Talk:Java/to do
- A general one: expand each section (except maybe History). Sure, this should be a summary article, but currently, it is not much more than a list. Particularly demographics, language, and admin divisions.--Merbabu 08:21, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Copy edit History Section - does it give balanced attention to all areas? --Merbabu 08:21, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Expand history - consider a History of Java article to allow more detail
- Comment: although i agree in principal, the History section is probably the best section in the whole article. Can i suggest it is a lower priority for more detail? Although, of course we have to assess the quality, refs, etc. --Merbabu 08:21, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Lead - needs to be expanded see WP:LEAD
- References - lack of references for current information, remember to include references for all new material.
- Volcanism should be expanded to explain the significance of the presence (fertile soils, eruptions and effect on local beliefs and practtices) - there was one theory that Java might have been a number of island while they were in their infancy! (ie before their outpourings filled in around them) .SatuSuro 10:17, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Dry regions - just because parts of java a very wet - Gunung Kidul is a rainshadow area - so a single "climate" description is false - same as the north east side of Gunung Agung in Bali SatuSuro 10:17, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
- Changing coastline - massive erosion due to over exploitation leading to deltas and associated phenomena SatuSuro 10:17, 31 October 2006 (UTC)
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