue to the promoter of DYK...

it is not strictly part of the DYK criteria, IMO, the article needs copyediting for grammar and clarity. Anaxial (talk) 07:42, 25 September 2012 (UTC)...

Nayanar, and Satti Nayanar are too short, and the additions generally need copyediting. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:28, 7 January 2015 (UTC) Since all of these articles...

Chronicle and BorgQueen: This is an interesting article, but it needs a good copyediting before it is ready for the main page. Sojourner in the earth (talk) 12:04...

1600–1100 BC)? Thanks for fixing the copyvio issues. I've done a bit more copyediting to fix a few remaining sentences. (Earwig still reports a few alarming...

(talk) at 17:41, 6 May 2012 (UTC) Several issues: The article needs copyediting. The lede states that the organization's goal is to "Facilitate the participation...

Scot 18:12, 27 May 2015 (UTC) The article doesn't need a rewrite, but copyediting is definitely needed. Also, is the article subject really notable enough...

Regards, Darwin Naz (talk) 12:16, 20 October 2020 (UTC) @Darwin Naz: Copyedited. Please recheck. Thanks. CeeGee 10:18, 21 October 2020 (UTC) @CeeGee:...

25 September 2017 (UTC) I not only reviewed it but actually did some copyediting to address my specific concerns. Plus, where exactly would you link this...

January so new enough, long enough (1961). The article needs some serious copyediting, there are numerous spelling mistakes and grammatical errors. So I can't...

October 2021 (UTC) Maybe I'll write a new alt. I don't know about the copyediting part though. Maybe I'll have to request one. TootsieRollsAddict (talk...

credits for the authors whom I think contributed the most (i.e. not just copyediting) Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:28, 10 November 2011 (UTC) I would prefer "as...

27 July 2015 (UTC) Copyedited ALT1. George Ho (talk) 21:45, 27 July 2015 (UTC) George Ho, both article and hook needed copyediting—issues still remain...

usually sing. I've also noticed that some parts of the article need copyediting, particularly the "Revivals" section where some of the tenses are improperly...