Talk:Practice Date

Good articlePractice Date has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 1, 2010Good article nomineeListed
January 18, 2011Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Practice Date/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 01:53, 1 April 2010 (UTC) Hi. I'll be reviewing this article as part of April's GAN Backlog Elimination Log. See Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for my review style. Address the below comments; meanwhile, I've placed the article on hold. The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 01:53, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  • Does Ann have her own article? And if not, wikilink to the character's list?
  • "digs up dirt" — a bit slang-ish, wouldn't you say?
  • "an improvement over the previous week's episode, "Beauty Pageant.""

Plot

  • Again, "find any dirt": bit slangish. Same with the later uses of the word.
  • Replace the period after "problem" with a colon.
  • "he's" → "he is"
  • "awesome I am" → "how "awesome" she is."
  • I'm a bit confused: did Mark dig up dirt on himself or Jerry?

Production

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Reception

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Final say

Nice work! I'm going to go pass this. Congrats and happy editing. The Flash I am Jack's complete lack of surprise 19:05, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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