Talk:Roderigo Lopes/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 10:05, 4 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Hi, I'm Calvin999, I am reviewing this nomination.

  • to poison the Queen. → You've already said Queen Elizabeth, so I'd recommend 'her' to avoid repetition.
  • I've tried this on preview, and I think it's worth keeping "poison the Queen" just to emphasise the gravity of what he was convicted of. Not just conspiring to poison, but conspiring to poison the Queen. Just me judice of course. —  Cliftonian (talk)  18:42, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • The lead is too overly detailed for the size of the article, especially the third paragraph. I feel as though I don't need to read on because you've told me the essentials already.
  • He graduated BA under → What do you mean? He received a Bachelor of Arts?
  • and tithes in → ?
Outcome

That's it! On hold for 7 days, but I doubt you'll need that long.  — Calvin999 16:22, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks Calvin. I hope my responses are adequate. Cheers again and I hope you're well. —  Cliftonian (talk)  18:42, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, great article. Passing. 18:53, 9 August 2015 (UTC)
Thank you very much. —  Cliftonian (talk)  19:08, 9 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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